1、话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 分析河南近分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知，年中招真题书面表达可知，“居住环境居住环境”这这一话题在一话题在2018年以年以“What I like about where I live”为题考查为题考查介绍自己居住的地方。结合全国真题可知，该话题通常还有介绍自己居住的地方。结合全国真题可知，该话题通常还有“介绍城乡生活的异同，选择哪种及理由介绍城乡生活的异同，选择哪种及理由”这一命题角度。这一命题角度。命题探索话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 (2018河南河南)每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like abo
2、ut where I live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇一篇短文，短文，描述你生活的环境描述你生活的环境。典例剖析典例剖析审审标题标题：我喜欢居住的地方我喜欢居住的地方审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审文体：说明文审文体：说明文一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. 要点：要点：1)你生活在什么样的环境你生活在什么样的环境； 2)你喜欢这个环境的什么你喜欢这个环境的什么； 3)你对这个环境有何期望你对这个环境有何期望。2. 要求：要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中
3、不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数80左右。左右。要点要点1：自己生活之处的交通、环境等。：自己生活之处的交通、环境等。 要点要点2：你生活的环境有什么独特之处。：你生活的环境有什么独特之处。 要点要点3：对这个环境的期待。：对这个环境的期待。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. I prefer to live in my city.I prefer to live in my city as this place has the beautiful scenery and the people here are kind.2. She like
4、s her hometown best.She likes her hometown best because it has left many soft and sweet memories in her heart.3. Our city is beautiful.Our city is beautiful and it is famous for its universities.1角度角度生活环境及喜欢的原因生活环境及喜欢的原因一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4. I would lik
5、e to go to the farm on holiday.I would like to go to the farm on holiday, and then I can pick fresh vegetables.话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. I would rather live in the countryside than in city.(扩写具体的原因扩写具体的原因)_2. The place I like best around me is my home. (扩写具体的因扩写具体的因)_I would rather live in the countryside t
6、han in city as the air isnt badly polluted in the countryside.The place I like best around me is my home because it is a place where I can get warmth and safety.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 扩扩 写写 话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 3. Zhengzhou is a good place for fun in my eyes. (扩写著名之处扩写著名之处)_4. He likes the life near th
7、e beach best. (扩写扩写具体的具体的原因原因)_Zhengzhou is a good place for fun in my eyes and it is famous for many places of interest. He likes the life near the beach best because he can often go surfing.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. Once a steel factory often throw the waste into the near river. Later
8、the government took action to improve the situation.2. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in the small town. Now the streets are wide and clean.2角度角度生活环境的变化生活环境的变化一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 3. Another big change is that there are much more tall buildings. People u
9、sed to live in old flats, but now most of them have moved into new houses.4. There were green hills and wild birds near the lake. The air was clean and fresh then. Now it has become a modern town. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. 曾经人们都往河里扔垃圾。之后政府采取措施应对这个问题。曾经人们都往河里扔垃圾。之后政府采取措施应对这个问题。_2. 过去，环境问题
10、严重，到处都是垃圾。现在，我的家乡发生了过去，环境问题严重，到处都是垃圾。现在，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。巨大的变化。_In the past, pollution was serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.Once people threw rubbish/garbage into the river. Later the government took action to deal with this problem.一阶 审好题三阶练语段
11、&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 3. 另一个巨大的变化是道路变宽了。现在，人们可以选择开车另一个巨大的变化是道路变宽了。现在，人们可以选择开车外出。外出。_4. 过去房屋既古老又小。现在，你可以看到很多现代建筑。过去房屋既古老又小。现在，你可以看到很多现代建筑。_The houses were old and small before. Now you can see many modern buildings.Another big change is that the roads become much wider. Now people can c
12、hoose to go out by car.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. In the country it is quiet and peaceful.In the country it is quiet and peaceful since there arent too many people.2. The people live in the city. They can seldom see the blue sky.The people who live in the city can seldom see the blue sky.
