1、,Unit 6 Im going to study computer science.,八年级上册 人教2011课标版,( Writing: Vacation plan ),Welcome to my class !,Teacher: Miss QiuMayidui Middle School of linxiang,Studying goal:(学习目标),Learn how to write composition.(学会怎样写作),记叙文类,书面表达六步法:,our topic :,Vacation plans,Tianan men square,Bird net,The Great w
2、all,Beautiful beaches,Swim in the sea,Lie on the beach,Erhai Lake,Three towers,Cang shan Mountain,Beijing,Hainan,Dali,紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。提示信息： relax a long vacation take a trip to have fun have a good time 注 意： 1、词数60-80 ；2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名；3、根据提示信息，也可适当发挥。,Task 1: 审
3、 题 （审中心内容、题材、人称、时态、字数）,Pre-writing (写作前 ),My vacation plan,记叙文,一般将来时(结构： ),I /We/my,表原因：,表转折:,表时间顺序：,表承接：,because、why；,first、then、next、at last;,but;,and;,一般将来时的结构,1. 主+ be going to + v.原形,am is are,2. 主+ will + v.原形,表示将来某个时间要发生的动作或存在的状态。,一般将来时：,Task 2: Discuss（构思讨论）:,When we make a vacation plan , w
4、hat should we think about?,Where,Who,How,Why,When,What,How long,Task 3: Make your vacation plan （列提纲）,Where are you going to go ?,Who are you going to go with ?,How are you going there ?,How long are you going to stay?,What will you do there?,Why are you going there?,When will you go?,Where,How long
5、,How,Why,Who,When,What,Task 4 : Try to write down something about your vacation:（列关键词、词组、句型）,Some useful words and phrases（有用的单词及词组）:,Peaceful / beautiful / relaxing / wonderful hope to / plan to .One of the liveliest cities Its adj. to do something Go hiking / go swimming / go shopping .Have a good
6、 time,Some useful sentences(有用的句型):,For my next vacation, I think I am going to because I will go to I will go with I hope we can have a good time,While-writing ： （写初稿 ）,要求：内容符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清楚。语句通顺，无语法错误，词汇运用准确，句型运用恰当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。,Post-writing : 改错完善,注意： 1. 时态准确 ,语句通顺, 语法无误。 2. 文章结构完整，即有开头、正文、 结尾。
7、 3.有一两句精彩的句型。,文章结构,1.Heading 点题，概括性,2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending 小结，呼应主题,Sharing Time Who did best !,ImaMiddleSchoolstudent now. For my next vacation, I think I am going to Beijing by air with my parents.Because IheardBeijingisone of the liveliest cities. Ill stay there for 2 weeks. I will do some in
8、teresting things. First,Iamgoingtovisit TiananMenSquare, and thePalaceMuseum, then I plan to visit theGreat WallandBeijingHutong.Thesefamousplaceswillmakemehavefun. For something else, I will go shopping, go sightseeing, take photos,go having a lot food. At last, if I meet some famous people there,i
9、t will be great ! Agreatvacation!Icantwait!,范文欣赏：,Summary （小结）：,1. 审2. 构3. 列4. 连5. 美6. 誊,文体_ 时态_ 人称_,列出要点,连字成句，连句成段,在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色,修改成文,同伴互批，重先誊写，注意书写格式及单词拼写,把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节,写作六步骤：,Ss should pay attention,1. 动笔之前，认真审题 2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲3. 语言通顺，表达准确 4. 不会表达，另辟蹊径5. 锦上添花，量力而行 6. 书写工整，卷面整洁7. 写完之后，勿忘检查,Homework:Finish the composition again by yourself .,Rome is not built in a day.,罗马并非朝夕建成。/ 坚持必成。,Practice make more perfect.,熟能生巧,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；廉价和免费的百万优质教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
