1、A LetterA Letter for Advice for Advice When you meet some problems in your life, who do you usually turn to for help? Your parents, teachers, friends or strangers? Why some people prefer to ask for advice from strangers? What is Worried Friends problem? What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worrie
2、d Friend? Do you think Susan Luos suggestions is useful? Can you think of other useful suggestions? Summarize the structure of the letter. What are necessary parts of a letter of advice? A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s) D. I think my adv
3、ice will help. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s) D. I think my advice will help. You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. A
4、. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s) D. I think my advice will help. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s) D. I think my
5、 advice will help. I recommend thathis behavior. It is not unusualworld. But spendingin life. Some studentsfamily. I thinknew hobbies. Why nottogether? A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s) D. I think my advice will help. I am sure he will li
6、sten to you, since you are his good friend. Can you think of more expressions to express suggestions? Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen. Evaluationscores 1.Are all the parts o
7、f a letter included and organized in good order？ 12345 2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice？ 12345 3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions？ 12345 4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? 12345 5.Is the handwriting easy to read？ 12345 建议信 建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。
8、 建议信有可能是写给某个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。 提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。建议信要写得简明扼要、目 的明确、具有合理性和说服力。这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般 将来时。 具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为： 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语
9、气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具 体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉，而不是建议。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结。注意要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。 建议信常用句式：建议信常用句式： 1段首常用语(照应材料，表明写作意图)： I am writing to express my views concerning. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that. You have asked for my advice about.and I will
10、try to make some suggestions. I am very glad to hear that you want to. 2表达建议常用语： I think the most suitable.for you is. I would like to suggest that. Youd better./Its better to. As far as I am concerned./In my opinion/. For one thing.; for another. If I were you, I would. It seems to me that you coul
11、d. I think it would be more beneficial if you could. 3段尾常用语： In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. ThankThank you! you!
