1、Dear Susan Luo，I have a problem. My best friend Chen Lei become a game lover recently. He is interested in computer games. Every weekend, when I ask him to go for a walk outdoors, he always rejected me as to stay at home to play computer games. Sometimes, I think he may even forget to have meals or
2、sleep in order to stay online all day long. What should I do to help him get out of the situation? Im very concerned about him.Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you in advance.Yours sincerely,Steven Talking02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinking*ReadingTalk to his friend about his behavior. Discus
3、s the problem together.Encourage his friend to try new hobbies.She understands Worried Friends problem and feeling.She also talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinking*Part A: I know what the problem is.Part B: I understand how you feel.Part C: This is my
4、advice and reason(s).Part D: I think my advice will help.An advice letter mainly contains the following four parts:Reading How did Susan Luo give suggestions?I recommend thatI think you shouldWhy not?To make suggestions: I recommend that I think you should Why not ?How about ? Id like to suggest Wha
5、t do you think ? It might be a good idea to To show understanding:Im sorry to hear/know/learn that I know how it feels to It happens to everyone.I know you didnt mean to Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. Paragraph 1：the _ of the letter 点明写作目的：就某事/问题提建议 Parag
6、raph 2：the _ that you give 阐述具体建议，并说明理由Paragraph 3：the writers _ 希望建议被采纳并有所帮助。purposesuggestionshopeDear_,Dear_, I Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(to _(引出对方需要建议的主题引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestions( Here
7、are a few suggestions(引出作者的建议引出作者的建议). First/To begin with , it is important to _. Then, it also helps to _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. You can also _. （部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议的益处的益处） I hope _( I hope _(表达愿望表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua1. It is not unusual for
8、teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games attract v.吸引；激发，引起吸引；激发，引起attractive adj. 有吸引力的；吸引人的有吸引力的；吸引人的 attraction n. 吸引力；吸引吸引力；吸引【归纳归纳】 attract sb. to 把某人吸引到把某人吸引到 attract ones attention 引起某人的注意力引起某人的注意力 be attracted to. 被被所吸引所吸引人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading f
9、or Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)【语境应用语境应用】用用attract的适当形式填空的适当形式填空。1) Jane is such a beautiful girl that she is _ eyes all the time.2) Bruce is always annoying us and I dont think he is an _ boy.3) The television has little _ for me.4）Babi
10、es _ bright colours. 婴儿喜欢鲜艳的颜色。婴儿喜欢鲜艳的颜色。attracting attractive attraction 人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)are attracted to2. Some students even become addicted to the Internet有些学生甚至上网成瘾有些学生甚
11、至上网成瘾be / become addicted to 沉溺于沉溺于, 醉心于醉心于人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)【拓展拓展】addict n. 吸毒成瘾的人；对吸毒成瘾的人；对入迷的人入迷的人addictive adj. 使人上瘾的，使人入迷的使人上瘾的，使人入迷的addiction n. 瘾，入迷，嗜好，与介词瘾，入迷，嗜好，与介词to搭
12、配搭配【语境应用语境应用】根据提示补全句子根据提示补全句子1) John is only 9 years old but already a heavy computer game _ (addictive).2) Barbara _ _ _ (addict) TV soap operas and never wanted to work.3) Morris addicted himself _ rock music.4) Cigarettes are highly _ (addict). 5) Some students are addicted to _ (play) computer g
13、ames and some often cheat in the exams.addict became addicted totoaddictiveplaying人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)Useful words and expressions in the letter:be worried about 为为而担心，忧虑而担心，忧虑be
14、 attracted to 喜爱喜爱focus on 集中；特别关注集中；特别关注be addicted to (doing) sth. 对对(做做) 某事很入迷某事很入迷concentrate on 集中精力于；全神贯注于集中精力于；全神贯注于encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事all the best 一切顺利，万事如意一切顺利，万事如意人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage Li
15、fe Reading for Writing 课件 (共40张PPT)*基础自主学习核心互动探究My parents wont listen when I tell them things. I guess its because theyre adults and cant understand me. Do you have any suggestions?suggestionreasonTo begin with, you are supposed to have a timely communication with In order not to make things worse,
16、 youd better and I think in this way youll surelyIn that case, you can try to and I believe that They need your help!I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do?suggestionreasonIt will certainly help a lot if you.It is advisable to do.I suggest that you t
17、ry to do. There is a girt I like in my class, but Im too sky to talk to her. Please help me!suggestionreasonI (dont) think it wise of you to because It would be much better if you.In addition to that, wouldnt it be a good idea to ? writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要
18、和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；How to write a letter of advice?建议信是书信的一种形式，属于建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文应用文。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告建议或忠告，有可能是写给，有可能是写给个人个人，就收信人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个可能是写给某个组织或机构组织或机构，就改进其服务，就改进其服务等方面提出建议
19、或忠告。等方面提出建议或忠告。1. 定义Paragraph 1：the _ of the letter 点明写作目的：就某事/问题提建议 Paragraph 2：the _ that you give 阐述具体建议，并说明理由Paragraph 3：the writers _ 希望建议被采纳并有所帮助。purposesuggestionshope2. 结构建议信注意事项第三段：避免笼统的期待和祝愿第二段：建议的内容要详尽具体，同时要注意内在的逻辑。 （1）说明建议的内容（是什么）； 提出具体建议的原因 （为什么）/ 指出采纳建议的益处（怎么样）； （2）建议一般为多个，要注意不同建议之间的衔接
20、。第一段：弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受(语气诚恳有礼貌）建议信一般以_ 人称为主，时态主要为_第一、二一般现在时（+将来时）Dear_,Dear_, I Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(to _(引出对方需要建议的主题引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestions( Here are a few suggestions(引出作者的建议引出作者的建议).
