1、 高考作文高考作文, 特别是基础写作特别是基础写作, 提供的提供的信息点信息点多多, 但但句数有限句数有限, 我们判断一个句子主要看其是否有谓语动词和其结构是否完整。一个句子只要求有一个谓语动词(要注意动词的时态和语态）。 She went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone. She went to work hurriedly , leaving her son playing alone. When she went to work hurriedly, she left her son playing alone. The
2、woman who went to work hurriedly left her son playing alone. There is a fact that she often went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone. I dont understand why she often went to work hurriedly and left her son playing alone There is a piece of interesting news that on a sunny morning 2 year
3、s ago, an 8-yearold Amercian boy Tom , who didnt have a concept of love, fell in love with a Chinese girl with long hair at the school gate and expressed his affection to her without hesitation, surprising all the people around.Phrases 用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到：常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作介词短语作定语定语,
4、 (2)介介词短语作词短语作状语状语。典型例题典型例题 用用介词短语介词短语将下列句子合并成将下列句子合并成一句。一句。(1) Waste water is making the river worse and worse. (2) The waste water is from a factory.合并：合并：Waste water (from the factory )is making the river worse and worse.课堂练习课堂练习用用介词短语介词短语合并每一组句子合并每一组句子1.(1)Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. (2
5、)It has an area of about 8 square kilometers.Xiaxi Town, with an area of about 8 square kilometers, is not big but beautiful. 我的父亲，一个意志坚强的七十来岁的老人，总是鼓励我遇到困难不要灰心。 My father,a strong-willed man over 70 years old,always encourages me not to lose heart before difficulty. My father, a seventy-year-old man
6、 with a strong will, always encourages me not to lose heart before difficulty.在写作中在写作中, 正确使用正确使用, 无疑为文无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括章增色不少。非谓语动词包括。使用时应注意以下几。使用时应注意以下几点：点：典型例题典型例题 用非谓语动词将以下各组用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话。句子分别合成一句话。1. (1)He worked hard at high school. (2) He wanted to enter a good university.用不定式合并：用不定式合并：H
7、e worked hard at high school to enter a good unversity.2. (1) I dont like the man. (2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses. 用现在分词合并：用现在分词合并：I dont like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses.3. (1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year. (2) It was built 1, 000 years ago.用过去分词
8、合并：用过去分词合并：The temple, built 1, 000 years ago, is visited by thousands of people. Built 1, 000 years ago, The temple is visited by thousands of people.课堂练习课堂练习用用非谓语动词非谓语动词合并每一组句子合并每一组句子1 We study the grammar hard . 2 We write an excellent composition. We study the grammar hard to write an excellent
9、composition. 1. (1)A violent earthquake struck France on April 11th , 2012. (2) The earthquake caused many deaths . A violent earthquake struck France on April 11th , 2012, causing many deaths .2. (1)I was seriously injured. (2)I couldnt stand up.(Because I was) Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up
10、. 在写作中在写作中, 我们运用并列连词合并我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有词有and, but, or, nor, so，yet(但是）但是），for, while(然而，可是然而，可是) ,as well as, both.and, not only.but (also), either. or, neither.nor, (and) then, since等。等。典型例句典型例句 用并列连词合并下列各组句子。用并列连词合并下列各组句子。1. (1) He is a friend in word.(口头上）口头上） (2) He is
11、 a friend in deed（实际上）（实际上）; too.用用as well as合并：合并：He is a friend in word as well as in deed.2. (1)I know her. (2)I am her best friend.用用not only.but also合并：合并：Not only do I know her, but (also) I am her best friend. 1 Toms family was poor. 2 Toms parents never complained and tried best to send him
12、to university. 3 Tom was greatly moved and worked hard to reward them. Poor as Toms family was ,his parents never complained and tried best to send him to university, so Tom was greatly moved and worked hard to reward them.课堂练习课堂练习 用并列连词合并每一组句子用并列连词合并每一组句子1. (1)Nowadays, a lot of attention is focuse
13、d on education. (2) The fact that many children from migrant workers families(农民工家庭）农民工家庭） have dropped out of school is ignored. Nowadays, a lot of attention is focused on education, yet(but) the fact that many children from migrant workers families have dropped out of School is ignored2. The gover
