1、How to write an application letter 自荐信How to make an self-introduction? personality hobby experience/achievementstrengths 假如你是李华，你校与澳大利亚姐妹学校每年暑假都有交换生项目。请你写一封自荐信给负责人张老师，申请成为交换生一员。字数要求：100字左右。Dear Mr. Zhang, I am Li Hua, I am a 17-year-old studentfrom senior 1. I know you are asking for someexchange s
2、tudents for the program, Im writingthis letter. As an out-going boy, I can get along well with others. It is very important for an exchange student. Besides, be good at English enables me to speak it fluently. I am willing to help others, and I cancommunicate with others well. I really hope you can
3、accept my application. I will be grateful if you do so. Look forward to your reply. YoursLi HuaI amImbeLook_Simple mistakestoo many simple sentencesrepeated sentence patternslack of advanced（高级的）words/phrasesHow to make your application letter more convincing(有说服力的) and attractive? 假如你是李华，你校与澳大利亚姐妹学
4、校每年暑假都有交换生项目。请你写一封自荐信给负责人张老师，申请成为交换生一员。字数要求：100字左右。一审题目：文体：人称：时态：自荐信/申请书第一人称/ 第二人称一般现在时Tip 1. Before writing, you should make sure of the style, the person and the tense.二分段落：structurePara 1: purposePara 2: strengths:Para 3: purpose &gratitude(感谢)personalityhobbyexperience/achievementTip 2. Divide y
5、our article into two or three parts, and each part should have its own topic.三列要点： 外向随和： 乐于助人： 擅长交流： 喜欢看外国电影： 对西方文化了解： 拥有出国旅行的经历: 精通英语： 与外国人交流顺畅：be willing to help othersbe good at communicating with be fond of watching foreign moviesbe familiar with Western culture.have the experience of travelling
6、 abroad.be good at Englishcommunicate with foreigners fluentlyTip 3. State(陈述，说明) your strengths clearly, which will make your application more convincing.easy-going and out-going四修改润色：Dear Mr. Zhang, I am Li Hua, I am a 17-year-old studentfrom senior 1. I know you are asking for someexchange studen
7、ts for the program, Im writingthis letter to apply to be an exchange student._()_ you are asking for some exchange students for the program, KnowingTip 4. Write your purpose directly, avoid simple mistakes. Tip 5. Some advanced(高级的）grammar is necessary. Dear Mr. Zhang, I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old stu
8、dentfrom senior 1. Knowing you are asking for some exchange students for the program, Im writing this letter to apply to be an exchange student. Para 2. strengths As an out-going boy, I can get along well with others. It is very important for an exchangestudent. I am good at English, so I cancommuni
9、cate with foreigners fluently. I amwilling to help others. I like watching foreignmovies, and I have the experience of travellingabroad, so I am quite familiar with westerncultures. As an out-going boy, I can get along well with others. It is very important for an exchange student. As an out-going b
10、oy, I can get along well with others. _ for an exchange student. I am good at English, so I can communicate with foreigners fluently._,which is of great importance_have a good command of _,I can communicate with foreigners fluently.I like watching foreign movies, and I have the experience of travell
11、ing abroadHaving a good command of EnglishNot only do I like watching foreign movies, but also have the experience of travellingabroadbe capable of doing As an out-going boy, I am capable of getting along well with others, which is of great importance for an exchange student. Having a good command o
12、f English, I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Not only do I like watching foreign movies, but also have the experience of travelling abroadFirst and foremost/ to begin with/ above all Besides/ Additionally/ Whats more/ Moreover Finally/ Eventually/ Last but not least. Tip 6. Besides grammar
13、, pay attention to using advanced words and phrases. Tip 7. Using proper linking words can make your article fluent.Para 3. purpose again I really hope you can accept my application.I will be grateful if you do so. Looking forwardto your reply.doId appreciate it if you could take my application into
14、 consideration. _Dear Mr. Zhang, I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from senior 1.Knowing you are asking for some exchange students for the program, Im writing this letter to apply to be an exchange student. As an out-going boy, I am capable of getting alongwell with others, which is of great import
15、ance for anexchange student. Having a good command ofEnglish, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.Not only do I like watching foreign movies, but alsohave the experience of travelling abroad. Id appreciate it if you could take my applicationinto consideration. Looking forward to your reply. Y
16、ours Li HuaWriting tips: Tip 1. Before writing, you should make sure the style, the person and the tense. Tip 2. Divide your article into two or three parts, and each part should have its own topic. Tip 3. State your strengths, which will make your application more persuasive. Tip 4. Write your purp
17、ose directly, avoid simple mistakes. Tip 5. Some advanced(高级的）grammar is necessary. Tip 6. Besides grammar, pay attention to using advanced words and phrases. Tip 7. Using proper linking words can make your article fluent.Writing practice 假如你是李华，你校将接待一批来自美国的高中生学习汉语，目前校办公室正在为他们征询为期两周的接待家庭（host family）。请用英语给负责人张老师写一封信提出申请，说明你的理由和条件。 1.基本情况（姓名，性别，年龄，性格等） 2.英语水平 3.家庭条件 4.其他
