1、12010203概况三点击此处输入相关文本内容整体概况概况一点击此处输入相关文本内容概况二点击此处输入相关文本内容3。 1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或或句子成分多余句子成分多余 2 词性误用词性误用 3主谓不一致主谓不一致 4根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译45. 名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用6.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆7 .动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当8. 词组搭配错误词组搭配错误9综合性语言错误综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态，有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误56 改为1： 改为
2、2： 改为3： 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 as well as 14 15例Its likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.改为1： You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.16 改为2： Its likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent.改为3： 17例
3、2You cant success without your efforts.改为1：You cant succeed without your efforts.改为2：You cant obtain success without your efforts.改为3：You cant become successful without your efforts.18改为4： Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.19例3As the development of science and technology,-改为：
4、With the development of science and technology,- / As the science and technology develop -20改为： I usually do some public services for free, trying my best to serve the public.21例5 The public service advertisement is benefit to us.改为1: The public service advertisement is beneficial to us. 改为2: The pu
5、blic service advertisement benefits us.改为3：The public service advertisement is of great benefit to us. 22改为4: We benefits a lot from the public service advertisement. 23例6Some seniors were died because of without their childrens support.改为：Some seniors died for lack of their childrens support. 24例7T
6、he old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改为：The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. 25例8The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.改为： The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany our parents chatting . 26例9With the rapid dev
7、elopment of economic, the conditions of our life is improving.改为： With the rapid development of economy, the conditions of our life are improving.27例10They need economical concerned , but also mental concerned.改为： They need not only financial support, but also emotional support .28例11With the develo
8、pment of the mordern social, more and more families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the sum of the seniors has been increase quickly.改为： With the development of the modern society, an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the rapid increa
9、se of the sum of the seniors. cause sth. cause sb. to do sth.29例12The fire was because of the wrong of electricity.改为： The fire was due to electric fault.30例13The cause of the fire includes peoples careless and dry weather.改为： The cause of the fire includes peoples carelessness and dry weather.31例14
10、Although I am not a specialize student of computer, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever take a part-time summer job as a sellman before.改为： Although I am not a computer major / a student majoring in computer, I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever taken a part-time
11、 summer job as a salesman before.32例15Many students choice go to the library in their spare time in order to get more knowledge.改为： Many students choose to go to the library in their spare time in order to update their knowledge.33 改为： There are too many things we can do to protect our earth. 34 改为1
12、：Hard work then enables / helps us to achieve the success. 改为2: We are bound to succeed through hard work.35改为: With 36 改为：37383940. Students should Students should strive to learn knowledge. 41 4243 / Education and Science Institute 44 45 4647484950515253改为1: / improve earth environment .54改为2: / i
13、mprove earth environment .55改为1: 改为2: 56改为1:改为2: 改为3: 57改为: 58改为1: 改为2: 改为3: Various 59改为: 60改为: 61改为： 62 631、使用有难度的词汇；2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；3、使用被动语态；4、使用倒装句；(not only. but also.；only.)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。64There be +主语主语+定语定语+状语状语.1. There must be (a variety of) reasons for this.2. There is
14、 no point in talking about it about again. (sense/use/good)3.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem. 654. There remains nothing (more) (to be done).5. There is a great change (produced in the worlds communications).6. There is something (you dont know).7. The
15、re are about 78% of the college students (wanting to further their study after their graduation).66名词化结构名词化结构1名词从句转换成名词短语名词从句转换成名词短语That the women actively participate in public life causes the change of their role in the society.The womens active participation in public life -672. 表语从句转换成名词短语表语从句转换
16、成名词短语 One of the positive effects of physical exercise is that it contributes directly to a persons physical health.-is its direct contribution to a persons physical health.683由由of 连接含有连接含有by 的名词短语的名词短语That James Watt invented the steam engine started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.Th
17、e invention of the steam engine by James Watt694. 被动结构转换成名词被动结构转换成名词It has been suggested that we should spare no effort 不遗余力不遗余力to beautify our environment.A suggestion has been made that-705. 副词与动词一起转换成名词短语副词与动词一起转换成名词短语The computer is chiefly characterized by accuracy and quick computation.计算计算Th
18、e chief characteristic of the computer is -716.介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语The professor explained the theory of relativity to his students in detail.The professor gave his students a detailed explanation of -7. 动词转换成介词短语动词转换成介词短语Some problems are being discussed.Some problems are under discussi
19、on.72Exercise:He has breakfast quickly.As the science and technology develop, the peoples living standard is on the rise.There is still room for improving your work.What he said is brief and to the point.1.The money in itself is not important to us.73He has a quick breakfast.With the development of
20、science and technology, the peoples living standard is on the rise.There is still room for improvement in your work.His words is brief and to the point.The money in itself is of no importance to us.74平行结构平行结构1. 名词平行名词平行The doctor recommended plenty of food, sleep and exercise.2. 形容词平行形容词平行Air travel
21、 is fast, safe and convenient.3. 副词平行副词平行He always speaks English slowly and clearly.754. 非谓语动词短语平行非谓语动词短语平行They waited for hours at the airport, reading and sleeping.5. 动词平行动词平行Lucy and Lily lived, worked and studied together.766. 不定式平行不定式平行 To go ice skating and to go skiing are popular winter spo
22、rts in North china.7. 动名词平行动名词平行 My sister likes dancing, swimming and bicycling.778. 从句平行从句平行 extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of the children and because extra studies deprive children of the time to play and communicate with their peers, we may safely draw the conclu
23、sion that it is absurd不合理的，荒谬的不合理的，荒谬的 to force children to take extra studies after school.78Proof reading：To get a job you are satisfied with, it is not only depends on your ability, how to succeed in a job interview is also very important.Firstly, you should have a good appearance, tidy clothes,
24、making hair well.Her speech is witty诙谐的诙谐的, interesting and she plans it carefully.1.Her ideas were progressive and therefore adopted without doubts.79 ReferenceTo get a satisfactory job not only depends on your ability, but also on a successful job interview.Firstly, you should have a good appearan
25、ce, tidy clothes, well-done hair.Her speech is witty诙谐的诙谐的, interesting and carefully planned.1.Her ideas were progressive and therefore were adopted without doubts.80物称表达法物称表达法1. 被动语态被动语态The question is supposed to be more complicated. (be thought, regarded, believed, estimated /evaluated)2. 主语从句主语
26、从句(1) It+be+adj.+thatIt is highly important that we reach a correct conclusion.(clear, obvious, likely, surprising, true)81(2) It+be+V-ed+that It was pointed out that computer skills will enhance提高，增加提高，增加 their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. (well-known, generally believed, admitted, universally held , reported, stated)82问题提问与解答问答HERE COMES THE QUESTION AND ANSWER SESSION83添加标题添加标题添加标题添加标题此处结束语点击此处添加段落文本 . 您的内容打在这里，或通过复制您的文本后在此框中选择粘贴并选择只保留文字84谢谢聆听THANK YOU FOR LISTENING演讲者：XX 时间：202X.XX.XX