21、First/To begin with , it is important to _. Then, it also helps to _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. You can also _. （部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议的益处的益处） I hope _( I hope _(表达愿望表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua3. 写作模板1.Words and phrases _ n.建议 _ n. 情况 _ 交朋友 _ 做有困难 _ 接受某人的建议
22、_ 和同甘共苦 _/need_ 需要 _ 全心全意 tip(s)/advice/suggestion(s) situationmake friendshave trouble/difficulty in doing. take ones adviceshare happiness and sorrow with.call forput ones heart into4. 本篇习作相关表述2.Sentences知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in.)_如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(beadj.to do)_要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why n
23、ot)_你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldnt it be a good idea.？)_正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)_I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Why not be a friend first，if you want to make friends?Wouldnt it be a good idea if y
24、ou share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.however，to begin with，in addition (另外），last but not least (最后但同样重要的是)作文写后讲评15 Sept，2019Dear Su Ru，I am sorry to know that you are havi
25、ng trouble in making friends. However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. （para1)1. 范文To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a s
26、aying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least，I recommend you should put your heart into making friends. It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.（para2)I hope you will find these ideas useful. （para3)All the best. Yours， Li Hua 1.建议信首段常用句式 （表明写作目的）1.
27、 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。2. Learning / Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions which I think shoud be helpful .得知. 因此我写信来提供一些有帮助的建议，2. 建议信常用表述概括表述1.建议信首段常用句式 （表明写作目的）3. You have asked me for my advice about. 你向我征求关于的意见。4. I am writing to express m
28、y views concerning 我正在写信是想表达我对的看法。5. Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。 6. My suggestions are as follows. 我的建议如下2. 建议信常用表述1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpf
29、ul.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to lear
30、n Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。4. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。具体表述2.表达建议常用句式1. When it comes to such a situat
31、ion, I would like to suggest / recommend that you当涉及到这样的情况的时候，我 建议你.2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could 我认为（怎么做）.是有好处的3. If I were you, I would 如果我是你，我将会.4. First(ly)，why not 加动词原形? 5. Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you .By doing this，you will .6. As far as I am concerned/In my
32、 opinion，you should7. Last but not least，you should概括表述2.表达建议常用句式1. First(ly)，why not join a club? If you do this，you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。2. Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。3. Third(ly)，it would b
33、e a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。4. Last but not least，you should talk with her first.最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。 具体表述1.
34、 I hope you will find these proposals helpful / practical.我希望这些建议对你有帮助2. I hope my suggestions will be of some help. 3. I would appreciate it if you would consider my suggestion / give my suggestions your favorable consideration. (Looking forward to your reply.) 、如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。4. I will be more
35、than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果在这一方面有所改善我会非常开心。3.建议信结尾常用句式概括表述3.建议信结尾常用句式1. As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。2. I believe that if you follow my advice，youll get
36、 along well with your classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。具体表述4. 建议信/应用文常用关联词1. to begin with, then, furthermore, finally2. to start with, next, in addition, finally3. first, besides, last but not least4. most important of all, moreover, finally5. for one thing, for another6. on the one hand, on the other hand写作技巧连句成篇，行文连贯句子是由词汇组成的，而文章是由句子组成的，遣词造句要按语法和习惯表达，组句成篇也要按照篇章结构。选择能够恰当表示并列、递进、因果、转折、条件等意义的连词，把要点句子连接成文，使句与句，段与段之间意思连贯，衔接自然，从而生动、准确地表达考题内容。同时要根据表达的需要注意变换句式，避免句子结构的单调性。如：使用不同结构、不同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化；多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，使行文更加流畅有力；改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再在句末加上一个状语。增加书面表达的表现力。
