1、期末冲刺之读后续写欢迎来到英语课堂先来个自我介绍期末冲刺之读后续写我可能是个看起来比较严肃的人期末冲刺之读后续写对，没错，确实很严肃但是这个笑起来像两百斤胖子的人也是我好了，来个正儿八经的介绍吧！对了，我还想跟大家补充一点！这是我的快乐源泉！据说读后续写都是你们的痛？据说浙江省高考读后续写平均分也只有14分？据说读后续写有套路？但是任何套路都需要真诚相伴。而英语学习道路上的真诚则是单词和语法。因为空手是永远套不来白狼的。据说读后续写有套路？但是任何套路都需要真诚相伴。而英语学习道路上的真诚则是单词和语法。因为空手是永远套不来白狼的。套路单词语法读后续写期末冲刺之读后续写东莞中学2020-202
2、1学年度高二第一学期第一次段考过渡+要点+细节+感悟续写三步法续写造句句型句型练习真题展示真题讲解本节课教学内容期末冲刺之读后续写01真题展示 期末冲刺之读后续写东莞中学2020-2021学年度高二第一学期第一次段考真题展示句型练习真题讲解阅读下面材料，根据内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写词数应为150左右。“Charlie,take your medicine now!”Wow!His mother was really shouting at him.Charlie thought she didnt have to do it.It was so boring.
3、And he spent hours on his books,hoping that time would pass and it would soon be time for supper.He had a cold and he seized the chance to stay at home for a whole day.He felt great because he neednt go to school.It was Friday And he could stay at home for three days.He did have a cold but it was no
4、t serious.As usual,he was lying on his bed,busy staring at the ceiling,daydreaming.Suddenly,some of his classmates appeared by the window.“Good evening.Charlie.Mr.Evans let us tell you your homework and we are happy to you with it.Lets do it and we can go outside to play together,“said one of the cl
5、assmates.Charlie laughed,“How are you going to help with my homework?Its the most boring thing in the world!”But he dared not to hurt his classmates kindness and he took out all the books.Charlie watched his guests,and was so surprised to see what they did.In less than a minute,they formed teams and
6、 were busy playing with the pen,the eraser,the book,and the paper.And they acted as different teachers of the subjects that day.The first class was grammar,which Charlie had read by himself at home but made him puzzled once in a while.His classmate Tom explained the usage to him with exact interesti
7、ng words.He immediately understood the important points and difficulties.When faced with his homework,he felt it so easy.And when Mary taught him maths,she was an excellent maths teacher who let Charlie feel maths was great fun and so easy.The other classmates were also really great teachers.Charlie
8、 really enjoyed listening to those classmates.Time passed so quickly.Suddenly his mother called them for supper.期末冲刺之读后续写东莞中学2020-2021学年度高二第一学期第一次段考真题展示句型练习真题讲解Paragraph 1“Aha!This is so much fun”he said,as he got up to supper._Paragraph 2The three days changed Charlie completely._期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真
9、题讲解思路 泛读-梳理(5W+1H)何人在何时何地因何发生何事，结果如何方法 想象与拓展 1.从第一段首句到第二段首句：盯着第二段首句编，想五个点 2.从第二段首句到结局：莫偏离文章主题，想五个点 3.情节简单，结局清楚，注意细节、心理和动作，升华主题句型 过渡+要点+细节+感悟 时间/地点/关联词过渡，sb.,with sth.in his hand/with sth.on his head,doing sth1,did sth2,doing sth3,doing sth4,feeling+表示情绪的形容词,looking+表示情绪的形容词.读后续写三步法期末冲刺之读后续写02句型练习 期末
10、冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第三步：句型（过渡+要点+细节+感悟时间/地点/关联词过渡,sb.,with sth.in his hand/with sth.on his head,doing sth1,did sth2,doing sth3,doing sth4,feeling+表示情绪的形容词,looking+表示情绪的形容词期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解she saw those pictures and she recalled her childhood.she saw those pictures，recalling her childhood.主1+谓
11、1期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解doing的使用条件主1=主2 谓1和谓2：同时进行或者不强调先后关系 主语和谓语动词主动关系+连词 +主2+谓2主1+谓1+“，”+谓2动词-ing期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解一、判断下列句子是否符合此句型的使用条件1.他说他不知道这件事情，并且叹了一口气。2.小明拦了一辆车，可是司机却没停。3.他说着并且他低头满怀爱意地看着女儿。4.布莱克夫人坐下来，喘着粗气。5.简看到直升飞机，挥动着她的黄色上衣，并大声呼救。（是）（否）（是）（是）（是）期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解二、按照句式，请判断下列句子是否正确1.Mrs.B
