1、高中英语写作高中英语写作之人物简介类作文之人物简介类作文Learning AimsLearning Aims：1. Learn some words expressions and 1. Learn some words expressions and structures to describe a person structures to describe a person 2. Write a passage about Jane Goodall.2. Write a passage about Jane Goodall.Preparation for writing 1、Birthda
2、y and birth placeBirthday and birth place 1) 1) 出生于年月地方2 2、Family background Family background 2) 2) 在他父母的帮助下 3) 3)当他是一个小孩子的时候 4) 4)在他的童年时代 5) 5) 过着幸福/ / 艰难的生活 6) 6) 在岁的时候1)was / were born onin 2)with the help of his parents 3)when he was a small boy 4)during his childhood 5)live a happy /hard life
3、6)at the age of3 3、EducationEducation1) 1) 从大学毕业 2) 2) 当他在大学的时候，他主修3) 3) 在方面有天赋 4) 4)获得博士学位1) graduate 1) graduate fromfromdepartmentdepartment of of university ,university ,2) When at college , he 2) When at college , he majored inmajored in, ,3) have a gift for3) have a gift for4) gain a doctors d
4、egree4) gain a doctors degree4. Big events in his life4. Big events in his life1)1)把自己一生的时间奉献给2)2)做方面的研究3) do sth with great 3) do sth with great determination and determination and perseverance .perseverance . 4)win/get (the)first 4)win/get (the)first prize prize 1) devote his lifetime 1) devote hi
5、s lifetime to to , , 2) do research about / 2) do research about / into into 3)3)带着巨大的决心和毅力干 4)4)获得一等奖 5) 5) 赢得一枚金牌6) 6) 获得诺贝尔奖7) become a world 7) become a world championchampion8) 8) 因而获得奖章9) be awarded the title 9) be awarded the title ofof5) win a gold medal5) win a gold medal6) win the Nobel Pr
6、ize 6) win the Nobel Prize for for 7) 7) 成为世界冠军8) be awarded a medal 8) be awarded a medal forfor9) 9) 获得称号5 5、EvaluationEvaluation1) one of the best (most 1) one of the best (most important)important)2) 2) 被每个人尊重3) his hard work brought 3) his hard work brought him great success . him great success
7、 . 4) be regarded as 4) be regarded as 5) set a good example to 5) set a good example to us us 6) 6) 对. .评价高7) 7) 把专用于/ /奉献给1) 1) 最好的. .之一 2) be respected by 2) be respected by everyone . everyone . 3) 3) 他的努力工作带给了他巨大的成功。4)4)被看做5) 5) 给我们树立了良好的榜样6) speak highly of6) speak highly of7) devote .to . 7)
8、devote .to . Then how to describe a Then how to describe a person ?person ?一、写作内容一、写作内容1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况概况)2. appearance, character (外表、性格外表、性格)3. Education (教育背景教育背景)4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平经历、生平)5. evaluation (评价评价)1. 职位头衔：职位头衔： 用用同位语同位语, 年龄
9、性别与家境也可用年龄性别与家境也可用同同位语位语。如：如： 孙淑伟是来自广东的孙淑伟是来自广东的14岁男孩，他是世界跳水岁男孩，他是世界跳水冠军。冠军。 Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (同位语同位语), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.例句仿写：例句仿写： 亚伯拉汗亚伯拉汗林肯林肯(Abraham Lincoln), 于于1809年年2月月12日出生于肯塔基州。日出生于肯塔基州。(Kentucky)Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kent
10、ucky on February 12 , 1809 . 二、句式模板二、句式模板2. 介绍出生介绍出生: 介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分分词结构词结构, 使文章更简洁。使文章更简洁。如：如： 姚明于姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名年出生在上海，是一位世界著名的篮球运动员。的篮球运动员。 Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (定语定语), is a world famous basketball player.例句仿写：例句仿写：Marie Curie 1867年年11月月7日出生于波兰，是世日出生于波兰，是世界上最著名的
11、科学家之一。界上最著名的科学家之一。Marie Curie，born in Poland on November seventh 1867, was one of the best known scientists in the world.查尔斯查尔斯狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎没有受过什么教育。没有受过什么教育。 Born into a poor clerk s family(原因状语原因状语), Charles Dickens had little schooling.例句仿写：例句仿写：1930年袁隆平出生于一个贫困的家庭，于年袁隆平出生于一个贫
12、困的家庭，于1953年年毕业于西南农业大学毕业于西南农业大学( Southeast Agricultural College)Born into a poor family in 1930, Yuan Longping graduated from Southeast Agricultural College.3. 描写外貌描写外貌: 巧用巧用with短语。短语。如：如： My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛她长着两只大眼睛, 留着长发留着长发).例句仿写：例句仿写：我的老板是
13、一位有着黑色的头发，一双大眼睛的我的老板是一位有着黑色的头发，一双大眼睛的英俊年轻人。英俊年轻人。My boss is a handsome young man, with black hair and big eyes.4. 生平事迹：生平事迹： 尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。词短语和倒装等高级语句。如：如： In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.在他的一在他的一生中，他获得了许多荣誉，其中包括获得生中，他获得了
14、许多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005年感动中国年度人物年感动中国年度人物”的称号。的称号。(定语从句定语从句)例句仿写例句仿写: Joan Goodall 在猩猩的自然环境中研究在猩猩的自然环境中研究猩猩，这让她更多地理解了猩猩的行为。猩猩，这让她更多地理解了猩猩的行为。Joan Goodall studied the chimps in their own environment, which made her fully understand chimp behaviour. In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold me
15、dal(在他打破世界纪录并在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后获得金牌之后), he became the idol(偶像）偶像） of the youth.(分词短语做时间状语分词短语做时间状语)例句仿写：例句仿写：对自己的生活很满意，他不在乎名声和财富。对自己的生活很满意，他不在乎名声和财富。Satisfied with the his life, he cares little about his fame and wealth. Not only Not only does he showdoes he show interest in science, but interest in sc
16、ience, but also he has a gift for music. also he has a gift for music. 他不但对科学极感兴趣，而且他还有音乐天赋。( (倒装句式) ) 例句仿写：他不仅专注自己的研究，而且关心社会福利事业。Not only Not only is he devoted tois he devoted to his research, but also his research, but also he concernshe concerns himself with the welfare project. himself with the
17、 welfare project. 写成长经历请按时间顺写成长经历请按时间顺序。如序。如when he was a small boy， at (the age of) five， in 2006， a year later等。等。5. 评价评价: 尽量运用短语。尽量运用短语。如：如： Lei Feng set a good example to us (给给我们树立了一个良好的榜样我们树立了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect for /to him (很敬重他很敬重他).Next, lets move to practice!四. .
