1、考试情况考试情况总分：总分：2525分分两个班平均分：两个班平均分：5.515.51 分数段：分数段：0 0：17.6%17.6%1-5:1-5:39.6%39.6%6-10 6-10：23%23%11-16:11-16:19.8%19.8%FinallysurveyIn my opinionunhealthy一、一、书写潦草，卷面涂改。书写潦草，卷面涂改。三、三、单词拼写和词性错误单词拼写和词性错误,句子缺少主谓句子缺少主谓,固定搭固定搭配记忆混乱。配记忆混乱。二、二、审题不仔细，信息内容不完整，缺少要点。审题不仔细，信息内容不完整，缺少要点。Band 2SimpleBand 4Fluent
2、 Band 5 IdiomaticBand 1poor1-5 marks6-10 marks11-15 marks16-20 marks21-25 marks漂漂亮亮一塌糊涂Band3Correct稀里糊涂马马虎虎有模有样Assessment CriteriaWhich is your goal？Learn to organize materials wellImprove students writing skillsEnhance self-confidence in writing题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点告知信告知信一般现在时一般现在时,一般过去时一般过去时Part
3、1:introduction:写信目的写信目的Part 2:(body：调查结果：调查结果)Part3:(conclusion:发表自己观点发表自己观点)一审一审(study)I/you/theyStep 2 Self-learnig支持(55%)反对(45%)你的观点 预测：要点预测：要点1.苗条更美、更有吸引力；2.在学习和生活中更自信.1.减肥浪费时间和金钱；2.减肥可能对健康有害.1.只要你很健康没有必要减肥；2.加强锻炼才是最重要的.二加二加(add)Step 3 Learn from each otherGroup 1：Para.1:写信目的写信目的Group 2：Para.2:支
4、持减肥支持减肥Group 3：Para.2:反对减肥反对减肥Group 4：Para.3:你的观点你的观点支持支持(55%)(55%)反对反对(45%)(45%)你的观点你的观点 1.苗条更美、更有吸引力；2.在学习和生活中更自信.1.减肥浪费时间和金钱；2.减肥可能对健康有害.1.只要你很健康没有必要减肥；2.加强锻炼才是最重要的.Step 4 Presentation and explanation 三美三美(beautify)一、善用好词和搭配原则一、善用好词和搭配原则二、巧用连词原则二、巧用连词原则三、多变句式原则三、多变句式原则be glad to,in ones opinion,s
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14、keep ts important to keep doing exercisedoing exercise.How about you?.How about you?Looking forward to your reply.Looking forward to your reply.宾从宾从宾从宾从倒装倒装it做形式主语做形式主语V-ing短语做主语短语做主语 书面表达努力方向 1.字迹卷面字迹卷面清楚清楚 2.结构清楚结构清楚：避免文章条理不清。：避免文章条理不清。要有段落（要有段落（3-4段），不能一段到底。段），不能一段到底。一段之内及段落之间要有一段之内及段落之间要有巧妙的巧妙的连接连接手段。手段。3.语言正确语言正确：防范语言失误。：防范语言失误。单词拼写不错，注意大小写单词拼写不错，注意大小写 词性意识要强词性意识要强 句式运用正确句式运用正确 语言地道：避免中式英语语言地道：避免中式英语 4.思维严密：思维严密：避免逻辑混乱避免逻辑混乱 Rome isnt built in a day.The more you read，accumulate(积积累）累）and practise，the better your writing will be！