12、lack sitting down,breathing heavily2.Seeing the helicopter,Jane waved her yellow blouse,and screaming for help.3.“None of us do,”said Dr.Dorian,sighed.4.“Hows Avery?”he asked,opened his eyes wide.5.“What are your names,please?”asked Wilbur,trembling with joy.6.He said,looking down at his daughter wi
13、th love.7.He slept the first night in a field,felt lonely,tired,cold and hungry.sat 去掉and sighing opening是 是 feeling 期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解变doing句式的步骤 she saw those pictures and she recalled her childhood.she saw those pictures，recalling her childhood.拆：去连词定：定主干变：变doing合：句子整合期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解三、请使
14、用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落1.He was trembling in a blanket and he said,“Im cold.”He was trembling in a blanket,telling“Im cold.”2.I sat back in an easy chair and fell asleep.I fell asleep,sitting back in an easy chair.3.When I saw no one noticing us,I put the Christmas present down and left.Seeing no one noti
15、cing us,I put the Christmas present down and left.4.When she arrived there,she searched the unfamiliar building,and asked for Zatannas dormitory from door to door.Arriving there,she searched the unfamiliar building,asking for Zatannas dormitory from door to door.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解三、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句
16、子或小段落5.He looked at me and bit his lips.He looked at me,biting his lips.6.For a few moments,I just stood there.I held that ten-dollar bill and I wondered what to buy and who to buy it for.For a few moments,I just stood there,holding that ten-dollar bill,wondering what to buy and who to buy it for.7.
17、When he saw the coat in the bag,he looked very astonished and then asked his mother to come out.Seeing the coat in the bag,he asked his mother to come out,looking very astonished.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解三、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落8.Here,he said.At the same time he handed the coins to the gatekeeper.Here,he s
18、aid,handing the coins to the gatekeeper.9.A tall girl answered the door and she was frowning.She told Emily that Zatanna was working in the school caf.When she heard this,she forced a faint smile,thanked her and left.A tall girl answered the door,frowning,telling Emily that Zatanna was working in th
19、e school caf.Hearing this,she forced a faint smile,thanking her and left.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解三、请使用现在分词结构改写下列句子或小段落10.She wrote“To Bobby,From Santa Claus”on it.Then she drove me over to Bobby Deckers house as she explained I was officially one of Santas helpers.Having written“To Bobby,From Santa Cla
20、us”on it,she drove me over to Bobby Deckers house,explaining I was officially one of Santas helpers.当非谓语动词的动作先于谓语动词而发生时，非谓语部分要用having done的形式。扩充一下你的小词库！期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解过渡词类别英文中文时间过渡突然地毫不犹豫.以后不久以后与此同时立即几天后之后suddenlywithout any hesitationhalf an hour/a few minutes/+几分钟laterbefore longmeanwhileimm
21、ediatelyin a few daysafterwards期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解过渡词类别英文中文逻辑关联词幸运的是/不幸运的是然而表示结果和原因的过渡词因此因此fortunately/unfortunatelyhoweverconsequentlyaccordingly期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解delightedmerrypleasedcheerful表示开心的形容词期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解sorrowfuldiscourageddepressed表示伤心的形容词期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解furiousannoyed表