18、 写作( (一) Jane Goodall, 1934) Jane Goodall, 1934年出生于英国。她是著名的动物学家(zoologist)(zoologist)。毕业于剑桥Cambridge University)Cambridge University)大学。从小就梦想在自然环境中研究动物。19601960年来到非洲研究猩猩。取得成就：1) 1) 在Joan Goodall Joan Goodall 之前，没有人完全了解猩猩的行为：吃肉；一起狩猎；像家庭成员一样交流，生活。2) 2) 保护并尊重黑猩猩，反对用于实验和娱乐。帮助建立动物自然栖息地。3) 3) 得到许多荣誉。 Jane
19、 Goodall, born in England in 1934, is Jane Goodall, born in England in 1934, is a world famous zoologist, who graduated a world famous zoologist, who graduated from Cambridge University. Since her from Cambridge University. Since her childhood she had wanted to work with childhood she had wanted to
20、work with animals in their own environment. In 1960, animals in their own environment. In 1960, she achieved her dream - she arrived in she achieved her dream - she arrived in Gombe to study the chimps.Gombe to study the chimps. Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp Nobody before Jane fully unde
21、rstood chimp behaviour. Her work changed the way people behaviour. Her work changed the way people think about chimps. For example, one think about chimps. For example, one important thing she discovered was that important thing she discovered was that chimps hunt and eat meat. She actually chimps h
22、unt and eat meat. She actually observed chimps hunt as a group. She also observed chimps hunt as a group. She also discovered how chimps communicate with discovered how chimps communicate with each other. She has argued that wild each other. She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wil
23、d and not animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements. used for entertainment or advertisements. She has helped to set up special places She has helped to set up special places where they can live safely. where they can live safely. Joan Goodall devoted all he
24、r time to Joan Goodall devoted all her time to studying chimps. She studying chimps. She gained many gained many honourshonours. She inspires those who want . She inspires those who want to cheer the achievements of women. to cheer the achievements of women. ( (二) ) 1)1)居里夫人(Marie Curie) 1867(Marie
25、Curie) 1867年1111月7 7日出生于波兰一个教师家庭。2)2)以第一名的成绩毕业于巴黎大学( (Paris University ) Paris University ) 物理系。在校期间学习勤奋。3)3)居里研究所(Curie Institute)(Curie Institute)的创始人，新元素钋(Po)(Po)，镭(Ra)(Ra)的发现者。被称为镭的母亲。4)19034)1903年和丈夫同获诺贝尔物理奖。19111911年获得诺贝尔化学奖。 Born into a teachers family in November, Born into a teachers family
26、 in November, 1867, in Poland, Madam Curie was one of 1867, in Poland, Madam Curie was one of the greatest physicists. In 1891 she went to the greatest physicists. In 1891 she went to study in Paris University. When she was study in Paris University. When she was studying in Paris, she lived a poor
27、life, but studying in Paris, she lived a poor life, but she worked very hard. So she graduated she worked very hard. So she graduated from Paris University winning first. from Paris University winning first. Madam Curie devoted all her life to her Madam Curie devoted all her life to her research. Sh
28、e was not only the founder of research. She was not only the founder of Curie Institute, but also the discoverer of two Curie Institute, but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive matter-polonium and kinds of radioactive matter-polonium and radium. She was regarded as the mother of radium.
29、She was regarded as the mother of Ra. In 1903 she and her husband were given Ra. In 1903 she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize for physics. She received a the Nobel Prize for physics. She received a second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911. second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911. So she b
30、ecame the first scientist in the So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.world to win two Nobel Prizes. Madam Curie was one of the greatest Madam Curie was one of the greatest scientists in the world. She set a good scientists in the world. She set a good example to us , so all the people show example to us , so all the people show great respect to her. great respect to her. Thats all, thank you!
