1、目录写作技巧写作技巧2巧用三大从句巧用三大从句命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关写作练兵写作练兵 分析杭州近分析杭州近10年中考真题可知，关于年中考真题可知，关于“假期活动假期活动”这一话题这一话题在在2015年和年和2012年考查假期计划，设题背景为年考查假期计划，设题背景为2015年对比分析年对比分析两个城市两个城市5个方面的利弊，确定合适的暑假旅游目的地；个方面的利弊，确定合适的暑假旅游目的地；2012年年介绍个人暑期安排。结合全国近年中考真题可知，该话题通常介绍个人暑期安排。结合全国近年中考真题可知，该话题通常还有以下命题角度：介绍假期活动还有以下命题角度：介绍假期活动/
2、校园旅行、旅行感受及看法。校园旅行、旅行感受及看法。命题探索教材链接人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“假期活动假期活动”这个话题的单元有：这个话题的单元有：(2015杭州杭州)根据下表用英语写一篇根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。内容须词左右的短文。内容须包括：对下表中关于这两个城市包括：对下表中关于这两个城市(City A和和City B)的全部信息进的全部信息进行比较，行比较，分析利弊分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地旅游目的地。典例剖析典例剖析审时态：要分析利弊，应用一般现在时。审时态：要分析利弊，应用一般现在时。审人称：自己要选择一个城市作为
3、旅游目审人称：自己要选择一个城市作为旅游目的地，应用第一人称。的地，应用第一人称。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 In my opinion,_ is the better place to spend my summer holiday._一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.There is going to be a party on Saturday.I want to make Russian soup for it.2.My family are taking a trip to Wuhan at the end of this month to visit my
4、aunt and uncle.1 1角度角度介绍自己的假期计划介绍自己的假期计划好好 句句 记记 背背一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.周末我想去看电影。周末我想去看电影。_2.这月底我们将去北京参观一些名胜古迹。这月底我们将去北京参观一些名胜古迹。_I want to go to the movies on weekends.We are taking a trip to Beijing to visit some places of interest at the end of this month.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.We wen
5、t to Green Park.We went to Green Park.We climbed the mountains there and saw a lot of flowers.七七(下下)Unit 11 P634.I visited my grandparents in the countryside.I visited my grandparents in the countryside.It was excellent.七七(下下)Unit 11 P622 2角度角度介绍假期活动介绍假期活动/校园旅行校园旅行句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶
6、写好句5.I fed the chickens with my grandpa.I fed the chickens with my grandpa.It was so much fun.七七(下下)Unit 11 P626.We visited the science museum.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.七七(下下)Unit 11 P65一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.I camped in the mountains with some friends.(扩写具体活动扩写具体活动)
7、_4.There were too many people in the park.(扩写结果扩写结果)_ _ I camped in the mountains with some friends.We put up a tent and cooked outside.There were too many people in the park.So I couldnt really see or hear the guide.句句 子子 扩扩 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.Our family often go to the countryside.(扩写原因扩写原因)
8、_6.I often do some reading.(扩写目的扩写目的)_7.I like drawing pictures on weekends.(扩写原因扩写原因)_Our family often go to the countryside.Its really a relaxing and peaceful place.I often do some reading in my free time to make myself knowledgeable.I like drawing pictures on weekends.It is not only interesting b
9、ut also relaxing.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句7.I think todays school trip was terrible.七七(下下)Unit 11 P658.My school trip was great!We had so much fun！七七(下下)Unit 11 P659.All in all,it was an exciting day.七七(下下)Unit 11 P653 3角度角度旅行感受及看法旅行感受及看法教教 材材 好好 句句 记记 背背一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观，因为我们从中学到了很多。我
10、觉得这个地方值得再次来参观，因为我们从中学到了很多。_9.我们从这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。我们从这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。_I think the place is worth visiting again because we have learnt a lot from it.We got so much fun from this trip.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段First of all,I want to _(计划计划1).Maybe these books will be helpful for my future study
11、.Also,Im going to _(计划计划2)at the weekend.Then,I want to spend more time _(计划计划3).Finally,I plan to _(计划计划4)for exercise.介绍自己的假期计划介绍自己的假期计划read some meaningful and good bookstake part in some social practice activitieshelping my parents do some houseworkgo to the park with my friends every morning or
12、 afternoon 语段练习语段练习1 1一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句We will organize a trip to _(目的地目的地).Im really happy because _(理由理由).In the morning,we will _(活动活动1).In the afternoon,we will _(活动活动2).Im sure we will _(感受感受)介绍假期活动介绍假期活动/校园旅行校园旅行the nearby villagethis is my first time to go therefeed animalslearn to cook me
13、alshave a good time 语段练习语段练习2 2一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I had a wonderful holiday.I enjoyed swimming in the sea and I _(感受感受1).And I had something very specialsea food for lunch._(感受感受2).It was really delicious.I really enjoyed myself there._(感受感受3).I wish I can go there again.旅行感受及看法旅行感受及看法felt like I w
