1、Reading for WritingUnit 2 Travelling aroundWrite to a friend about a travel plan01 Would it help to make a travel plan before you travel to a destination?Lead inYes,it would help a lot.Normally,a travel plan should include:uDateuDestinationuPurpose of the tripuAccommodationuTransportWhat kinds of as
2、pects(方面方面)can be included in a travel plan?02 Yes,it sounds very interesting because the trip takes in(=includes)many famous and amazing sights in Xian.1.Do you think his plan sounds interesting?Why?(Page 30,Ex.1)ParagraphMain ideaDetail1Final thoughts2Transport arrangement3Other parts for trip4Mai
3、n purpose for the trip2.Summarize the email in the table.(Page 31)Paragraph 1Main ideaMain purpose for the tripDetail(Purpose)Detail(Reason)To go to Xian to see the TerracottaArmyAn amazing sight,an amazing history,many amazing statuesParagraph 2Main ideaOther parts for this tripDetail(Purpose)Detai
4、l(Reason)To go to the Shaanxi History Museum,visit the Xian City Wall and a few other famous sightsMy dad loves history and I have heard of this famous museum.Paragraph 3Main ideatransportDetailParagraph 4Main ideaFinal thoughtsDetailWrite again,send photos,hear from Xiao Li.The trainIt is an amazin
5、g sight.It(The sight)is _.Its amazing that.I am _ that.is almost unbelievable.I cant believe it Its hard _.Its an _ story.amazingto believeunbelievable Underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email.Then complete the sentences below.(Page 31,Ex.2)amazedUnderline the expressions
6、 used to express the present ongoing actions and future plans.03Writing task Use the tables above to help you write a travel plan.Then follow the steps below.(Page 31)HomeworkHomework 假定你是假定你是Xiao Li，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的旅行计划写一封回信，告诉他你的旅行计划。目的地目的地中国第二大岛中国第二大岛 海南岛海
7、南岛时间时间10月月1日日 10月月6日日活动活动三亚海滩三亚海滩漫步漫步,日光浴日光浴,游泳游泳,看日出、日落看日出、日落交通交通/住宿住宿飞机、网上预订宾馆飞机、网上预订宾馆期望期望放松心情，增长见识放松心情，增长见识Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Rirhcards email.写作思路（五步）写作思路（五步）一一、认真审题、认真审题体裁：应用文（告知信）主题：给给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。行计划。人称：I,we,you，they，it 时态：现在进行时，一般将来时二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局 (内容要点、
8、五内容要点、五段式段式)()(思想素材思想素材)Paragraph 1：Your comments on Richards email and travel plan;your wishes;your purpose of writingParagraph 2:The main purpose of the tripParagraph 3:ActivitiesParagraph 4:TransportParagraph 5:Final thoughts(hope)三、准备语言素材（表示写信目的、计划、打算、三、准备语言素材（表示写信目的、计划、打算、交通等的句型、短语、词组），列举提纲交通等的
9、句型、短语、词组），列举提纲 1.Your comments on Richards email and travel plan;lIm very pleased/happy to read/learn/know about.lThank you for share.,which is.2.Your purpose of writinglIm writing to tell/share.lHere is my travel plan.lHere is how I spend my holiday.3.Your plan or intention and reasonlIm planning t
10、o go/travel/visit/see.with my family.lIm also spend the October holiday(in)travelling.lWere also going away/travelling for the coming holday.lWere looking forward to going/experiencing lI cant wait to go/see.lIve heard/Ive been told that it is an amazing/fantastistic sight.l Its said that.l Its amaz
11、ing that.l It is unbelievable to me.4.Transport l Were taking the train/plane the day before.l Were leaving for Shanghai by train on Saturday.l Were flying to.l Were arriving at 9:30 am.lWere scheduled to arrive at dawn/dust(黎明黎明/黄黄昏昏).lWere returning home by plane on/at/in.5.Final thoughts l I hope
12、 that we have a wonderful/amazing time.l Im also looking forward to enjoying myself.l Were expecting a pleasant/enjoyable trip/holiday.Possible versionDear Richard,Im pleased to read about your amazing travel plan.Thanks for sharing and best wishes for an enjoyable trip.Im also going away(外出度假外出度假)/
13、going travelling for our holiday with my family.Here is my travel plan.(Comments,wishes and purpose of writing)Were planning to travel to Hainan Island,the second largest island in China,to enjoy some tropical scenery(热带风光热带风光).We are spending 6 days from October 1st to 6th in Sanya.I hear that Sany
14、a is a world-famous tourist city,which is well worth a visit.Its amazing to learn about its beautiful seascape(海景海景),white sandy beaches and pleasant weather.I cant wait to go.(Travel purpose,time and reasons)Were looking forward to strolling(溜达溜达)and sunbathing on the beaches.Besides,were also plan
15、ning to go diving in the warm sea and watch the burning sunrise and sunset.What fantastic sights!(Activities)Were scheduled to fly to Sanya,leaving the day before the national day begins and arriving two hours later at our destination.Were staying at a hotel by the sea,which has been booked online in advance.On arrival at the hotel,we will start/go sightseeing right away.(Transport arrangements)We are expecting an amazing visit/trip to Hainan,both entertaining(愉悦心身的愉悦心身的)and informative(增长知识的增长知识的).(Hope)Yours,Xiao LiRevise your draft according to your partners comments
