1、读后续写练习与赏析：放风筝等3则读后续写赏析1：放风筝“Will you give my kite a lift?”said my little nephew to his sister, after trying in vain to make it fly by dragging it along the ground. Lucy very kindly took it up and threw it into the air, but, her brother neglecting to run off at the same moment, the kite fell down aga
2、in.“Ah! Now, how awkward you are! said the little fellow.“ It was your fault entirely, answered his sister.“Try again, children, “said ILucy once more took up the kite. But now John was in too great a hurry, he ran off so suddenly that he twitched (猛拉)the kite out of her hand, and it fell flat as be
3、fore. “Well, who is to blame now? ”asked Lucy. Try again, said I.They did, and with more care, but a side wind coming suddenly, as Lucy let go the kite, it was blown against some bushes, and the tail became twisted, leaving the poor kite hanging with its head downward“There， there!” exclaimed John,
4、“that comes of your throwing it all to one side.”“As if I could make the wind blow straight, said Lucy. In the meantime, I went to the kites assistance and rolled it up, saying, Come, children, there are too many trees here; Let us find a more open space, and then try again.”We presently found a nic
5、e grass plot, and all things being prepared, I tossed the kite up just as little John ran off. It rose with all the dignity of a balloon, but John, delighted to find it pulling so hard at the string, stopped short to look upward and admire. Down came the kite to the grass. “Oh, John, you should not
6、have stopped”, said I. However, try again.”“I wont try anymore, ” replied he, rather sullenly.“It is of no use, you see. The kite wont fly.”“Oh, my little man! Would you give up the sport after all the pains we have taken both to make and to fly the kite? A few disappointments ought not to discourag
7、e us.Come, I have have wound up your string, and now try again.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：:And he did try, and succeeded，for the kite was carried up ward on the breeze as lightly as a feather._Paragraph2:“Shall we come out
8、tomorrow, aunt, after lessons, and try again. John requested.”参考范文And he did try, and succeeded，for the kite was carried up ward on the breeze as lightly as a feather. “We got it！” John shouted in rapture. Lucy also jumped with joy. With the string in hands, the two kids ran happily and freely again
9、st the gentle breeze, kite flying steadily, like a charming butterfly, leaving behind a wonderful trace in the blue sky. However， the wind suddenly changed its direction, giving a blow to the kite. Shaking sharply and diving swiftly, it finally fell to the ground. Though tired and exhausted, the kid
10、s laughed with joy and a tone of triumph.It seemed they had fallen in love with it“Shall we come out tomorrow, aunt, after lessons, and try again. John requested.” “No problem! I made a quick respond, tapping his shoulders with encouragement and affection. “You did excellently, and I am proud of you
11、! ” “I can do better next time! ”He said with great confidence. “You will!”l continued, feeling deeply comforted. It is always the case that we fail at our first attempt and feel cast down with various twists and turns. But actually, the more mistakes you make, the closer you re to success. Therefor
12、e, whenever you are confronted with failures, just stand up and“try again”.他确实尝试了，并且成功了，因为风筝像羽毛一样轻飘飘地被微风扬起。“我们明白了！”约翰欣喜若狂地喊道。露西也高兴得跳了起来。两个孩子牵着绳子，迎着微风快乐自由奔跑，风筝稳稳地放着，像一只迷人的蝴蝶，在蓝天上留下了美妙的痕迹。然而，风突然改变了方向，把风筝吹得一团糟。剧烈的晃动，快速的俯冲，最终落到了地上。孩子们虽然累累了，但笑得开心，带着得意洋洋的语气，似乎爱上了它“我们明天要不要出来，阿姨，下课后，再试一次。约翰要求。” “没问题！”我迅速回应，
13、拍拍他的肩膀，充满鼓励和爱意。“你做得很好，我为你感到骄傲！” “我下次可以做得更好！”他信心满满的说道。“你会的！”我继续说，感到深深的安慰。我们总是在第一次尝试时失败，并因各种曲折而感到沮丧。但实际上，你犯的错误越多，你就越接近成功。所以，每当你遇到失败时，只要站起来“再试一次”。读后续写赏析2：Egg Drop Challenge 扔鸡蛋挑战赛“OK, everybody. Its that time of year,” said my science teacher, Mr. Beal. “This Friday well have the annual Egg Drop Challe
14、nge. Bring your best containers to class. You can work alone or work together.” Mr. Beals fifth-grade Egg Drop Challenge was an institution at my school. The goal of the Challenge was simpleyou had to build a protective container to keep an egg from breaking when dropped over the stadium wall. My be
15、st friend, Cassie, and I grinned at each other. We always worked on projects together. Shes brainy; Im creative. Were the perfect combination, like peanut butter and marshmallow cream(棉花糖霜), which happens to be my favorite kind of sandwich. I made my favorite sandwich that afternoon while waiting fo
16、r Cassie to come over and work on the container. Spreading the fluffy marshmallow cream gave me an idea. “I have a brilliant design for our egg container!” I said when Cassie arrived. She looked at me eagerly. “We can cushion it with some marshmallow cream. You know, to absorb the shock of the impac
17、t,” I explained. “Youve got to be kidding, Laura.” Cassie exclaimed. “You have a better idea?” Cassie pointed to a sketch(草图)in her notebook. “Actually, I do. We put the egg in a basket with parachute(降落伞)attached. It will simply float to safety.” “Its too easy for something to go wrong. It will nev
18、er work!” I said. Cassie rolled her eyes, “The parachute is better than that stupid idea.”I couldnt believe it. Of course wed had our little fights in the past, but this was different. Shed never called any of my ideas “stupid” before. “Then Ill build mine and you build yours, and well just see whos
19、e is better.” “Fine!”Cassie threw her notebook into her backpack and stormed out. And just like that, our friendship was broken. Like an egg dropped from the top of a stadium without marshmallow cream to protect it.Paragraph 1: When Friday finally came, I had to admit that Cassies Egg Force One look
20、ed pretty good. Paragraph 2: By the fourth round, only Cassie and I were left.参考范文When Friday finally rolled around, I had to admit that Cassies Egg Force One looked pretty good. She had used a handkerchief to create a small parachute. It was tied to a basket that held soft packing peanuts and, in t
21、he center of it all, her egg. Cassie cast a queer look at me as if to declare war. The competition was on. My classmates carried their egg containers up three stadium steps and dropped them over the side wall. One by one. The egg broke, the owner out. Sighs and yells echoed. Soon the side walk was a
22、lready dotted with egg shells from failed drops. By the fourth launch, only Cassie and I were left. Taking a deep breath, I let go of my box. Then I raced down and got to the bottom before Cassie did. When I saw yolk and egg white seeping from the container, my heart sank. Then I saw Cassies basket
23、lying beside mine, empty. “My egg bounced out,” she explained, pointing to a broken shell in the grass. “I guess the pilot had an egg-ejector seat,” I offered. Cassie looked at me, and her glare softened. I grinned. She giggled. “A tie,” Mr. Beal announced. But we knew wed won something more importa
24、nt than the Egg Drop Challenge.当星期五终于到来时，我不得不承认 Cassie 的 Egg Force One 看起来很不错。她用一块手帕做了一个小降落伞。它被绑在一个篮子上，篮子里装着软包装的花生，在它的中心，还有她的鸡蛋。卡西奇怪地看着我，好像要宣战似的。比赛开始了。我的同学们把他们的鸡蛋容器抬上体育场的三个台阶，然后把它们扔到了侧壁上。逐个。鸡蛋破了，主人出去了。叹息和叫喊声响起。很快，人行道上已经布满了失败掉落的蛋壳。到第四次发射时，只剩下我和 Cassie。深吸一口气，我放开了我的盒子。然后我跑了下来，在卡西之前到达了谷底。当我看到蛋黄和蛋清从容器中渗出
