1、Proof ReadingProof Reading 短文改错短文改错Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有错。看不出句子有错。2. 看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方,但答案不正确。或无法但答案不正确。或无法改正。改正。 “改错改错，越改越错改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。Procedures of the lessonRight or Wrong
2、?增加增加 been I have offered a scholarship at a university. I have offered a scholarship at a university. been I have offered a scholarship at a university. beenXXXXXI have got a good news to tell you.I have got a good news to tell you.I have got a good news to tell you.Right or Wrong?删除删除XXRight or Wr
3、ong?修改修改 Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop. Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop. Three weeks ago I bought the electronic andictionary at a shop.以以上上为不规范答题为不规范答题,均不给分，均不给分，E.g.: Whats more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next d
4、ay,he posted the message on the poster-board When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the drivewaytoa forI can return to home now.thein3.Unnecessary word3.Unnecessary word I like playing piano. I major at English.2.Missing word2.Missing word1.Wrong word1.Wrong word假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，假
5、定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中文中共有共有1010处语言错误，每句中最多有两处处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（) )，并在其，并在其下面写出该加的词。下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线删除：把多余的词用斜线 划掉。划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。修改后的词。 注意：注意：1. 1.每处错误及其修改均仅
6、限每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；一词； 2.2.只允许修改只允许修改1010处，多者（从第处，多者（从第11 11处起）处起）不计分。不计分。年度年度介介词词动动词词形或形或容副容副词词词词代代词词名名词词连连词词冠冠词词关关系系词词201421311110201312211111201223121001201123102110测试点测试点三、新高考短文改错三、新高考短文改错应试应试策略策略及及答题原则答题原则1. 1. 通读全文通读全文, , 理解文章理解文章. . 2. 2. 先易后难先易后难, , 找出明错找出明错. .3. 3. 对照考点对照考点, , 深入审读深入审读. .1.以改变实
7、词形式为原则.2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则5.以保持原意不变为原则1. 1.标点符号不改。标点符号不改。2.2.大小写不改。大小写不改。3.3.词序错误不改。词序错误不改。4.4.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改 。 文中出现带汉语注释的词，文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。在句中不可能用错。NextIt was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the b
8、ike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. Whats more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. andrunningdrovethatreallytoSo the next day, he posted the message on the
9、poster-board and put it in the before yard. To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feelings. But I am a Christian and I forgive him! When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakesfrontyouaBack得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 I 从词法和逻辑错误分析从词法和逻辑错误分析:II从句法的角
10、度去分析从句法的角度去分析:I 词法和逻辑错误词法和逻辑错误:1. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to 1. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to selfself seed where they please.(2014 seed where they please.(2014年新课标年新课标I) I)2. My father took me out camping for the first time .2. My father took me ou
11、t camping for the first time .My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.hunting.( (陕西卷陕西卷) ) 3. Share with others makes me feel happy.3. Share with others makes me feel happy.havecame 1.动词的动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误错误. 2. 主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。 3.
12、非谓语动词形式非谓语动词形式的误用的误用 Sharing4. One evening at sunset, 4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. barbecue. ( (陕西卷陕西卷) )5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the 5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. (sky. (陕西卷陕西卷) )
13、6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined 6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. to be just as good. 7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every 7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. minute shes outsi
14、de. （辽宁卷）（辽宁卷）wereAmazedunderstandhaving8. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are 8. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. often up all night with the baby. 9. Not only it provide the students with basic courses, but also i
15、t 9. Not only it provide the students with basic courses, but also it manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus activities and social practice. activities and social practice. 10. Dont panic or get out of line, and tryin
16、g to remain quiet and 10. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calm. calm. 11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially 11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. for the ones involved in
17、 the pedestrians. doestrybeenhas1. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class.1. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class.2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive 2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.and sometimes de
18、ath around me.deadclasses 1.1.可数可数与与不可数不可数名词的混用。名词的混用。 2. 2.可数可数名词的名词的单复数单复数的错用。的错用。 3. 3.名词的名词的格格的误用的误用 4. 4.词性的转换词性的转换3. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on 3. The man said, “my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”the floor.”4. Were called several time about Cleo
19、s early morning barking. 4. Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking. 5. Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more 5. Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English. attentions to practising my spoken English. 6.
