1、话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 分析河南近分析河南近10年中招真题的书面表达可知，年中招真题的书面表达可知，“成长变化成长变化”这这一话题一话题2016年以年以“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”为题进行考查，要求介绍自身的成长变化，包括外貌、性格、为题进行考查，要求介绍自身的成长变化，包括外貌、性格、心理、学习、与人交往或所取得的成绩等方面。结合全国近年心理、学习、与人交往或所取得的成绩等方面。结合全国近年中考真题可知，该话题通常还有中考真题可知，该话题通常还有“介绍他人的成长变化介绍他人的成长变化(含家庭含家庭成员成员)”这一命题角度。这一命
2、题角度。命题探索话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 (2016河南河南)我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”为题，并根据为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。典例剖析典例剖析审审标标题：我题：我个人最大的改变个人最大的改变审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审文体：审文体：记叙记叙文文一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. 要点：要点： 1)变化是什么；变化是什么； 2)变化是如何发生的变化是如何发生的；
3、3)变化后有何感受变化后有何感受。2. 要求：要求： 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数80左右。左右。审时态审时态：一般过去时一般过去时审要点审要点：变化后的收获与成长变化后的收获与成长（时态（时态：一般现在时）一般现在时）一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. I used to be shy and less confident. Now Im different from before.2. Lucy has changed a lot. She used to have short hair.3. N
4、ow shes not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.1角度角度外貌及性格变化外貌及性格变化一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. Billy以前很安静。现在变得很活泼。以前很安静。现在变得很活泼。_2. Kate变得不一样了。她过去戴眼镜。变得不一样了。她过去戴眼镜。_3. 他现在不再紧张了，而且喜欢与他人交谈。他现在不再紧张了，而且喜欢与他人交谈。_Billy used to be so quiet. Now she is very active.Kate was
5、different. She used to wear glasses.Now hes not nervous anymore and likes communicating with others. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. She read a little in the past. But now she finds great pleasure in reading.2. My brother didnt like traveling. However, he is crazy about traveling n
6、ow.3. I hated playing basketball before. Now I love it for my partner.2角度角度兴趣爱好变化兴趣爱好变化一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. 他之前不喜欢听歌。但现在他发现了听歌的乐趣。他之前不喜欢听歌。但现在他发现了听歌的乐趣。_ He disliked listening to songs in the past. But now he found great pleasure in listening to them.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句
7、句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 2. 我妹妹之前不喜欢京剧。然而，现在她迷上了京剧。我妹妹之前不喜欢京剧。然而，现在她迷上了京剧。_3. 我之前讨厌体育课。现在因为体育老师我喜欢它。我之前讨厌体育课。现在因为体育老师我喜欢它。_My sister didnt like Beijing opera. However, she is crazy about it now.I hated PE. class before. Now I love it for my PE. teacher.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. I am hap
8、py now and I work hard.Im much happier now, and I work even harder than I used to.2. I made lots of progress in English learning this year.With the help of the teacher and my classmates, I made lots of progress in English learning this year.3角度角度其他方面成长变化其他方面成长变化( (含经验、知识、价值观等含经验、知识、价值观等) )一阶 审好题三阶练语
9、段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 3. I knew the importance of time and planning.Day by day, I knew the importance of time and planning.4. I join in the volunteer activity. My experience of caring for others has improved so much.Thanks to joining in the volunteer activity, my experience of caring f
10、or others has improved so much.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. I am careful in my study now and very serious with it. (用比较用比较级升格级升格)_2. I realized the importance of putting things in order.(用用with the help of升格升格)_I am more careful in my study now and much more serious with it.With the help of
11、 my parents, I realized the importance of putting things in order.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 升升 格格 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 3. I began to believe that nothing is impossible if you are willing to do it.(用用day by day升格升格)_4. I take part in the sports meeting. I learned the true spirit in sports. (用用thanks to升格升格
12、)_Day by day, I began to believe that nothing is impossible if you are willing to do it.Thanks to taking part in the sports meeting, I learned the true spirit in sports.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. I have made great progress in the past three years.I am so glad that I have made great progre
13、ss in the past three years.2. I am sure I will grow up better with my fathers help.I am sure I will grow up better with my fathers help and I will love him forever.4角度角度成长后的感受成长后的感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 1. I have changed a lot these years. (扩写具体的感受扩写具体的感受)_2. I believe that I
14、 can almost do anything. (扩写条件扩写条件)_Im so pleased that Ive changed a lot these years.I believe that I can almost do anything if I believe in myself.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 扩扩 写写 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 The biggest personal change Ive ever made is _(变化变化). At first, I hated/didnt like _(事情事情). Later，_(影响自己影
15、响自己的一件事的一件事). After that, I found I fell in love with that I become more confident/outgoing/.语段练习语段练习1 1成长变化及感受成长变化及感受 learning English/taking part in afterclass activities/speaking in public/. my English teacher asked me to play a part in a group work/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 _(某事某
16、事)and I _(具体表现具体表现). At the same time, _(这件这件事事)is also a fantastic/wonderful way to pass my free time. From this experience, _ _(变化后的收获变化后的收获) learning English/speaking English in public/.wanted to learn more about English/. talking with my friends in English/. I realized that interest is the best
17、teacher/as long as we do what we want to do, we will be able to succeed/. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 The biggest personal change Ive ever madeThe biggest personal change Ive ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy books at all. Later, my mother
18、always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 写作练兵写作练兵 (2019临沂改编
19、临沂改编)时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot！”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你最重要的变化。文，描述你最重要的变化。1. 要点：要点：1)你过去是什么样的；你过去是什么样的； 2)你最重要的变化是什么；你最重要的变化是什么； 3)变化的过程及你的收获。变化的过程及你的收获。2. 要求：要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数100左右。左右。
20、2020 新变化新变化话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 I have changed a lot!_写作练兵I have changed a lot during the three junior high school time. I used to seldom care about others. However, the most important change is that I learned to take responsibilities. Last term, I joined the English Drama Club. The members were divided i
21、nto different groups and each group acted out a story. I was asked to play a small role without lines. However, I acted carefully every time and watched others play carefully. In the end, our performance was a great success. 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 _写作练兵Its the sense of responsibility that helps us do our wo
22、rk well. And from that I learned to be responsible at any moment.话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 巧用感叹句可将说话者说话时惊讶、喜悦、愤怒、气愤等巧用感叹句可将说话者说话时惊讶、喜悦、愤怒、气愤等思想感情表达得更加强烈。思想感情表达得更加强烈。巧用感叹句话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 教材链接1. 由由what引导：引导：She is an outgoing girl. What an outgoing girl she is!The music is beautiful. What beautiful music it is!2.
23、 由由how引导：引导：We were very excited. How excited we were!Miss Yang is a nice teacher. How nice a teacher Miss Yang is!巧用感叹句句式连接范例句式连接范例 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 教材链接1. John is a very clever boy. (用感叹句用感叹句)_2. The monkey is cute. (用感叹句用感叹句)_What a clever boy (John is)! /How clever John is!What a cute monkey (it is)! /How cute the monkey is!巧用感叹句小试牛刀小试牛刀 话题话题9 成长变化成长变化 教材链接3. Its fine today. (用感叹句用感叹句)_4. The children are playing happily over there.(用感叹句用感叹句)_What fine weather it is！巧用感叹句How happily the children are playing over there!