22、示生气的形容词期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解frightenedscared表示害怕的形容词terrified期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解表示情绪的形容词类别英文中文表示开心和高兴的形容词高兴的高兴的高兴的快乐的表示悲伤和难过的形容词悲伤的灰心的沮丧的表示生气的形容词恼怒的恼怒的表示害怕的形容词害怕的害怕的非常害怕的delightedmerrypleasedcheerfulsorrowfuldiscourageddepressedfuriousannoyedfrightenedscaredterrified期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解表示情绪的形容词类别
23、英文中文表示惊讶的形容词astonished感到惊讶的open-mouthed目瞪口呆的amazed感到惊讶的表示失望的形容词disappointed感到失望的表示厌恶的形容词disgusted感到恶心的bothered感到讨厌的表示喜爱的形容词affectionate充满爱的表示疲劳的形容词fatigued疲乏的再扩充一下关于情绪描写的短语！期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解1.feel a surge of+表示各类情绪的名词【例句】她伤心不已。Feeling a surge of sorrow,she couldnt help crying bitterly.【开心】deligh
24、t,excitement【生气】anger,rage,fury【悲伤】sorrow期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解2.be overcome with+表示各类情绪的名词【例句】当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome with excitement.【开心】delight,excitement【生气】anger,rage,fury【悲伤】sorrow期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解3.burst into+n.=burst out+V-ing【例句】她突然哭了起来，跑开了。She bur
25、st into tears,running away.【笑】laughter,laughing【哭】tears,crying【欢呼声】cheers,cheering 期末冲刺之读后续写03真题讲解期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解思路 泛读-梳理(5W+1H)何人在何时何地因何发生何事，结果如何方法 想象与拓展 1.从第一段首句到第二段首句：盯着第二段首句编，想五个点 2.从第二段首句到结局：莫偏离文章主题，想五个点 3.情节简单，结局清楚，注意细节、心理和动作，升华主题句型 过渡+要点+细节+感悟 时间/地点/关联词过渡，sb.,with sth.in his hand/with s
26、th.on his head,doing sth1,did sth2,doing sth3,doing sth4,feeling+表示情绪的形容词,looking+表示情绪的形容词.读后续写三步法期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第一步：思路（泛读+梳理：5W+1H）时空线（明线）情节线（明线）情感线/状况（暗线）【不限于形容词或副词】时间 空间 _段 _段 _段 in the cold winterin Charlies homeCharlie,his classmates,his motherHis classmates came to taught him what th
27、ey learned at school.boring-enjoyableBecause of the cold,Charlie didnt want to go to school and stayed at home.Charlies classmates came to his house and help him with homework by acting different teachers of the subjects.Charlies classmates made the class interesting and funny,and Charlie really enj
28、oyed it.12-34人物事件期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 1序号具体内容12345Paragraph 21234朋友劝告态度转变 感冒好转继续上课妈妈骄傲积极学习学习进步帮助他人老师梦想期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 1中文要点思路拓展朋友劝告态度转变感冒好转继续上课妈妈骄傲与此同时，汤姆手里拿着书，正在收拾查理的桌子，他说与此同时，汤姆手里拿着书，正在收拾查理的桌子，他说:“:“当然，我已经告当然，我已经告诉过你，学习的方式很有趣，帮助你享受它。为什么不从现在开
29、始，找到你诉过你，学习的方式很有趣，帮助你享受它。为什么不从现在开始，找到你自己积极学习的方法呢自己积极学习的方法呢?”?”几秒钟后，查理陷入了沉思，开始制定计划，发明了新的疯狂的方法，让学几秒钟后，查理陷入了沉思，开始制定计划，发明了新的疯狂的方法，让学习更有趣，感觉很满足。习更有趣，感觉很满足。更重要的是，查理在他母亲的悉心照顾下，他的感冒不够严重，越来越好。更重要的是，查理在他母亲的悉心照顾下，他的感冒不够严重，越来越好。于是，在这个周末，于是，在这个周末，Charlie在朋友的帮助下继续学习，与他们分享了自己的在朋友的帮助下继续学习，与他们分享了自己的计划，感到了一种从未有过的充实感。
30、计划，感到了一种从未有过的充实感。母亲看到儿子的变化后，一句话也没说，就为儿子做了一道沙拉，为儿子感母亲看到儿子的变化后，一句话也没说，就为儿子做了一道沙拉，为儿子感到无比自豪，对他微笑着。到无比自豪，对他微笑着。期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 1中文要点思路拓展朋友劝告态度转变感冒好转继续上课妈妈骄傲与此同时，汤姆手里拿着书，正在收拾查理的桌子，他说与此同时，汤姆手里拿着书，正在收拾查理的桌子，他说:“:“当然，我已经告当然，我已经告诉过你，学习的方式很有趣，帮助你享受它。为什么不从现在开始，找到你诉过你，学习的方式很有趣，帮助你
31、享受它。为什么不从现在开始，找到你自己积极学习的方法呢自己积极学习的方法呢?”?”In the meantime，Tom，with the books in his hand，tidying up Charlies table,said“Of course,I have already told you that learning in an interesting way,helping you enjoy it.Why not find your own way to study positively from now on?”几秒钟后，查理陷入了沉思，开始制定计划，发明了新的疯狂的方法，
32、让学几秒钟后，查理陷入了沉思，开始制定计划，发明了新的疯狂的方法，让学习更有趣，感觉很满足。习更有趣，感觉很满足。A few seconds later,Charlie,lost in thought,beginning to make plans,inventing new and crazy ways to make study more funny,feeling satisfied.更重要的是，查理在他母亲的悉心照顾下，他的感冒不够严重，越来越好。更重要的是，查理在他母亲的悉心照顾下，他的感冒不够严重，越来越好。Whats more,Charlie,with his mothers g
