1、译林版选择性必修第一册 Unit 1 单元写作 本单元的写作任务是描写你最喜欢的食物, 这是一种描述性的作文。 写描述性的作文应 该注意以下方面: 1开头要对所要描述的东西有一个简单的介绍。 2文章的主体部分可以按照一定的顺序进行描述,如时间顺序或事件的主次等。 3结尾可以进行适当的评论或谈一谈自己的感受。 常用表达: 1.is a traditional Chinese food loved by almost all Chinese people. 2I first tried it/them when. 3It looks like. 4In my eyes,it tastes bett
2、er than any other food in the world. 5It is/They are so delicious that. 6It is (not) easy to make. 假如你是一家餐馆的经理, 请你用英语向来自国外的游客介绍一下中国的传统美食 水饺。内容包括以下几个方面: 1中国传统美食之一, 几乎人人喜爱。 2形状像古代的金锭,是财富的象征。 3制作水饺需要全家参与,代表着团圆。 注意: 1词数 80 词左右; 2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 金锭 gold ingot 审题 写作要求是写一种自己最喜欢的食物,写作时应注意下面几点: 1确定文体:这
3、是一篇说明文。写作时注意说明文的写作特点。 2主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。 3主体人称:由于是写关于自己最喜欢的食物,所以人称应该以第一、三人称为主。 谋篇 第一部分:开门见山说明自己喜欢的食物的名称并作简要的描述。 第二部分:简要介绍与自己喜欢的食物接触的经历,并对这种食物的外观、味道以及制作过 程进行描述。 第三部分:适当的评论或谈一谈自己的感受。 核心词汇 1一种传统美食_ 2形状_ 3和相似 _ 4象征_ 5合作_ 6分享某人的人生故事_ 7喜欢_ 8加入_ 1.a traditional food 2 shape 3 be similar to 4 symbolize 5 te
4、amwork6share ones life stories 7 be fond of 8join in 连词成句 1我最喜欢的食物是饺子。中国人都非常喜爱这种传统食物。 _ 2虽然当时我还只是一个孩子,我几乎吃了一大碗饺子,因为它们太好吃了。 _ 3包饺子是真正的团队合作,因此所有的家庭成员经常共同参与,在此期间他们分享彼此 的生活故事。 _ 1.My favorite food is dumplings.Chinese people love the traditional food very much. 2.Although I was a small child at that tim
5、e,I ate almost a big bowl of dumplings because they were so delicious. 3.Making dumplings is really teamwork, so all the family members often work together.During it, they share their life stories with each other. 第三步句式升级 1用过去分词作定语改写句 1。 My favorite food is a traditional food loved very much by Chin
6、ese peopledumplings. 2用 as 构成的倒装句改写句 2。 Small child as I was at that time,I ate almost a big bowl of dumplings because they were so delicious. 3用非限制性定语从句改写句 3。 Making dumplings is really teamwork,so all the family members often work together,during which they share their life stories with each other
7、. 第四步组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇 80 词左右的英语 短文。 参考范文 My favorite food is a traditional food loved very much by Chinese peopledumplings.I first tried them more than ten years ago.Small child as I was at that time,I ate almost a big bowl of dumplings because they were so delicious. The shape of
8、 a dumpling is similar to that of an ancient Chinese gold ingot,so dumplings symbolize wealth.Making dumplings is really teamwork,so all the family members often work together,during which they share their life stories with each other.In this way,making dumplings is also a symbol of union. Now more and more foreigners are fond of the taste of dumplings.