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书面表达写作技巧 审列加连美 写作第一步 审审 认真认真审题审题，分析并找，分析并找 出文章相关要素出文章相关要素 审人称审人称 审时态审时态 审格式审格式 审要点审要点 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work travel stay at home visit friends or parents work 健康很重要健康很重要, , 在学习和工作的压力在学习和工作的压力 日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假 期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，上图是他们此次的调查结次调查，上图是他们此次的调查结 果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, ,并并 提倡大家进行假日休闲。提倡大家进行假日休闲。 写作第二步 用用简单的句子或短语简单的句子或短语列出列出 文章要点。文章要点。 列列 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子或短语列出文章的要点子或短语列出文章的要点 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休倡议假日休 闲闲 stay at home work visit friends or parents travel How do people spend their vacation? Most people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. 写作第三步 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。使结构完整。 可以采取可以采取总分总总分总结构或者结构或者 总分总分结构，开头或结尾的结构，开头或结尾的 句子注意简洁，漂亮。句子注意简洁，漂亮。 加加 MostMost peoplepeople traveltravel . . SomeSome peoplepeople staystay atat home.home. SomeSome otherother peoplepeople visitvisit friendsfriends oror parents.parents. A A fewfew peoplepeople work.work. HowHow dodo peoplepeople spendspend theirtheir vacation?vacation? WeWe mademade a a surveysurvey andand herehere isis ourour surveysurvey reportreport. . ComeCome andand enjoyenjoy youryour vacation.vacation. RelaxRelax wellwell andand youllyoull workwork well.well. a nice head a nice tail a nice body How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. Most people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. Relax well and youll work well. 写作第四步 恰当运用恰当运用关联词句关联词句，使得，使得 文章层次清晰，各个部分文章层次清晰，各个部分 衔接连贯自然。衔接连贯自然。 连连 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also， some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. Relax well and youll work well. 连连 1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, As a result, 5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words 8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论表示结论: All in all, in a word 关联词 写作第五步 选好词句，选好词句，美化美化文章，在文章，在 有把握的情况下展示自己有把握的情况下展示自己 的语言功底。的语言功底。 美美 Skill One Correct your sentences We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream. once a week Saving be achieve We shouldnt eat junk food. We should keep away from the junk food. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar. Skill Two Express in different ways. Skill Two Express in different ways. If you use English often, you will learn it better. The more you use English, the better you will learn it. 美美 According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . And some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Also, some other people visit friends or parents ,they think this can make them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also, some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . And some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Also, some other people visit friends or parents ,they think this can make them relaxed . However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. Relax well and youll work well. Thank you for listening 上周三初三年上周三初三年 级组的同学进级组的同学进 行了一次体检行了一次体检 ，结果期发现，结果期发现 同学们的视力同学们的视力 下降了。请你下降了。请你 用英语向全班用英语向全班 同学报告原因同学报告原因 （如图所示）（如图所示） ，并提出倡议，并提出倡议 ：爱护我们的：爱护我们的 眼睛。眼睛。 2 3 1 12 1 4 眼睛疲劳眼睛疲劳 看电视看电视 玩电脑玩电脑 眼睛近视眼睛近视 躺着看书躺着看书 走路看书走路看书 眼睛疼痛眼睛疼痛 强光下看书强光下看书 弱光下看书弱光下看书 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准 一、评分原则：一、评分原则： 1.本题本题25分，按五个档次给分分，按五个档次给分 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属 档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，结合内容和语档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，结合内容和语 言表达，综合评定分数。言表达，综合评定分数。 3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。 4.词数少于词数少于80的，从总分中扣除的，从总分中扣除1分。分。 5.拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所属档次拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所属档次 的范围内，减去的范围内，减去1分。分。 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准 第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（25-2125-21分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了 所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行 文连贯，表达清楚。文连贯，表达清楚。 第四档（好）第四档（好）(2016(2016分）分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内 容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 第三档（一般）第三档（一般）(1511(1511分）分）基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了 一些内容，语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。一些内容，语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。 第二档（较差）第二档（较差）(106(106分）分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写 出个别要点，语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。出个别要点，语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。 第一档（差）第一档（差）(50(50分）分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内 容有关的一些单词，语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。