1、How did you feel about the hiking?Is there any related homework from your teachers about the hiking ? What is the texts writing style ?What do you want to know according to the title? What activities did the author experience? Why are these experiences amazing? What is “Naadam”? . narration argument
2、ation expositiontime orderfirst personpast tensethe present tensethe future tenseopeningBodyclosingtopicwhenwhatwherewhofeelingfirst bodythe start of the festivalwhat I saw people wearing fancy Mongolian robes feeding horses practising archey chatting taking photossecond bodywrestlingdifferencesthir
3、d bodyhorse racesdifferent amazing participants-too youngamazing bravery-devotionsummary feelingtiring but rewardingexcitedcompetitorsfeelingsactivities.and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch.(Para1)After the opening ceremony a
4、nd some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. (Para2 )However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! (Para4)At first, I was a little worried about the childrens safety. (Para4)Im finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating with Naadam with my f
5、riend was totally worth it. (Para5)Tip1: using -ing/-ed to express emotionsI absolutely enjoyed the archery, too (Para5)Im finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating with Naadan with my friend was totally worth it. (Para5)He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional M
6、ongolian tent and eat hot pot. I cant wait!(Para5)Tip2: using adj./adv. or other ways to express emotionsamazing Its amazing that. To my amazement, . What amazes me most is that. ., which makes me amazed. ., making me feel amazed.opening topic feelingsbody activities feelingsclosing summary feelings
7、title whenwherewhowhathow feelings first personfirst personthe present tensethe future tensepast tense Look back to one festival that you have experienced recently and write a diary Further reading:A: Annas Diary eBook: Ireland, Anna, Books, Blushing: Kindle Store https:/ drafts with a partner. Use
8、the checklist to give feedback on your partners draft.An Unforgettable Dragon Boat Festival Experience Ill never forget the Dragon Boat Festival that I experienced last year , which left me a deep impression. The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of lunar calendar and is
9、 celebrated in honor of the great ancient poet, Qu Yuan. In the morning, my family and I brought some zongzi made of glutinous rice and meat to one river and threw them into it with our best wishes to Qu Yuan. After that, a dragon boat race was followed. It was my first time that I had experienced i
10、t in the flesh. To my amazement, some competitors were even younger than me. I was greatly impressed by their wonderful performances and bravery. Despite some tiredness, I felt excited and relaxed. Frankly speaking, I cant wait for next Dragon Boat Festival. (Yirou Ding)My Amazing Spring Festival Ex
11、perience The Spring Festival that I experienced this year in my hometown has unique meanings to every Chinese. It is represented by many interesting activities: lighting firecrackers, making dumplings and a big meal. On the eve, I was woken up by the early noise of firecrackers, which drew me to the
12、 street. I saw people in new clothes laughing and chatting happily. It seemed that everyone was bathed in the joyful atmosphere. After the breakfast, I went to visit my grandma to express our best wishes and heartfelt gratitude to them for their devotion and company. At night, the sky in the country
13、side was dotted with various firecrackers in order to drive away the evil spirits and welcome the promising new year. Tired but excited, I stayed wide awake that night. How I wish I could experience the Spring Festival every day! (Sichen Wu)教师点评：根据checklist, 这两位同学的作文基本符合节日日记的写作要求，语言措辞都比较好。从opening, body, closing 三个方面，把作者对于节日的感受、经历和最终的感想和期盼淋漓尽致的描写了出来。在第二段的节日活动中细节描写到位，并能恰当使用-ing 和定语从句，能准确的向读者清晰的传达作者的写作意图。高考链接应用文 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Bruce想来中国体验春节，向你询问一些有关春节的信息。请给他回一封信，内容如下： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 介绍春节； 3. 表达祝福。注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