25、时，我的心沉了下来。然后我看到卡西的篮子躺在我的旁边，空的。“我的蛋弹了出来，”她解释说，指着草丛中的一个破壳。“我猜飞行员有一个蛋喷射器座位，”我提议道。卡西看着我，她的目光柔和了下来。我咧嘴一笑。她咯咯地笑了起来。“一条领带，”比尔先生宣布。但是我们知道我们赢得了比 Egg Drop Challenge 更重要的东西。高分作文1When Friday finally rolled around, I had to admit that Cassies Egg Force One looked pretty good. Her plastic basket with parachute wa
26、s elaborately designed. When thrown into the air, it opened its parachute, whirled around like a butterfly and then landed on the ground slowly and quietly, demonstrating that there wasnt any crack on the egg. The audience let out thundering cheers, some even whistling wildly. With a triumphant air,
27、 Cassie received myriads of thumbs-up and cast me a proud look. The minute I let go of my egg, I stumbled down stairs in a hurry, in a desperate attempt to check it. My heart beat wildly as I found the egg safe and sound. Then the next few minutes witnessed fierce competition between other groups.By
28、 the fourth launch, only Cassie and I were left. I cast a side glance at her. She was holding her container tightly, no longer looking that confident. So did I. “Drop!” Hands trembling, I let go of the container, stretching out to keep them in sight, and rushed down to check. However, under the lid
29、was an egg that was badly cracked! I stood still. I heard Cassie sobbing. She must have failed too. Yet, her failure didnt comfort me. Instead, it left me in thought. My marshmallow cream leaked just now, while her parachute didnt function due to the sudden wind. What if we combined our ideas? If on
30、ly we hadnt broken up! I looked towards Cassie and our eyes met. We giggled. I knew our friendship was back.当星期五终于到来时，我不得不承认 Cassie 的 Egg Force One 看起来很不错。她的带降落伞的塑料篮子经过精心设计。抛到空中时，它打开降落伞，像蝴蝶一样盘旋着，然后缓缓而安静地降落在地面上，证明鸡蛋上没有任何裂痕。全场爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声，有的甚至狂吹口哨。凯西带着得意洋洋的神情，受到了无数人的竖起大拇指，向我投来了自豪的目光。我一放开鸡蛋，就急急忙忙跌跌撞撞地走下楼
31、梯，拼命想检查一下。当我发现鸡蛋安然无恙时，我的心狂跳不止。然后接下来的几分钟就见证了其他组之间的激烈竞争。到第四次发射时，只剩下我和 Cassie。我侧头看了她一眼。她紧紧地握着自己的容器，看起来不再那么自信了。我也是。颤抖着手，我放开容器，伸手挡在视线范围内，冲下来查看。然而，盖子下面是一个裂得很厉害的鸡蛋！我站着不动。我听到卡西在抽泣。她一定也失败了。然而，她的失败并没有让我感到安慰。相反，它让我陷入了沉思。我的棉花糖奶油刚刚漏了，而她的降落伞却因为突如其来的风而不起作用。如果我们结合我们的想法呢？要是我们没有分手就好了！我看向卡西，我们的目光相遇了。我们咯咯地笑了起来。我知道我们的友谊
32、又回来了。高分作文2When Friday finally rolled around, I had to admit that Cassies Egg Force One looked pretty good. Equipped with a small parachute, it stood out from various protective containers. There was obvious confidence written on Cassies face. Soon, the Egg Drop Challenge began. Cassie let go of her
33、Egg Force One and it landed perfectly. When it came to my turn, I felt butterflies in my stomach and my eyes followed all the way my Egg Cushion dropped. I was wild with joy as I saw my egg safe in the marshmallow. The game continued. The next two rounds witnessed many broken egg shells.By the fourt
34、h launch, only Cassie and I were left. I could feel that all the eyes were fixed on us. A strong sense of nervousness surged through me. Next to me, Cassie was also under great pressure. Then we saw our eggs drop. Suddenly, I heard a clear crack sound. My heart sank. I slowly bent down to check but
35、found no cracks at all. I turned around and found Cassies basket was broken. Mr. Beal announced the winner of this years Egg Drop Challenge and I heard my name. I cast a big beam and found Cassie run away with tears running on her cheeks. I found her curled up in the corner. Huddling her into my arm
36、s, I patted her on the back and murmured to her how sorry I was. That day, I not only won the challenge but also the most precious friendship back.当星期五终于到来时，我不得不承认 Cassie 的 Egg Force One 看起来很不错。配备小型降落伞，从各种保护容器中脱颖而出。卡西的脸上写满了明显的自信。很快，落蛋挑战赛开始了。Cassie 放开了她的 Egg Force One，它完美地降落了。轮到我的时候，我感到肚子里有蝴蝶结，我的眼睛一直