容有关的一些单词，语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求二、各档次的给分范围和要求 Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyes, so with the time goes by, the eyesight becomes poor and poorer. Two thirds of students eyes always get tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. And a quarter of students always lie in the bed or walking while reading books, so they have become short-sighted. The others always read in strong sunlight or poor light so they have sore eyes often. Its important for us to form a good reading habit to take good care of our eyes. So lets do everything we can to protect our eyes. Passage One Boys and girls, as we know, our life is better than before. There are TV sets, computers and many modern machines. But, our modern life is harmful to our eyes too. Because two thirds of students feel their eyes tired, because of watching TV or playing computer games for a long time. And a quarter of students walk and lie in the bed while they reading. So, they become short-sighted. One twelfth of students have sore eyes. Because they read in strong light or in poor light. When I saw the numbers, I was very surprise at it. So, I hope everyone must keep a good habit to protect our eyes. We can do it! Passage Two Passage Three Boys and girls, Today we have a classmeet. This classmeet is dissincion a problem with our eyes. Two thirds of students feel their eyes tired. Because they watch TV or play computer. A quarter of students become short- sighted becasus they lie in bed or walking while read book. one twelth of students have sore eyes. because they read in strong or por light. Eyes is very important for us. Everyone knows that we are living a modern life. At the same time, we are paid little attention to protecting ourselves. Eyes, for example. From the examine result, we can know it clearly. Two thirds of students feel their eyes tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. A quarter of students became short-sighted because of lying in the bed or walking while reading. Some students read in strong light or poor light. That is why one twelfth have sore eyes. From the result, we must take good care of our eyes. If not, the eye-sight will become poorer and poorer. (by Zhou Chuanqi) Thinking back on the past three weeks, we had our eyes examined. As a result, many students eyes are bad. About two thirds of students feel eyes tired because they often watch TV or play computer games for a long time. A quarter of students are short-sighted because they are walking or lying in bed while reading books. And one twelfth of students are reading in strong or poor light. That makes their eyes sore. As we know, our eyes are very useful for us. So please protect our eyes. (by Yang Bin) 1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library. 2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all. 3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life. 4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time. 5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try me best to follow them. 6. Third , we must do lots of homework. 3 2 1 4 6 5TailHead L Letets s playplay thethe gamegame. . _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. L Letets s playplay thethe gamegame. . We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. 中考英语书面表达指导 一、一、 【书面表达的新课标要求书面表达的新课标要求】 1.根据写作要求收集、准备素材；根据写作要求收集、准备素材； 2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在老师的指导下进行修改；能独立起草短文、短信等，并在老师的指导下进行修改； 3.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系； 4.能简单描述人物或事件；能简单描述人物或事件； 5.能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。 二、二、 【书面表达能力要求书面表达能力要求】 （1）审题能力）审题能力 抓住写作要点，明确文章体裁，围绕文章中心，使用正确的时态和语法。抓住写作要点，明确文章体裁，围绕文章中心，使用正确的时态和语法。 （2）语言能力）语言能力 准确用词，合理构句。用到所学固定搭配、短语和句式，据能力使用复合句准确用词，合理构句。用到所学固定搭配、短语和句式，据能力使用复合句 （3）组织能力）组织能力 建议适当用建议适当用“逻辑词汇逻辑词汇”，增加文章的层次，使文章结构更加清晰。，增加文章的层次，使文章结构更加清晰。 （4）创新能力）创新能力 开放性或想象性。开放性或想象性。 三、三、 【步骤技巧步骤技巧】 步骤（一）审题步骤（一）审题 1)确定文章的中心人称。确定文章的中心人称。 2)确定文章的主体时态。确定文章的主体时态。 3)确定文章的格式确定文章的格式 4) 圈出关键信息，明确几个要点。圈出关键信息，明确几个要点。 步骤（二）列点步骤（二）列点 1）将信息点翻译成精准的英文短语或句子）将信息点翻译成精准的英文短语或句子 2）注意英语句法（简单句，复合句）注意英语句法（简单句，复合句 3-4 个，尤其是状语从句）个，尤其是状语从句） 3）翻译要翻意，切莫翻字句。）翻译要翻意，切莫翻字句。 4) 尽量选用有把握的词汇和句型。尽量选用有把握的词汇和句型。 5）灵活）灵活“汉译英汉译英” ，适当添、删、变。，适当添、删、变。 步骤（三）添加步骤（三）添加 1) 补全题目中给出不完整的句子。补全题目中给出不完整的句子。 2) 添加内容使文章充实，应用各种复合句和辨证扩充。添加内容使文章充实，应用各种复合句和辨证扩充。 例如：状语从句可以例如：状语从句可以 讲明事情发生的时间、条件、原因、结果等；定语从句可以修饰文章中的关讲明事情发生的时间、条件、原因、结果等；定语从句可以修饰文章中的关 键字；辨证扩充就是指列出事情的优点的同时也可以扩充想象有何种缺点。键字；辨证扩充就是指列出事情的优点的同时也可以扩充想象有何种缺点。 3）注意添加内容需和文章照应并过渡自然。）注意添加内容需和文章照应并过渡自然。 步骤（四）连接步骤（四）连接 1) 为列出的要点合理排序。为列出的要点合理排序。 2）用符合逻辑的连词或副词串联句子以及段落。）用符合逻辑的连词或副词串联句子以及段落。 常用的关联词有：常用的关联词有： 1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, As a result, 5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words 8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论表示结论: All in all, in a word 步骤（五）美化步骤（五）美化 1）合理分段，增加逻辑和层次。）合理分段，增加逻辑和层次。 2）在关键信息前添加一些好词作定语。）在关键信息前添加一些好词作定语。 3）文中重复出现的内容尽量使用不同的句型或词汇来表达。）文中重复出现的内容尽量使用不同的句型或词汇来表达。 4）尽量美化首尾句）尽量美化首尾句 ，必要时可使用谚语。，必要时可使用谚语。 5）注意书写字迹需美观。）注意书写字迹需美观。 【例题解析例题解析】 详见课件详见课件 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的 身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，如图是他身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，如图是他 们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查 报告报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork