1、 Module12 Western music. WritingLanguage goal:Write a passage about the introduction of a person.Johann Strauss the elderWhat was he famous for?He was famous for composerWhat a great composer he is!Johann Strauss the younger was famous forMozart What a composer he is!What a !be famous formusicians w
2、as one of the great musicians& played not only the piano but also the violin.Tip1: Use different phrases and sentences. (one of ; be famous for; not only but also; What a !)of classical music.He was born in Austria in 1756.playedHe wrote many wonderful pieces of music.died in 1791 when He died in 17
3、91 when he was ments 评价评价 ?(what a )Many people think his music is perfect. What a great musician Mozart is! Austria, 1756wrote pieces of musicHe not only the piano but also the violin.Tip2: Pay attention to the tense. (注意时态）注意时态）&one of the musiciansMozart was one of the great musicians of classica
4、l music.Xian Xinghai Xian XinghaiFamous for the song Wrote it in 1939 One of the great composers of classical and traditional musicBorn in Macao, 1905Died young, 1945Called the Peoples MusicianUsed traditional Chinese musicStudied in ParisSongs are still popular today123456789Please choose one or tw
5、o to make sentences and discuss with your partner. (请选择一两请选择一两条短语进行造句然后跟同伴讨论条短语进行造句然后跟同伴讨论)He was famous for the song .He wrote it in 1939.Xian Xinghai was one of the great composers of classical and traditional musicHe was born in Macao, China in 1905.He is called the “Peoples Musician”. He died yo
6、ung in 1945. He used traditional Chinese music to write songs.He studied in Paris. His songs are popular today.Put the sentences into right orders. (将下列句子排序将下列句子排序)Tip3: Pay attention to the time order. (注意时间顺序注意时间顺序)( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( )481259367when he was 40 years old.Xian Xinghai w
7、as one of the good composers of classical and traditional music. He was born in Macao, China in 1905. He studied in Paris. He used traditional Chinese music to write songs. He was famous for the song . He wrote it in 1939. He died young in 1945 when he was 35. His songs are popular today. He is call
8、ed the “Peoples Musician”. Is it a good article? (这是一篇好文章吗这是一篇好文章吗)Xian Xinghai was one of the good composers of classical and traditional music. He was born in Macao, China in 1905_ studied in Paris. He used traditional Chinese music to write songs. He was famous for the song . He wrote it in 1939.
9、 _, he died young in 1945 when he was only 35. _his songs are still popular today. _he is called the “Peoples Musician”.andSo ButFill in the blanksWhat a perfect musician he is!Tip4: conjunction words(连接词连接词)Unluckily(不幸地不幸地)great/perfect/wonderfulTip5: accuracy of words(用词准确性用词准确性)Is it the same as
10、 the sentence in the book?(跟书跟书本的句子一样吗本的句子一样吗?)Can you use other words to replace “good”?(有哪些词有哪些词可以代替可以代替good？)Xian Xinghai was one of the great composers of classical and traditional music. He was born in Macao, China in 1905 and studied in Paris. He used traditional Chinese music to write songs.
11、He was famous for the song . He wrote it in 1939. Unluckily, he died young in 1945 when he was only 35. But his songs are still popular today. So he is called the “Peoples Musician”. What a perfect musician he is !Beginning (Topic sentence)Ending (comment)BodyTip1:Phrases(短语短语)Tip3:time order (时间顺序时
12、间顺序)Tip2:past tense (一般一般过去式过去式)Tip2:present tense (一般现一般现在时在时)Tip4:conjunction words(连接词连接词)Tip5: accuracy of words(用词准确性用词准确性) (命运交响曲命运交响曲)BeethovenBeethovenborn, Germany (德国德国), 1770musician of classical musicfamous for (命运交响曲命运交响曲)lost his hearing when 50died, 1827music is still popular todayTim
13、e order (按时间顺序按时间顺序)and/but/so/unluckily one of be famous for at the age of not onlybut also What a & First, everyone writes down an article about Beethoven. Dont forget the time order!(首先，每首先，每个人独立写一篇短文介绍贝多芬，别忘了时间顺序哦个人独立写一篇短文介绍贝多芬，别忘了时间顺序哦) Then, discuss and check.(然后，跟同伴讨论并检然后，跟同伴讨论并检查书写查书写) Final
14、ly, show it .(最后，展示你的精彩作文吧！最后，展示你的精彩作文吧！)I will take Fate by the throat, it will not bend me completely to its will. ( (我要扼住命运的咽喉，它不能使我完全屈服我要扼住命运的咽喉，它不能使我完全屈服.).)Life is full of joys and sorrows.Just like music has its ups and downs.Enjoy music! Enjoy life!生活中充满了欢乐与悲伤。生活中充满了欢乐与悲伤。就像音乐有高潮与低谷。就像音乐有高潮与
15、低谷。享受音乐！享受音乐！享受生活！享受生活！ Finish and share your composition with your friends about Beethoven.Introduce one of your favorite persons to your partner. Johann Strauss the younger: (born in Austria, 1825) Can you make a sentence?(你能造句吗？你能造句吗？)Johann Strauss the younger was born in Austria in 1825.发送发送Ple
16、ase use “ what (a)! ” to make a sentence about Mozart. (用用 “what a !”造一个关于莫扎特的造一个关于莫扎特的句子句子)What a musician/composer Mozart is!发送发送Beethoven _one of the great _ in the world. Please help me choose the right answer. (选择正确答案选择正确答案) A. is; composer B. are; composers C. is; composers D. are; composerC.
17、one of 后接可数名词复数后接可数名词复数, ,表示什么中的一个表示什么中的一个, ,动动词用词用单数单数第三人称。第三人称。发送发送Mozart died in 1791 when he was 35.When did Mozart die? How old was he?发送发送Can you use “be famous for” to make a sentence? (Johann Strauss the younger-)Johann Strauss the younger was famous for . 发送发送Beethoven(贝多芬贝多芬) played the pi
18、ano and the violin. (not onlybut also ) 同义句转换。同义句转换。Beethoven played not only the piano but also the violin.发送发送作者作者批改者批改者1. 1. 完整性完整性（满分（满分6 6分）分）有开头和结尾，（有开头和结尾，（3 3分）分）有运用重点短语和句型有运用重点短语和句型介绍人物（介绍人物（3 3分）分）A A ( (5-65-6) )B (3B (3-4-4) )C (2)C (2)2. 2. 正确性正确性（满分（满分4 4分）分）按照时间顺序介绍人物，按照时间顺序介绍人物，正确使用一般过去式和正确使用一般过去式和一般现在时一般现在时A A ( (4 4) )B (3)B (3)C (2)C (2)3. 3. 流畅性流畅性（满分（满分3 3分）分）运用多种表达方式，正运用多种表达方式，正确使用连接词确使用连接词A A ( (3 3) )B (B (2 2) )C (C (1 1) )4. 4. 规范性规范性（满分（满分2 2分）分）书写规范书写规范书面整洁书面整洁 A A ( (2 2) )B (B (1 1) )总分总分/
