1、中考英语写作指导中考英语写作指导学习目标：1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。了解中考作文要求及命题特点。2.学习如何组织作文。学习如何组织作文。3.如何有效地使用连词如何有效地使用连词。学习目标：要求：要求：要求学生在要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提分钟内，根据所给提示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的短文。词数控制在短文。词数控制在80个左右。个左右。特点：特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维空间。空间。 2.多种题材，书信，毕业赠言，事件描多种题材，书信，毕业赠言，事件描述，个人观点，且多种文体结合。述，
2、个人观点，且多种文体结合。1. 中考作文要求及命题特点中考作文要求及命题特点抄改连扩列审书面表达2.如何组织作文。如何组织作文。书面表达六步法书面表达六步法时态时态人称人称体裁体裁（记述文，应用文，议论文）（记述文，应用文，议论文）健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。Cross-question(审题)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkSty
3、le (体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）: _调查报告，记叙文第一人称一般现在时1. Cross-question(审题) List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework How do people spend their
4、vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add) How do people spend t
5、heir vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending)美美(beautify) most people choose to travel
6、to get away from the busy world during the holidays.方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调Which is better?1.我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2.我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3.我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to
7、try our best to get good grades.方法二 : 活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求Which is better?1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty
8、to protect the environment.方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “P
9、ractice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs 三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.1.Practice makes perfect.2
10、.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.8.All roads lead to Rome.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plan
11、t more trees and save water and energy.加例子连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people cho
12、ose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made
13、 a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a f
14、ew people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。1.表示并列表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示递进表示递进: besides, whats more 3.表示转折表示转折: but, howeve
15、r, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, since, for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if, unless 6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to beg
16、in with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next, later, since then, from then on9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, in a word, generally speaking, _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the
17、 concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. ( )Its too late to invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt
18、lastA4. CheckinguSpelling(拼写)uTense(时态)uGrammar (语法)uHandwriting(书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号)Great changes in my hometown For the past several years, my hometownchanges a lot. In the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly an
19、d made little money. But now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money. Because its relaxing work in the factory, so they lead a happily life.Inworked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywere5. Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁书写不规范，卷面不整洁, 0分。第三档（一般）： （69分）一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据
20、文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档 次，然后以该档的要求来衡量，结合内容和语言表达 综合给定分数。3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。4.词数少于80的，从总分中减去1分。5.拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所确定档次的份上范围内，减去1分。 中考英语书面表达评分原则二、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档（很好）：（1215分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点， 或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯， 表达清楚。第二档（好）：（912分） 完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点；语言 有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）； （69分）
21、基本完成了试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有 一些错误，行文不够连贯。第四档（较差）： （35分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些 单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第五档（差）： （03分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些 单词；语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的字左右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的看法。看法。提示：提示：1.扔垃圾扔垃圾 2. 扫地扫
22、地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服洗衣服 5. 为花浇水为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。不得逐句翻译。范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的字左右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对家务的看法。看法。提示：提示：1.扔垃圾扔垃圾 2. 扫地扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服洗衣服 5. 为花浇水为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。
23、要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。不得逐句翻译。_ _人称人称 时态时态事件事件观点观点要点要点如何列提纲如何列提纲：Para1:Para2:Para3:I think its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（综述）开门见山，表明观点。（综述）开门见山，表明观点。根据提示，概述家务。根据提示，概述家务。给出评论，发表己见给出评论，发表己见。e.g.I help m
24、y mother sweep the floor.I help my mother cook the lunch .I always wash clothes for my family. I always wash dishes.扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，使文章内容完整扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，使文章内容完整，要点全面，是写作的关键步骤。，要点全面，是写作的关键步骤。I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning._做午饭洗衣服洗盘子合理恰当地运用合理恰当地运用关联词关联词和和过渡句过渡句是英语是英语写作的制胜法宝。
25、它们不仅使你的文章结写作的制胜法宝。它们不仅使你的文章结构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升作文档次。作文档次。As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.For me, I often help my parents do housework. For example, I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morningDoing housework can not onl
26、y make your parents happy, but also let you taste the sweet of work. 人称：Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 主谓一致： Everyone work hard. 习惯用法：I very much like it. My work is very busy._Im very busy with my work.学生的优秀范文学生的优秀范文 （15分）分） AS we all know, Its important to help paren
27、ts do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook the lunch . I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy. Besides, 学生的优秀范文学生的优秀范文 （15分）分） Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）（即总括又阐明看法）
