1、Unit 5 MUSICLesson 5 Reading for Writing高一人教版英语必修二第五单元广东广雅中学广东广雅中学 吴嘉慧吴嘉慧TaskIn this lesson,you are going to write a speech about how music has helped you or someone you know.The Virtual ChoirThe power of music lies in _ and thus making the world _.As one virtual choir member said,“Music helps me to
2、.forget my problems.With music,I become someone else.”connecting people togethera better placeHow can music help people in their personal struggles?Warm-upSarah Williams1.Where is she?She is in hospital.2.What is she doing?She is lying in bed,listening to music and doing the victory gesture.3.How is
3、 she different from you?She is suffering a serious illness and has to receive treatments in hospital.Pre-listeningSarah WilliamsPre-listeningSarah was invited to the International Music Forum to talk about how music can change a persons life.What is the main idea of Sarahs speech?Listening to music
4、changed her life during dark times by making her feel happy and giving her hope.Pre-listeningListen for main ideaHow did music help her during her difficult time?What is her advice to others?Sarah had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.What was Sarahs problem?Music gave her happiness,stre
5、ngth,relief,hope and a sense of satisfaction.Her advice to others is to use music help when they have problems.Writing task:Write a speech图片来源于网络Has music ever changed your life?Or,has it ever changed the life of someone you know?You,like Sarah,are also invited to the International Music Forum to gi
6、ve a speech on how music can change a persons life.213ContentStructureLanguageWriting task:Write a speechPre-writing1ContentmusicHow has music helped you/someone you know?How does music make you/others feel?(1)Music helps us overcome our stress and anxiety and become optimistic towards life.(2)Music
7、 helps us figure out our career path to be a singer/music producer and make a living.(3)Music helps us find out our identity so that we can live a more meaningful life.(4)Music helps us connect to others and have a sense of belonging.(5)Music helps us recover from our illness and keeps us healthy.1C
8、ontentHow has music helped you/someone you know?How does music make you/others feel?You may write the experience in this way:_ years ago,_.Then one day,_.That was how music helped _.Pre-writing123Welcome the audience.12Introduce yourself.3Propose the topic.2Structure2StructureClose the speechPersona
9、l feelingsIntroduce yourselfWelcome the audienceThank the audience at the endPropose the topicPersonal anecdote Good morning!My name is Sarah Williams.Its an honor to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.Paragraph 2Paragraph 3Paragraph 4Thank you!Pre-writ
10、ing2Structure1234566Welcome the audienceIntroduce yourselfPropose the topicPersonal anecdotePersonal feelingsClose the speechThank the audience Pre-writingPre-writing2StructurePractice:How many paragraphs will you write?What is the function of each paragraph?Make an outline of your speech.P1:Good mo
11、rning.My name is _,and I am here to talk about _.P2:_ years ago,_P3:(tell how music made you/others feel)P4:I hope _.Thank you!P1:Welcome the audience-Introduce yourself-Propose the topic P2:Personal anecdoteP3:Personal feelingsP4:Close the speech-Thank the audience3LanguageMusic gave me _.When I _,
12、it made _.It was _ that I _.It became my _.It spoke words of _ to the deepest part of my being.Practice:Use these sentence structures to help you write some key sentences about how music helped you/someone you know.Pre-writing3LanguageA Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had
13、no hope at all?B John A.Logan said,Music is the medicine of the mind.C Music gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.D.it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.E It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through
14、 those hard times.F It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.metaphor(暗喻)_ personification(拟人)_ quote(直接引语)_repetition(排比)_ rhetorical question(设问)_ simile(明喻)_ECFABDPre-writing3LanguagePractise using some rhetorical devices to polish some sentences of
15、 your speech.Music gave me _.When I _,it made _.It was _ that I _.It became my _.It spoke words of _ to the deepest part of my being.Pre-writingWriting图片来源于网络P1:Good morning.My name is _,and I am here to talk about _.P2:_ years ago,_P3:Music gave me _P4:I hope _.Thank you!Write your speech.Keep the
16、following three aspects in mind:1.content(share how music changed your/others life through an experience)2.structure(4 paragraphs)3.language(the use of rhetorical devices)RevisingRevise the speech using this checklist:1.Did you include a concrete(具体的具体的)experience to share how music helped you/someo
17、ne you know?2.Did your writing follow the structure of a speech?3.Did you use some rhetorical devices to make the language of your speech more powerful?Homework图片来源于网络Deliver your speech in your class.Share the power of music to others!Summary of the unitLessonsTasksListening and speakingTalk about
18、music preferencesReading and thinkingLearn about experiencing music onlineDiscovering useful structure Express feelings and describe situationsListening and talkingPlan a music festivalReading for writingWrite a speech*Video timeWorld music:WOMAD Music is the universal language of mankind.-Henry Wad
19、sworth LongfellowWriting task:Write a speech图片来源于网络You are invited to the International Music Forum to give a speech on how music can change a persons life.213contentstructurelanguageSample writing Good morning!My name is Kate and I am here to talk about how music changed my life.Have you ever been
20、at a total loss as to what to do with your life?Two years ago when I entered senior high,we were required to think about our future plans so that we could make serious choices of our subjects.I had never thought about what to do with my life.I felt like my future is a piece of shapeless cloud floati
21、ng in the air and swaying in the wind.Then one day,in a music lesson,when I played one of my compositions in front of the whole class,the satisfied look of my teacher and classmates struck me like a flash of lightening.Why not turn my love of music into my career?I decided to be a music producer and
22、 I was no longer at a loss.That was how music helped me.Sample writing Music gave me relief.When I was frustrated with my study,music was a dear old friend to whom I could always turn to for comfort.It spoke words of encouragement when I was at a loss.Music gave me strength and a sense of direction.
23、It was like a lighthouse that guided my path in the dark and helped me regain confidence.Moreover,music gave me my identity.When I listened to and played music,it made me sure of who I was and who I would be.Some of you may also be struggling about what you want to do with your life.Dont panic.Try p
24、utting on the earbuds and listening to music.It might help you in the same way that it helped me.I hope all of us will be blessed by the power of music in our future life.Thank you!1Content Have you ever been at a total loss as to what to do with your life?Two years ago when I entered senior high,we
25、 were required to think about our future plans so that we could make serious choices of our subjects.I had never thought about what to do with my life.I felt like my future is a piece of shapeless cloud floating in the air and swaying in the wind.Then one day,in a music lesson,when I played one of m
26、y compositions in front of the whole class,the satisfied look of my teacher and classmates struck me like a flash of lightening.Why not turn my love of music into my career?I decided to be a music producer and I was no longer at a loss.That was how music helped me.at a loss about my future-decide to
27、 be a music producer2StructureGood morning!My name is Kate and I am here talk about how music changed my life.Have you ever been at a total loss as to what to do with your life?.Music gave me relief.I hope all of us will be blessed by the power of music in our future life.Thank you!1.Welcome the aud
28、ience2.Introduce yourself3.Propose the topic4.Personal anecdote5.Personal feelings6.Close the speech7.Thank the audience3Language Music gave me relief.When I was frustrated with my study,music was a dear old friend to whom I could always turn to for comfort.It spoke words of encouragement when I was
29、 at a loss.Music gave me strength and a sense of direction.It was like a lighthouse that guided my path in the dark and helped me regain confidence.Moreover,music gave me my identity.When I listened to and played music,it made me sure of who I was and who I would be.repetitionmetaphorpersonificationsimile
