1、七年级英语下册Module 9写作指导【写作目标】用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的生活经历。【写作任务】假如你是曹珍，刚交了一位澳大利亚的笔友 William，他对你的生活经历很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你的生活经历。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求用英语写一封电子邮件，向新交的笔友介绍自己的生活经历，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：可从自己的出生时间和地点以及成长经历两个方面展开。(2) 人称：第一人称。(3) 时态：以一般过去时为主。(4) 文体：应用文（邮件）；邮件的主体部分为说明文。【谋篇布局】介绍自己的生活经历出生时间和地点(1) 2011年8月，我出生于四川省成都市。In A
2、ugust 2011, I _ _ _ Chengdu City, Sichuan Province.成长经历(2) 3岁，我和我的父母去了青岛。At the age of three, I _ _ _ with my parents.(3) 5岁，我开始学习打网球。At the age of five, I started to learn to _ _.(4) 6岁，我上小学，遇见了我的第一位朋友。At the age of six, I went to primary school and _ _ _ _.(5) 13岁，我上初中，加入了网球俱乐部。At the age of thirt
3、een, I went to middle school and _ _ _.(6) 现在，我居住在青岛。Now, I _ _ Qingdao.【衔接】在讲述自己的成长经历时，可使用at the age of .，按照年龄从小到大的顺序介绍在不同阶段发生的事情，使文章脉络清晰、行文流畅。【连句成文】同学们，根据谋篇布局的练习，赶快动笔完成这封电子邮件吧！Dear William,Im happy to tell you something about mylife experience. How about you? Please share your lifeexperience with
4、me.Yours,Cao Zhen【收藏夹】介绍自己爸爸或妈妈小时候的生活同学们，当我们用英语介绍自己爸爸或妈妈小时候的生活时，可以从以下几个方面展开：Where he or she livedin a small village / town / city .What games he or she hadpaper folding(折纸),iron ring pushing(滚铁环),hopscotch(跳房子),rubber band skipping(跳皮筋),rope jumping(跳绳),cockfighting(撞拐) .Whatcartoons(动画片) he or she
5、watchedBaby Tadpoles Look for Their Mother(小蝌蚪找妈妈),SnowKid(雪孩子),Calabash Brothers(葫芦娃) .How he or she travelledby bike / bus /coach(长途汽车) / train .【小试身手】本模块学完后，英语老师要求同学们回家后向自己的爸爸或妈妈了解他们小时候的生活，并在下节口语课上跟其他同学分享。请你用英语写一篇短文，为此次分享做准备。Hello, everyone. Today I want to share _with you. Thats all. Thank you.【
6、答案】谋篇布局(1) was born in (2) went to Qingdao(3) play tennis (4) met my first friend(5) joined the Tennis Club (6) live in连句成文Dear William,Im happy to tell you something about my lifeexperience.In August 2011, I was born inChengdu City, Sichuan Province.At the age ofthree, I went to Qingdao with my par
7、ents.At theage of five, I started to learn to play tennis.At theage of six, I went to primary school and met myfirst friend.At the age of thirteen, I went tomiddle school and joined the Tennis Club. Now, Ilive in Qingdao.How about you? Please share your life experiencewith me.Yours,Cao Zhen小试身手One p
8、ossible version:Hello, everyone. Today I want to sharemyfathers life when he was youngwith you.Myfather was from a small village. A river ran infront of his village. He had lots of fun games, suchas paper folding and iron ring pushing. He oftendid them after class. My father liked watchingcartoons on TV. He likedCalabash Brothersbest.At that time, he usually travelled by bus. Life wasnot easy, but my father said he was happy then.Thats all. Thank you.3