20、 The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.6. The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.attentionbarbersteethtimes1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! 1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! ( (新课标新课标I) I)2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arro
21、ws 2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. (on the bird. (陕西卷陕西卷) )3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with 3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.people.（浙江卷）（浙江卷）immdiatelynoisywonderful1.1.形容词形容词、副词、名词等、副词、名词等词性词性的误用。的误用
22、。2.2.原级，比较级和最高级原级，比较级和最高级的误用。的误用。4. Li 4. Li MingMing enjoyed himself, competing and chatting enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. 5. I really take proud in this experience.5. I really take pro
23、ud in this experience.6. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 56. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5，000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as 7. I hope I can practis
24、e my spoken English there as more as possible. more as possible. pridehardmuchrelaxed1. The survey also shows that libraries are where 1. The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books. students get most of his books. 2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot 2. My u
25、ncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. the target. nonetheir1.1.前后人称不一致。前后人称不一致。2.2.人称代词人称代词，物主代词物主代词, ,反身代词反身代词的误用。的误用。3.3.不定代词不定代词的误用及混用。的误用及混用。 3. Though situations are tough today, a
26、 lot of we post80s are 3. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post80s are making great efforts to live a good life. making great efforts to live a good life. 4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its 4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its pas
27、t one hundred years history.past one hundred years history.5. I think important to learn the computer well.5. I think important to learn the computer well.6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for 6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.me.itsitus1. If
28、you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait 1. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(your teacher to lead you outside.(四川卷四川卷) )2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth 2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth w
29、ay. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital way. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.at once and telephoned his parents.tofor主要考查主要考查介词短语介词短语和和习惯用法习惯用法的搭配的搭配。3. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father, 3. Nearly five years ago
30、, with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果圣女果) ) in our back garden. (in our back garden. (新课标新课标I I卷卷) )4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. 4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.
31、 5. Soon they came up a good idea.5. Soon they came up a good idea.6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What 6. The woman was angry and said the man, “What are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?are you doing, sir? What are you looking for?fromwithtoof1. Today I can still remember how I b
32、ecame good table 1. Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.tennis player.2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat. 2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat. 3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. 3. Besides, Cleo tends t
33、o bark a average of six hours a day. theaan. . 冠词冠词a,ana,an和和thethe的错用或少用的错用或少用 连词连词but,andbut,and，or, so,because, although,or, so,because, although,therefore, howevertherefore, however的错用的错用4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a 4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who ow
34、ns a house and a car. Therefore, I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love, car. Therefore, I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.and I doubt how long it will last.5. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. 5. On Monday
35、, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. 6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they 7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard wint
36、er. experienced a hard winter. andorbutHoweverOur English teacher begin to teach us in 2012.She had been teaching English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really go
37、od teacher. We are love her very much. Were sure well get in well with each other.began hasyearsuswithbeautifulaon动词形动词形名词数名词数代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记还要注意形和副还要注意形和副冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾Passage1 My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in t
38、he afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around th
39、e classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. Passage 2 My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and tw
40、o in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. dontmuchforhoursthere My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the f
41、lowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. lookssithelpfultoSummary名词单复数名词单复数/ /形容词副词形容词副词/ /动词时态动词时态/ /代词代词. .1. 做题时应注意：做题时应注意
42、：叙事性叙事性文章首抓文章首抓_，以免理解有误；，以免理解有误；论述性论述性文章首抓文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词名词形容词冠词代词错误错误全文时态全文时态3.短文改错口诀代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注动词形，名词数；动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副；还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别；非谓语，细辨别；句子成份多分析句子成份多分析II从句法的角度去分析从句法的角度去分析:1.He put it in a secret place where I couldnt find.which2.The house which Lu
43、Xun once lived is being repaired now.where3. Ill never forget the day which I first went to school.when关系代词和关系副词的误用关系代词和关系副词的误用1.We would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.what2.But it didnt matter that I would win or not.whether 3.When people are playing games,the
44、y move a lot. That is how sports are good activities for their health. why连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用1.He got up early in order to he could catch the first.that2. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.where引导词的误用引导词的误用1) As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting templ
45、es and told stories. 2)I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. visitedseeing 3)Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? 4）Hot water is provided for 24 hours, but lifts work day and night. 5）I thought i
46、t was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football.andHoweverdoWhen I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle ,he said he could only give me half of the money, that
47、 was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasedif I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imaginewhat happy I was when I rode to school on my own
48、 bicycle. . When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. _friendsonewhichIwhenlatergavefor_how_
