1、高考应试作文写作训练正反观点对比正反观点对比越来越多的人拥有微博（越来越多的人拥有微博（ micro-blogmicro-blog），下表反），下表反映了映了人们对微博的不同看法人们对微博的不同看法 假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提示，给某英语报社写一篇示，给某英语报社写一篇100100词左右的英语短文，词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的看法。并发表自己的看法。注意：注意：1 1所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息；所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息；2 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。一部分人认为：一部分人认为：另一部分人认为：另一
2、部分人认为：1 1展示才华、分享经验；展示才华、分享经验；2 2认识朋友、增加知识认识朋友、增加知识1 1花费很多时间和精力花费很多时间和精力2 2影响工作和休息。影响工作和休息。书写注意事项书写注意事项3、一旦写错，规范修改、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划用一条斜线划掉即可。掉即可。 eg:He can speker English very well.He can speker speak English very well.Talk about it in your group.1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线
3、作为作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。给人一种凌乱的感觉。Game英文字母示例英文字母示例单从书写上看单从书写上看猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？中考各档书面表达示例中考各档书面表达示例214分分105Bad sample卷面不整洁卷面不整洁; ; 涂改较多涂改较多; ;语言错误多语言错误多; ;
4、层层次不清次不清; ;得得1111分分字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 对比鲜明对比鲜明Remember：We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.A A常见题型：常见题型：talk in your grouptalk in your group 1 1、根据根据汉语汉语提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 2 2、根据、根据表格表格提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 3 3、根据、根据图片图片提示完成作文。提示完成作文。 要求：写一篇要求：写一篇10010
5、0字左右字左右的英语作文。的英语作文。B写作策略写作策略: :please,remember审审 列列 润润( (整整, ,连连, ,美美) )草稿纸草稿纸 抄抄试卷试卷写作基本要求 1.字数达到要求。（100字左右） 2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。 3.语法正确。 4.标点正确。 5.文章内容是否切题 。 6.格式正确。 高考书面表达评分标准第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（21212525分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较语法结构或
6、词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。高考书面表达评分标准高考书面表达评分标准How to polish your WritingHow to polish your Writing本文属于本文属于_，基本时态是，基本时态是_，人称用人称用_议论文议论文一般现在时一般现在时第一和第三人称第一和第三人称审题审题抓要点，抓要点，列列提纲提纲-文章结构文章结构正
7、反正反观点观点对比对比类的类的文章文章提出问题提出问题不同观点对比不同观点对比说明自己观点说明自己观点构思构思-文章结构文章结构(1)With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs. 对微博有两种态度对微博有两种态度. (2) 态度一态度一: .一部分人认为它好，一部分人认为它好， 原因（原因（1）原因（）原因（2）(3)态度二态度二: 另一部分人认为它不好，另一部分人认为它不好， 原因（原因（1） 原因（原因（2），），(4)我的观
8、点我的观点: 好好or不好不好 ？提出问题提出问题不同观不同观点对比点对比说明自说明自己观点己观点表示不同观点的套语Paragraph1 Paragraph1 总起总起: :Different people hold/ have different Different people hold/ have different opinions.opinions. People have taken different attitudes People have taken different attitudes towards towards People have different opin
9、ions on this People have different opinions on this problem.problem. There are two opposite opinions about it. There are two opposite opinions about it. paragrap 2表达赞同观点表达赞同观点of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for the idea think Some people believe that 表达反对的观点表达反对的观点: :On the contr
10、aryOn the contrary, , of them hold a different view. of them hold a different view. of them hold the opposite opinion. of them hold the opposite opinion. HoweverHowever, each coin has two sides. , each coin has two sides. On the other handOn the other hand, people , people that .that . object(4)你的观点
11、你的观点: in my view / opinion, I agree with, As for me, As far as Im concerned,总结：总结：in brief, in a word, in summary 1技巧点拨技巧点拨How to polishHow to polish( (完善完善) ) your Writing your Writing词汇词汇句式句式衔接词衔接词22学以致用学以致用构思构思-短语短语观点一观点一 1展示展示才华、才华、分享分享经验；经验； 2认识朋友、增加知识认识朋友、增加知识show their talent ; share experien
12、cemeet new friends ; gain knowledge观点二观点二 1 1花费花费很多时间和精力很多时间和精力 2 2影响影响工作和休息。工作和休息。it takes both time and energy to do sth ;affect our work and rest高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的衔接词衔接词what is more (而且而且); in addition(此外此外)；besides, moreover(而且，此外而且，此外)however; on the contrary(正相反正相反)Therefore(因此，所以因此，所以); as a re
13、sult; because like; unlike, on the other handto sum up ; all in all1. 表示递进表示递进2. 表示转折表示转折How to polish your WritingHow to polish your Writing3. 3. 表示因果表示因果4. 4. 表示对比表示对比 5. 5. 表示总结表示总结: Some people think it is _ show their talent and share information. (赞同赞同) _ _ _, _, （与之相反）（与之相反） Others _. (持有不同持有
14、不同/ /相反的观点相反的观点) )小试牛刀：衔接词小试牛刀：衔接词Howeverhold a different viewhold the opposite opiniona good way to On the contrary More and more people have their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is good, because they can show their talent and share information. It is convenient to them. They can also meet n
15、ew friends and gain knowledge. However, different people hold different views. Others think it is bad. They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect our work and rest. I think the micro-blog is very good, because we can communicate with our friends.(1)More and more people have their o
16、wn micro-blogs. 句式-化腐朽为神奇With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see that many people set up their own micro-blogs.句式句式(1): It is + adj /n+(for sb). to do句式句式(2): 宾语从句宾语从句句式-化腐朽为神奇(2) Some people think it is good, because they can show their talent and share information. It is co
17、nvenient to them. Some people think it is a good way to show their talent and share a good amount of information and experience. Meanwhile, its convenient to keep in touch with friends.(3)They can also meet new friends and gain knowledge.It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowled
18、ge of the outside world.句式-化腐朽为神奇(4)Others think it is bad. However, others have opposite opinions. 注意：使用高级词汇注意：使用高级词汇They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blogs, which will affect our work and rest.(5)They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect ou
19、r work and rest. 句式-化腐朽为神奇非限定语从句名词性从句(6) I think the micro-blog is very good, because we can communicate with our friends.In my view, the micro-blog is a good tool for us to keep our eyes open and communicate with others. It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid gett
20、ing addicted. broaden our horizons 句式-化腐朽为神奇Dear sir, recently our classmates With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is a good way to show their talent and share information. Meanwhile, its convenient to keep in
21、touch with friends. It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowledge of the outside world. However, others have opposite opinions. They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blogs, which will affect our work and rest. In my view, the micro-blog is a good
22、 tool for us to broaden our horizons and communicate with others. It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid getting addicted. 词汇层面词汇层面1.越越晚晚学到的词汇，越有水平。学到的词汇，越有水平。2.越越往后往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。使用较高级的词汇
23、读书对心灵有益。Reading does good to our mindReading is beneficial to our mind.Readingis of great benefit to our mind.Reading is good for our mind.(1) Students can enrich their knowledge(2) Stuents can have a good command of their knowledge Students can learn their knowledge. 仿写文仿写文 How to polish your WritingHow to polish your Writingp 经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量p Study Constantly, And You Will Know Everything. The More You Know, The More Powerful You Will Be学习总结结束语当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的，所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。When You Do Your Best, Failure Is Great, So DonT Give Up, Stick To The End演讲人：XXXXXX 时 间：XX年XX月XX日
