1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“兴趣爱好兴趣爱好”这一话题，仅在这一话题，仅在2013年考查了就年考查了就“课堂上应讨论爱好而不是压岁课堂上应讨论爱好而不是压岁钱钱”发表观点，谈论爱好的好处。发表观点，谈论爱好的好处。全国关于这个话题的命题角度还有：全国关于这个话题的命题角度还有：谈论自己的兴趣爱好；谈论自己的兴趣爱好；就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点。就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教
2、材中涉及“兴趣爱好兴趣爱好”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：写作角度写作角度年级、单元（年级、单元（Unit）话题（话题（Topic）谈论自己的谈论自己的兴兴趣爱好趣爱好七七(下下)Unit 1Can you play the guitar？Joining a club七七(下下)Unit 5Why do you like pandas？Animals in a zoo八八(上上)Unit 4Whats the best movie theater？Your town写作角度写作角度年级、单元（年级、单元（Un
3、it）话题（话题（Topic）谈论自己的谈论自己的兴兴趣爱好趣爱好八八(上上)Unit 5Do you want to watch a game show？Entertainment九九(全全)Unit 9I like music that I can dance to.Music and Movies佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度谈论爱好的好处谈论爱好的好处【好句【好句范例范例】1.A hobby can help build your confidence and make your life more colourful.冀教八冀教八(下下)Unit 7 P100 2.The hobby
4、 is a topic that is very familiar with students.3.Students would have a lot to say when talking about hobbies.4.Talking about the movies they like often makes them relaxed.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.爱好能使你快乐，并且帮助你学到一些新技能。爱好能使你快乐，并且帮助你学到一些新技能。_2.篮球是个能吸引很多男生注意力的话题。篮球是个能吸引很多男生注意力的话题。_3.谈论最喜欢的画家总是让他们很兴奋。谈论最喜欢的画家总是让他们
5、很兴奋。_Hobbies can make you happy and help you learn some new skills.Basketball is a topic that can draw many boys attention.Talking about favorite artists often makes them excited.2 2角度角度介绍自己的兴趣爱好介绍自己的兴趣爱好【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】5.Many students have hobbies.(举例说明哪些爱好举例说明哪些爱好)Many students have hobbies,such a
6、s reading,painting,growing vegetables and looking after animals.外研八外研八(下下)Module 6 P506.I like music.(扩写自己喜欢的音乐类型扩写自己喜欢的音乐类型)I like music that I can sing along with.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 9 P657.I can never stop the love for reading.(扩写原因扩写原因)I can never stop the love for reading because it can bring me hap
7、piness.8.I enjoy my hobby.(扩写爱好带来的好处扩写爱好带来的好处)I enjoy my hobby.Its my hobby that offers me a chance to do something interesting and creative.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】4.My sister likes watching all kinds of movies.(举例说明具体的电举例说明具体的电 影类型影类型)_5.I like sports.(扩写自己喜欢的运动类型扩写自己喜欢的运动类型)_My sister likes watching all kind
8、s of movies,such as action movies,science fiction movies and so on.I like sports that can develop the spirit of teamwork.6.I love keeping a diary every day.(扩写原因扩写原因)_7.I enjoy acting very much.(扩写爱好带来的好处扩写爱好带来的好处)_8.I love doing exercise very much.(扩写运动带来的好处扩写运动带来的好处)_I love keeping a diary every d
9、ay because its a good way for me to record my life and express my feelings.I enjoy acting very much.Its acting that gives me a chance to experience different lives.I love doing exercise very much.Its exercise that helps me keep fit.3 3角度角度就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点就某一兴趣爱好发表自己的观点【好句范例】【好句范例】9.Some students think
10、 that spending too much time on hobbies has a bad influence on their study.10.If I take up dancing as my hobby,my spare time will be more meaningful.11.In my opinion,taking up swimming as a hobby is not only fun but also useful.12.Playing the piano is a hobby that makes me feel happy.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】9.有