14、nment should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children. The average people should be aware of the importance, too.（not only but also/ as well as )The government, as well as the averagepeople should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children.No
15、t only the government but also the average people should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children. 要使文章漂亮要使文章漂亮, 在写作中不可能不在写作中不可能不使用使用主从复合句主从复合句, 最常用的从句是最常用的从句是状语状语从句、主语从句、表语从句、宾语从从句、主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。句和定语从句。典型例句典型例句1.(1) China is the third largest country in the world
16、. (2)Everyone knows it.用定语从句用定语从句/ 宾语从句合并：宾语从句合并：As everyone knows, China is the third largest country in the world. China is the third largest country in the world,which is known to everyone.Everyone knows that China is the third largest country in the world.课堂练习课堂练习 用用主从复合句主从复合句合并每一组句子合并每一组句子, 1.N
17、orth Korea launched a rocket and held a military parade in April ,2012 . 2.These activities drew the widespread attention of international society North Korea launched a rocket and held a military parade in April ,2012 , which drew the widespread attention of international society2. (1)An old tower
18、lies in the east of the town. (2)There is a river behind the tower.(使用倒使用倒装句，介词加装句，介词加which)In the east of the town lies an old tower, behind which there is a river.2. The government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted. It is my opinion.( 宾语从句、宾语从句、 主语从句，表语从句，）主语从句，表语从句
19、，）I think that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted. It is my opinion that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted. My opinion is that the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted
20、 That the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted is my opinion. 1 The city covers about 2000 squqre meters. 2 The city has more than 1000 years history. 3 The city is located in the Southeast Located in the Southeast ,the city covers about 2000 squqre meters wit
21、h a history of more than 1000 years The city,(which is ) located in the Southeast , has a history of more than 1000 years with an area of about 2000 squqre meters.课外作业课外作业 用用介词短语介词短语合并每一组句子合并每一组句子, 然后将然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1. A professor gave us a talk this morning. He came from
22、 Beijing University. He talked about how to learn English well.2. He told us of his own interesting experiences of learning English. We laughed a lot.3. His talk lasted an hour. He asked us some questions.4. His talk was vivid and instructive. I learned a lot from his talk.5. I went back home. I dec
23、ided to work hard at English. A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning. On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English, we laughed a lot. During the one-hour talk, he asked us some questions. I learned a lot from his vivid and instr
24、uctive talk. On my way back home, I decided to work hard at English.课外作业课外作业课堂练习课堂练习 用用非谓语动词非谓语动词合并每一组句子合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话五句话的连贯的连贯的短文。的短文。1. Im writing to you. I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.Im writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.2. Yesterday
25、 morning I was knocked down by a car. I was walking on the road at that time.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road.3. I was seriously injured. I couldnt stand up.Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up.4. A man saw what had happened to me. He stopped a taxi and sent m
26、e to a hospital.A man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Im writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road. Seriously injured, I couldnt stand up. Luckily, a man stopped a tax
