1、写作话题:写作话题:My Favorite Animal新目标新目标(Go for it)版版 七年级下七年级下册册 Wonderful!How do you know these animals? Task1:了解度大测试!了解度大测试!Pre-writingIt likes to eat _.leavesPre-writingIt can _ all day.sleep Do you know?It likes to _ _.bananasPre-writingeat Do you know?It can climb(爬爬) _ .trees It likes to _ _.bambooP
2、re-writingeat Do you know? _ _climb(爬爬) _ .It can trees It _ to _ _.meatPre-writing . (run)It can run quickly eat Do you know?likesThey _ _ _ _.grassPre-writing Do you know?eatlike toThey can walk for a long time . (walk)记忆大比拼(说一说记忆大比拼(说一说)I have a friend, he is Jill. Becky is Jills favorite animal.
3、 Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.like beautiful Africa years lives because3aThis is Becky. Isnt she _? She is from _. She is twelve _ old. I _ Becky _ she is smart and friendly. She _ in Blackwood Zoo.yearsAfricabeautifullikebecauselivesCheck the answers.like beautiful Africa years live
4、s becauseIsnt she beautiful? 她难道不漂亮她难道不漂亮? 本本句为否定句的一般句为否定句的一般疑问句疑问句,含有反含有反问语气问语气, 常意为常意为“难道难道不不? ”Write a description of a panda using the words in the box, or write about your favorite animal using your own ideas.Beibei five years old China cute shy Beijing Zoo3b121. 这是一篇介绍动物的短文,用一般现在时这是一篇介绍动物的短文,用
5、一般现在时态。态。2. 先介绍先介绍Beibei的名字及年龄。然后介绍它的名字及年龄。然后介绍它来自哪里。来自哪里。3. 再描写再描写Beibei的特征。同时写明喜欢它的的特征。同时写明喜欢它的原因。可以用句子结构:原因。可以用句子结构:I like because shes 4. 最后,写明它现在居住在哪里,并通读一最后,写明它现在居住在哪里,并通读一遍短文,看有没有写错的句子。遍短文,看有没有写错的句子。【写作任务】 请根据提示词语写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的动物大熊猫。Beibei , five years old, China, cute, shy, Beijing Zoo 【思路点
6、拨】 定调-列纲-衔接-成文(四步法)1. 定基调体裁:说明文时态:一般现在时人称:第三人称Discussing and ExpressingTry to complete the mind map.A description of an animalnamenationality(国籍)(国籍)hobbyagewhat to eatwhere to liveappearance(外貌)(外貌)otherspersonality(个性)(个性)2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲列提纲写句子写句子介介绍绍大大熊熊猫猫产地产地及居及居住地住地(1) 贝贝是一只大熊猫,它来自中贝贝是一只大熊猫,它来自中国四
7、川。国四川。Beibei is a panda. It _ _ Sichuan, China.(2) 它目前在北京动物园生活。它目前在北京动物园生活。Now it _ _ Beijing Zoo. is / comes fromlives in列提纲列提纲写句子写句子年龄年龄、外、外貌、貌、性情性情(3) 贝贝五岁了。贝贝五岁了。Beibei is _ _ _.(4) 它黑白相间,并且有一双大眼睛它黑白相间,并且有一双大眼睛。Its _ _ _ with two big eyes.(5) 它看起来很漂亮也很可爱,但有它看起来很漂亮也很可爱,但有时它有点害羞。时它有点害羞。It _ _ and
8、cute. But sometimes its kind of shy.five years oldblack and whitelooks beautiful列提纲列提纲写句子写句子习性习性(6) 它喜欢吃竹子。它喜欢吃竹子。It _ _ bamboo.(7) 它喜欢在白天睡觉。它喜欢在白天睡觉。It _ _ in the day.总结总结(8) 大熊猫是我们的朋友,所以我们大熊猫是我们的朋友,所以我们应该保护它们。应该保护它们。_ _ _ _, so we should protect them.likes eatinglikes sleepingPandas are our friend
9、s3. 巧衔接巧衔接在介绍某种动物时,应重点写它的产地、外在介绍某种动物时,应重点写它的产地、外貌、性情、习性等方面。这是通过语义相关貌、性情、习性等方面。这是通过语义相关联的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连联的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连贯性。贯性。4. 成篇章成篇章 Beibei is a panda. It comes from Sichuan, China. Now it lives in Beijing Zoo. It is five years old. Its black and white with two big eyes, and it looks beautifu
10、l and cute. But sometimes its kind of shy. It likes eating bamboo, and it likes sleeping in the day. Pandas are our friends, so we should protect them. 随着动物越来越少,人们对动物的关注越随着动物越来越少,人们对动物的关注越来越多。请你以来越多。请你以“My Favorite Animal”为为题写一篇英语短文来描述你最喜欢的动物。题写一篇英语短文来描述你最喜欢的动物。写作内容:写作内容:1.最喜欢的动物的基本情况(至少最喜欢的动物的基本情况(
11、至少3点)点)2.最喜欢的原因(至少最喜欢的原因(至少2点)点) 3.呼吁保护动物呼吁保护动物写作要求:写作要求:1.内容完整,条理清晰内容完整,条理清晰 2.60词左右词左右以以“My Favorite Animal”为题为题1.最喜欢的动物的基本情况最喜欢的动物的基本情况2.最喜欢的原因最喜欢的原因3.呼吁保护动物呼吁保护动物BeginningEndingStep1 StructureBody1)表达喜好的句型:)表达喜好的句型: My favorite animal is. I like .very much.2) 介绍动物产地的句型介绍动物产地的句型: It/ He/ She is/
12、comes from.3) 关于年龄、外貌、个性、才能等的句型:关于年龄、外貌、个性、才能等的句型: It/ He/ She is .years old. It/ He/ She is beautiful/ big/ small. It/ He/ She is (kind of/ very/ really) shy/ smart/ cute. It/ He/ She can run fast/ draw well.表达储备表达储备4) 表达情感态度的句型:表达情感态度的句型:I like .because it/he/ she.5) 文章结尾:文章结尾:呼吁式:呼吁式:We should save them.期待式:期待式:I hope he lives happily.感叹式感叹式: Isnt she beautiful? Dont you like her?