11、的学生认为参加俱乐部对丰富他们的生活有重大的影响。有的学生认为参加俱乐部对丰富他们的生活有重大的影响。_10.如果我把旅行当做我的爱好，那么我会交到更多的朋友。如果我把旅行当做我的爱好，那么我会交到更多的朋友。_11.对一名学生而言，把阅读当作爱好不仅是必要的，而且是重要的。对一名学生而言，把阅读当作爱好不仅是必要的，而且是重要的。_Some students think that joining clubs has a big influence on enriching their life.If I take up travelling as my hobby,I will make m
12、ore friends.For a student,taking up reading as a hobby is not only necessary but also important.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2013河北河北)假如在英语课上，老师请你们就假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压压岁钱岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论。但你认为同学们对这个话题分组进行讨论。但你认为同学们对“Hobbies(爱好爱好)”更感兴趣更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇发言稿，谈一
13、谈你的理由发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。定主题：谈论爱好，而不是压岁钱定主题：谈论爱好，而不是压岁钱定文体：应用文；定人称：第一人称定文体：应用文；定人称：第一人称提示：提示：(1)Why do you like talking about hobbies?(2)Whats your reason for not talking about lucky money?定要点定要点1：选择讨论爱好这一话题的原因；：选择讨论爱好这一话题的原因；定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定要点定要点2：不讨论压岁钱的理由；：不讨论压岁钱的理由；定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时要求：要求：(1)发言稿须包括所有
14、提示内容，可适当发挥。发言稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已 给出，不计入总词数。给出，不计入总词数。(3)词数：词数：6080。参考词汇：参考词汇：ones own hobby,a proper topic(合适的话题合适的话题),personal,unhappyI think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money.It is _列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升二阶
15、二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句开篇：提开篇：提出自己的出自己的观点观点(已已给出给出)正文：描正文：描述支撑观述支撑观点的理由点的理由谈论爱好比谈谈论爱好比谈论压岁钱好论压岁钱好(better than)I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money.1.谈论爱谈论爱好的原因好的原因(have a lot to say）Everyone has his own hobby.Everyone has his own hobby,such as playing ball games,listening
16、to music,drawing and so on我来写：我来写：_ It can bring us pleasure.It can make us relaxed.正文：描正文：描述支撑观述支撑观点的理由点的理由1.谈论爱谈论爱好的原因好的原因(have a lot to say）It can not only bring us pleasure but also make us relaxed.我来写：我来写：_On the one hand,it can bring us pleasure.On the other hand,it can make us relaxed.列框架列框架列
17、要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升Lucky money is not a proper topic for us.Lucky money,however,isnt a proper topic for us,because its too personal我来写：我来写：_ Some may feel unhappy.Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it我来写：我来写：_ 2.不谈论不谈论压岁钱的压岁钱的原因原因(some may feel unhappy）正文：描正文：描述支撑观述支撑观点的理由点的理由列框架列框架列
18、要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升Its good to talk about hobbies.Its really a good choice for us to talk about hobbies.我来写：我来写：_ 谈论爱好是一个很好谈论爱好是一个很好的选择的选择(a good choice）结尾：重结尾：重申观点申观点列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分范文】写作练兵写作练兵万唯原创万唯原创 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Paul发邮件询问你
19、的兴发邮件询问你的兴趣爱好。请你根据所给提示和要求，给他回一封邮件，谈谈你的兴趣趣爱好。请你根据所给提示和要求，给他回一封邮件，谈谈你的兴趣爱好。爱好。提示：提示：(1)What is your hobby?(2)What influences does your hobby bring to your life?要求：要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)Dear Pa
20、ul，Glad to hear from you!Its very happy to tell you something about my hobby._ My hobby is drawing.As a student,I am fond of those lines that can make up of animals and sights.Drawing can really show beauty to people and express my feelings.I did it for fun at the very beginning.But later when I had a time filled with pressure in study,I would relax myself by drawing.Now my hobby not only plays an _ Yours，Li Hua important role in my life,but becomes my friend.My hobby is like a nice person who deeply lives in my heart and makes me happy.This is my hobby,not just a hobby,but a true friend.