33、ood care,his cold not serious enough,getting better and better.于是，在这个周末，于是，在这个周末，Charlie在朋友的帮助下继续学习，与他们分享了自己的在朋友的帮助下继续学习，与他们分享了自己的计划，感到了一种从未有过的充实感。计划，感到了一种从未有过的充实感。Therefore，on this weekend，Charlie，continuing to study with the help of his friend,shared his plans with them，feeling a sense of fullness
34、 that he have never felt before.母亲看到儿子的变化后，一句话也没说，就为儿子做了一道沙拉，为儿子感母亲看到儿子的变化后，一句话也没说，就为儿子做了一道沙拉，为儿子感到无比自豪，对他微笑着。到无比自豪，对他微笑着。After noticing the change of his son，his mother，without any words，made a salad for his son，feeling extremely proud of him，smiling at him.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Para
35、graph 1中文要点英文表达朋友劝告态度转变感冒好转继续上课妈妈骄傲In the meantime，Tom，with the books in his hand，tidying up Charlies table,said“Of course,I have already told you that learning in an interesting way,helping you enjoy it.Why not find your own way to study positively from now on?”A few seconds later,Charlie,lost in t
36、hought,beginning to make plans,inventing new and crazy ways to make study more funny,feeling satisfied.Whats more,Charlie,with his mothers good care,his cold not serious enough,getting better and better.Therefore，on this weekend，Charlie，continuing to study with the help of his friend,shared his plan
37、s with them，feeling a sense of fullness that he have never felt before.After noticing the change of his son，his mother，without any words，made a salad for his son，feeling extremely proud of him，smiling at him.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 2中文要点思路拓展积极学习学习进步帮助他人老师梦想不久，查理下定决心，开始积极学习，为早上
38、最早的课程做准备。不久，查理下定决心，开始积极学习，为早上最早的课程做准备。一天又一天，查理在期末考试中拿了第一名，紧握着成绩单，他一天又一天，查理在期末考试中拿了第一名，紧握着成绩单，他的进步让老师惊讶不已，感到非常满意。的进步让老师惊讶不已，感到非常满意。因此，查理决定帮助其他和他一样不喜欢学习的同学，扮演老师，因此，查理决定帮助其他和他一样不喜欢学习的同学，扮演老师，激发他们的兴趣。激发他们的兴趣。在周围人的鼓励下，在周围人的鼓励下，CharlieCharlie下定了当老师的决心，坚定而自信地下定了当老师的决心，坚定而自信地为自己的梦想制定了计划。为自己的梦想制定了计划。期末冲刺之读后续
39、写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 2中文要点思路拓展积极学习学习进步帮助他人老师梦想不久，查理下定决心，开始积极学习，为早上最早的课程做准备。不久，查理下定决心，开始积极学习，为早上最早的课程做准备。一天又一天，查理在期末考试中拿了第一名，紧握着成绩单，他一天又一天，查理在期末考试中拿了第一名，紧握着成绩单，他的进步让老师惊讶不已，感到非常满意。的进步让老师惊讶不已，感到非常满意。因此，查理决定帮助其他和他一样不喜欢学习的同学，扮演老师，因此，查理决定帮助其他和他一样不喜欢学习的同学，扮演老师，激发他们的兴趣。激发他们的兴趣。在周围人的鼓励下，在周围
40、人的鼓励下，CharlieCharlie下定了当老师的决心，坚定而自信地下定了当老师的决心，坚定而自信地为自己的梦想制定了计划。为自己的梦想制定了计划。Before long,with great determination,Charlie began to study actively,preparing his work for classes earliest in the morning.Day by day,Charlie,at the final exam,got the first prize,holding tightly the report card,surprising
41、his teacher a lot at his great progress,feeling extremely satisfied.For this reason,Charlie decided to help other classmates who dislike studying like him,acting teachers,inspiring their interests.With the encouragement from people around,Charlie made his dream to be a teacher,making plans for it fi
42、rmly and confidently.期末冲刺之读后续写真题展示句型练习真题讲解读后续写第二步：方法（想象+拓展Paragraph 2中文要点英文表达积极学习学习进步帮助他人老师梦想Before long,with great determination,Charlie began to study actively,preparing his work for classes earliest in the morning.Day by day,Charlie,at the final exam,got the first prize,holding tightly the report
43、 card,surprising his teacher a lot at his great progress,feeling extremely satisfied.For this reason,Charlie decided to help other classmates who dislike studying like him,acting teachers,inspiring their interests.With the encouragement from people around,Charlie made his dream to be a teacher,making plans for it firmly and confidently.加油！THANKS