13、3角度角度介绍城乡生活异同介绍城乡生活异同一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 3. In the city there are interesting things to do. People have many choices of activities.In the city there are interesting things to do as people have many choices of activities.4. Now traveling from the city to the countryside is c
14、onvenient.Now it is convenient to travel from the city to the countryside.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 1. We live in the city. Everything is convenient for us now. (用原因用原因状语从句升格状语从句升格) _2. The people live in the countryside. They always seem friendly and helpful to their neighbors.(用定语从句升格用定语从
15、句升格)_The people who live in the country always seem friendly and helpful to their neighbors.Everything is convenient for us now since we live in the city.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 升升 格格 话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 3. More job opportunities are offered in the cities. Many college graduates search for work there (
16、用原因状语从句升格用原因状语从句升格)_4. Living in the city or the countryside is wonderful.(用用it is adj. to do sth.升格升格)_It is wonderful to live in the city or the countryside.Many college graduates search for work in the cities as more job opportunities are offered there.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 Our homet
17、own Zhengzhou is a beautiful city and it attracts many tourists every year. Firstly, _(独特之处独特之处1). Secondly,_(独特之处独特之处2).Thirdly, _(独特之处独特之处3). Do you like to go to my hometown? its the biggest city of Henan/it has the biggest population of Henan Province/.语段练习语段练习1生活环境及喜欢的原因生活环境及喜欢的原因 it has many p
18、laces of interest/it is famous for its places of interest/.its a city with a long history/the people there are friendly/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 Many people regard with great interest how their hometowns have changed. On the one hand, _(变化变化1) and _(变化变化2). On the other hand, the en
19、vironment has changed a lot/there are more trees on both sides of the road/.语段练习语段练习2生活环境的变化生活环境的变化 there are a lot of new and modern buildings now/the transportation becomes better than before/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 however, _(变化变化3). Therefore, I hope _(自己自己的期望的期望) the traffic becomes
20、 heavier than before/the air pollution becomes worse and worse/. more people can pay attention to the pollution/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语段练习语段练习3城乡生活的异同城乡生活的异同 There are some differences between city life and country life. To begin with, in the city _(表现表现1), while in
21、 the countryside _(差异表现差异表现1). Whats more, _(表现表现2) in the city. people live in apartments/buy vegetables from the supermarket/.people live in their houses/grow vegetables for themselves/. people go to supermarkets to buy what they need/they go outside by subway or by bus/.话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 But in the
22、countryside, _ _(差异表现差异表现2). Meanwhile, there is something in common between the city life and country life. _ (相同点相同点1) and _ (相同点相同点2) it isnt convenient for people to buy things/they dont have many interesting places for fun/.Its easy to find places for relaxing/.the life quality has improved a l
23、ot/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 What I like about where I liveI live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. It has a long history and its beautiful. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a
24、 slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.However, my city has her problems. She has no highspeed trains. I hope she will soon have highspeed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily!一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 (2019孝感改编孝感改编)随着年龄的增长，你周围的事随着年龄的增长，
25、你周围的事物也发生了很大的变化。请以物也发生了很大的变化。请以“Great changes around me”为题，为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍你周围的变化。并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍你周围的变化。1. 要点：要点：1)你周围事物过去的样子；你周围事物过去的样子； 2)你周围事物现在的改变；你周围事物现在的改变； 3)你对这些变化的感受。你对这些变化的感受。2. 要求：要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数100左右。左右。写作练兵写作练兵2020 新变化新变化话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 Great ch
26、anges around me_写作练兵写作练兵In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasnt fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.Nowadays, the roa
27、ds are wide and clean. Its really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city.话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 _写作练兵写作练兵Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The b
28、irds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.Our country is rich and strong, and we are living a happy life. Im sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初中在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初中
29、阶段能掌握简单的由阶段能掌握简单的由which, that, who, whom, whose等引导的定等引导的定语从句。先行词为人：语从句。先行词为人：who/that/whom/whose引导；先行词为引导；先行词为物：物：which/that/whose引导。引导。巧用定语从句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 教材链接1. 先行词为人：先行词为人：I know the girl who/that has curly hair.A nurse is a person who looks after patients health.He is the one who has given me a
30、 lot of help.2. 先行词为物：先行词为物：I like sports which/that are safe for me.This is the best gift that I have ever received.巧用定语从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 教材链接1. This is a book. It has a lot of stories._2. I like to make friends. They give me courage._3. Some things happened yesterday. Tom told them to
31、his mother._This is a book which/that has a lot of stories.I like to make friends who/that give me courage.巧用定语从句小试牛刀小试牛刀 Tom told some things that happened yesterday to his mother.话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 教材链接4. That is our plan for summer holiday. My father and I made it together._5. I asked Miss Li for hel
32、p just now. She is a teacher._That is our plan for summer holiday that my father and I made together.Miss Li is the teacher who/whom I asked for help just know.巧用定语从句话题话题4 居住环境居住环境 教材链接6. The school is famous. We visited it yesterday._7. I really like the family photo. We took it on my grandfathers 80th birthday._The school (that/which) we visited yesterday is famous. I really like the family photo (that/which) we took on my grandfathers 80th birthday.巧用定语从句