27、i and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Not knowing his name, I call him Good Man.课堂练习课堂练习一、合并句子一、合并句子 用以上四种手段合并下列各用以上四种手段合并下列各组句子组句子, 然后将这然后将这5组句子组成一篇通顺自然组句子组成一篇通顺自然的短文。的短文。The Titanic hit an iceberg on its first voyage ,making it sink into the Atlantic Ocean on April 8th ,
28、1912. what happened on this day 100 years later. 2012, 4月8日，英国一艘名为“巴尔莫勒尔”号的游轮由南安普顿港出发. 1. On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship set sail from Southampton. 2. The ship is called Balmoral .On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship called Balmoral set sail from Southampton port.非谓语动词 在复活节这一天重走“泰坦尼克
29、”号百年前的航线，并继续其未完成的航程 1 .On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the Titanic sailed along hundred years ago. 2. It would continue the Titanic unfinished voyage.On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the Titanic sailed along hundred years ago and would continue the Titanic unfinished voyage.并列
30、句 英国南安普顿10日举行一系列活动纪念泰坦尼克号邮轮首航百年 1.Southampton held a series of activities. 2. It was in memory of the first voyage centennial of the Titanic cruise ship.Southampton held a series of activities in memory of the first voyage centennialof the Titanic cruise ship介词短语非限制性定语从句 100年前的这一天，这艘当时世界上最大的豪华邮轮正是从这
31、座城市起航，超过500名来自这个城市的船员也在此次航行中丧失了生命。 1. On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic was the worlds largest cruise ship at that time . 2. It set sail from this city . 3. More than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage.On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic which was the worlds largest cruise ship
32、 at that time set sail from this city and more than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage.定语从句 、 并列句 据报道， “巴尔莫勒尔”船上1309名乘客人数与当年泰坦尼克号上的人数一样，乘客中包括当年遇难者的亲属。 1 . Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics. 2. They included the relatives of the victims of the Titanic. 3. The re
33、porters reported.It was reported that Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics,including the relatives of the victims of the Titanic.主语从句， 非谓语动词 1.On April 8th,2012, an English cruise ship called Balmoral set sail from Southampton. 2.On Easter Day, the ship took the route that the “
34、Titanic” sailed along hundred years ago and would continue “ Titanic” unfinished voyage. 3.Southampton held a series of activities in memory of the first voyage centennial of the Titanic cruise ship。4. On this day 100 years ago ,theTitanic which was the worlds largest cruise ship at that time set sa
35、il from this city and more than 500 crew from this city were killed on this voyage. 5. It was reported that Balmoral carried 1309 passengers as many as the Titanics,including the relatives of the victims of the Titanic.1. 昨天昨天, 我们在班里进行了一场讨论。我们在班里进行了一场讨论。1. Yesterday we had a discussion in our class.
36、2. 我们讨论是否应该帮助那些困境中的人。我们讨论是否应该帮助那些困境中的人。2. We discussed whether we should help those in trouble.3. 我的一些同学说应该。我的一些同学说应该。3. Some of my classmates said we should.二、翻译合并二、翻译合并4. 他们认为帮助他人是我们中华民族的传统他们认为帮助他人是我们中华民族的传统美德。美德。4. Helping others is a good traditional virtue of us Chinese people.5. 一些人认为帮助他人不是个好主
37、意。一些人认为帮助他人不是个好主意。5. Others didnt think it a good idea to help other people.6. 现在的人忘恩负义。现在的人忘恩负义。6. People nowadays are ungrateful.7.我们可能受到我们想帮助的人的伤害。我们可能受到我们想帮助的人的伤害。7. We may be hurt by those who we are trying to help.8. 依我之见依我之见, 我们应伸出援助之手给那些需我们应伸出援助之手给那些需要帮助的人。要帮助的人。8. In my view, we should give
38、 a hand to the people in need of help.9. 人人能互相关心。人人能互相关心。9. Everyone can care for each other.10. 这个世界会更美好。这个世界会更美好。10.The world will become more beautiful.(一）一） 1. Yesterday we had a discussion in our class about whether we should help those in trouble. （二）（二）2.Some of my classmates said we should b
39、ecause helping others is a good traditional virtue of us Chinese people while others didnt think it a good idea to help other people as people nowadays are ungrateful. 参考短文参考短文3. whats worse, we may be hurt by those who we are trying to help. （三）（三）4.In my view, we should give a hand to the people in need of help.5. If everyone can care for each other, the world will become more beautiful.