37、跟着我的蛋垫掉下来。当我看到我的蛋安全地放在棉花糖里时，我欣喜若狂。比赛继续进行。接下来的两轮见证了许多破碎的蛋壳。 到第四次发射时，只剩下我和 Cassie。我能感觉到所有的目光都集中在我们身上。一股强烈的紧张感涌上心头。在我旁边，Cassie 也承受着很大的压力。然后我们看到我们的鸡蛋掉下来了。突然，我听到一声清脆的咔嚓声。我的心沉了下去。我慢慢弯下腰去检查，但根本没有发现任何裂缝。我转身发现卡西的篮子坏了。Beal 先生宣布了今年 Egg Drop 挑战赛的获胜者，我听到了我的名字。我投了一个大梁，发现卡西泪流满面地跑开了。我发现她蜷缩在角落里。我把她抱在怀里，拍拍她的背，对她说我有多抱
38、歉。那一天，我不仅赢得了挑战，还把最珍贵的友谊带回来了。读后续写赏析3：A Bittersweet Face-off 1) As a country music song goes, “Shes a wild one with an angels face.” That is my younger sister, Lulu. When I think of her, I think of trying to tame a wild horse. 2) It is hard to find words to describe my relationship with Lulu. “All-out
39、 nuclear warfare” could not interpret it quite exactly. The irony is that we are very much alike: we share the hot-tempered and fast-forgiving personality. 3)Speaking of personalities, the Chinese Zodiac ( 属 相 ) describes Lulu and me perfectly. People born in the Pig Year are “stubborn” and “tough”
40、and often “fly into anger,” although they “never harbor a grudge (记仇)” as they are honest and warm-hearted. That is Lulu and I exactly, with an age gap of twelve years. 4)I had my first face-off with Lulu when she was about five. It was a freezing winter afternoon in New Haven, Connecticut. Mum and
41、Dad were at work. Babysitting Lulu at home, I decided that it would be the perfect time to introduce Lulu to the piano as I was in the learning process myself. Excited about working together with her brown curls, round eyes, and China doll face, Lulu was desperately cute I put her on the piano bench
42、, on top of some comfortable pillows. I then demonstrated how to play a single note with a single finger, and asked her to do the same. A small request, but Lulu refused, preferring instead to smash at many notes at the same time with two open palms. When I asked her to stop, she smashed harder and
43、faster. When I tried to pull her away from the piano, she began yelling, crying, and kicking angrily. 5)Fifteen minutes later, she was still yelling, crying, and kicking, and I had had it! Avoiding her blows, I dragged the screaming demon (恶魔) to our back door, and threw it open. The wind chill was
44、six degrees below zero, and my own face hurt from just a few seconds exposure to the icy air.Paragraph 1: But I was determined to teach the little wild one a lesson.Paragraph2: Lulus teeth were clicking repeatedly together because of cold, but she shook her head again. 范文But I was determined to teac
45、h the little wild one a lesson. “You cant stay in the house if you dont listen to me,” I said sternly严厉地. Instead of being obedient, Lulu stepped outside, facing me in a challenging way. A dull dread began seeping through my body - the little one was wearing only her sweater and tights. Okay, youve
46、decided to behave, I said quickly.“ Come in now.“ However, Lulu shook her head with a stubborn look in her eyes. Dont be silly, Lulu. I was panicking. Its freezing. Youre going to get sick. Come in now.“ Lulus teeth were clicking repeatedly together because of cold, but she shook her head again. It
47、suddenly dawned on me that I had underestimated Lulu. She would rather freeze to death than give in. My mind racing, I changed tactics战术 immediately, begging and bribing诱哄 Lulu to come back into the house. When Mum and Dad arrived home, they found Lulu contentedly soaking in a hot bath, dipping a bi
48、scuit in a steaming cup of hot chocolate, desperately cute. Anyway, I love Lulu, a similar wild one with an angels face.译文 但我决心给小野人一个教训。“不听我的话，你就不能待在屋里。”我严厉地说道。露露没有听话，而是走到外面，以一种挑战的方式面对着我。一种沉闷的恐惧开始渗入我的身体小家伙只穿着她的毛衣和紧身衣。“行了，你就乖一点。”我连忙说道。“别傻了，露露。”我很恐慌。“天气很冷。你会生病的。现在进来。”璐璐冷得牙齿都在咔嚓咔嚓，但她还是摇了摇头。我突然意识到我低估了露露。她宁愿被冻死也不愿屈服。我脑子一转，立即改变战术，乞讨贿赂诱哄璐璐回到屋里。爸爸妈妈回到家，发现露露心满意足地泡着热水澡，在热气腾腾的热巧克力中蘸着饼干，可爱得要命。无论如何，我喜欢露露，一个类似野性的天使面孔。