14、as a fishI liked it very muchThe vacation was unforgettable 语段练习语段练习3 3一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章In my opinion,City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday.Although the temperature there is higher,the hotel is not comfortable,even the food is less delicious than that in City B,I still choos
15、e City A.The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do there.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities.Besides,it takes us only two hours to fly there，which saves us a lot of time.I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句(2020原创原
16、创)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Mary的电的电子邮件。以下是邮件内容，请你阅读后回复，词数子邮件。以下是邮件内容，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。左右。写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵To:Li PingFrom：MaryDear Li Ping，How are you?Are there any trips in your school?Im really interested in it.Where did you go?How did you get there?What did you do there?Hope to hear from you s
17、oon.Love，Mary写作练兵写作练兵To:MaryFrom：Li PingDear Mary，_ Yours，Li Ping写作练兵写作练兵To:MaryFrom:Li PingDear Mary，_We once had a school trip to the Forest Park.We met at 8：00 am.at the school gate and rode the sharing bikes because its not far from our school.Its important to obey the traffic rules on the way t
18、here.We must park our bikes on each side of the gate after arriving there.写作练兵写作练兵_ Yours，Li PingDuring the trip,we listened to a talk about the Forest Park and plants.It is helpful for us to know about plants.We were allowed to take notes and photos in the park.After that,we returned at 3：30 pm.by
19、bus.巧用三大从句(1)状语从句状语从句 在复合句中，修饰主句中的动词、形容词或副词等的从句在复合句中，修饰主句中的动词、形容词或副词等的从句叫状语从句。常见的状语从句有：时间状语从句、让步状语从叫状语从句。常见的状语从句有：时间状语从句、让步状语从句、条件状语从句、原因状语从句、目的状语从句、结果状语句、条件状语从句、原因状语从句、目的状语从句、结果状语从句。从句。写作技巧1.时间状语从句：时间状语从句：while,when,since,before,after,until/till,as soon as.When I got to school,it was raining.2.让步状语
20、从句：让步状语从句：though/although,even though/if,whatever,whenever Though/Although he was ill,he still came to school.巧用三大从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 3.条件状语从句：条件状语从句：if,unless,as long as If you come,we will be very happy.4.原因状语从句：原因状语从句：because,since Lily stayed at home because it rained.5.目的状语从句：目的状语从句：so that,in order
21、 that She worked hard so that she could make more money.6.结果状语从句：结果状语从句：so.that.,such.that.I was so worried that I wanted to give up.巧用三大从句1.她打扫完房间之后，就离开了。她打扫完房间之后，就离开了。_2.虽然外面天黑了，但我仍然在工作。虽然外面天黑了，但我仍然在工作。_3.他不会完成工作除非他努力工作。他不会完成工作除非他努力工作。_She left after she cleaned the room.Although/Though it was dar
22、k outside,I was still working.He wont finish the work unless he works hard.即学即练即学即练巧用三大从句4.我喜欢坐火车因为火车便宜。我喜欢坐火车因为火车便宜。_5.她站起来以便可以看清楚黑板。她站起来以便可以看清楚黑板。_6.他是一个如此善良的男孩以至于我们都喜欢他。他是一个如此善良的男孩以至于我们都喜欢他。_I like taking the train because it is cheap.She stands up so that she can see the blackboard clearly.He is
23、 such a kind boy that we all like him.巧用三大从句(2)宾语从句宾语从句 宾语从句是主从复合句的一种。其从句部分在整宾语从句是主从复合句的一种。其从句部分在整个句子中作宾语，从句的语序必须是陈述句，即个句子中作宾语，从句的语序必须是陈述句，即“连接词主连接词主语谓语其他部分语谓语其他部分”。常见的连接词有：。常见的连接词有：that,if/whether,what,when,where,how,who等。等。巧用三大从句写作技巧1.“Its delicious.”She said.She said(that)it was delicious.2.Does
24、Kate get up early?Do you know?Do you know if/whether Kate gets up early?3.When did you come here?She asked me.She asked me when I came here.巧用三大从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 写作技巧7.The students said,“The club is very funny.”_8.Does he go to school today?Do you know?_9.Who will give a speech tonight?She asks her tea
25、cher._The students said that the club was very funny.Do you know if/whether he goes to school today？She asks her teacher who will give a speech tonight.即学即练即学即练巧用三大从句写作技巧(3)定语从句定语从句 在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初中阶段需掌握由中阶段需掌握由that,which,who引导的定语从句。先行词引导的定语从句。先行词为人：为人：who/that引导；先行词
26、为物：引导；先行词为物：which/that引导。引导。巧用三大从句1.先行词为人：先行词为人：I know the girl who/that has curly hair.A nurse is a person who looks after peoples health.He is the one who has given me a lot of help.2.先行词为物：先行词为物：I like sports which/that are safe for me.This is the best gift that I have ever received.巧用三大从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 写作技巧10.This is a book.It can tell a lot of stories._11.I like to make friends.They give me courage._This is a book which/that can tell a lot of stories.I like to make friends who/that give me courage.即学即练即学即练巧用三大从句
