1、Book1 People of Achievement Using Language 目录CONTENT课文译文及分析课文译文及分析如何写人物介绍0102第一章课 文 译 文 及 分 析THE MAN WHO CHANGED OUR UNDERSTANDING OF THE UNIVERSEAlbert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics,is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived.He made numerous contri
2、butions to the world,the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=mc2.Einstein was not only a genius;he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.1.make contributions to 对-做贡献2.the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famou
3、s formula E=mc2独立主格结构：最高级+现在分词THE MAN WHO CHANGED OUR UNDERSTANDING OF THE UNIVERSEAlbert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics,is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived.He made numerous contributions to the world,the most well-known being the general theo
4、ry of relativity and the famous formula E=mc2.Einstein was not only a genius;he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.改变了我们对宇宙认识的人改变了我们对宇宙认识的人阿尔伯特爱因斯坦，也许是现代物理学中最伟大的科学家，通常被认为是有史以来最聪明的人之一。他对世界做出了许多贡献，其中最著名的是广义相对论和著名的公式E=mc2。爱因斯坦不仅是一个天才，还是一个勇敢而善良的人，受到许多人的喜爱。爱因斯坦在线 1.注意连接上下句之间逻辑关系的词汇注意连接
5、上下句之间逻辑关系的词汇:when,but,due to,despite,after2.entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1990现在分词作结果状语现在分词作结果状语 This gentle genius was born in Germany on 14 March 1879.When he was 16,he tried to enter university in Switzerland,but failed due to his low scores in the general part of the entrance exa
6、m,despite obtaining exceptional scores in maths and physics.After studying for another year,he managed to pass the exam,entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1900.爱因斯坦在线 这位文静的天才于这位文静的天才于18791879年年3 3月月1414日出生于德国。日出生于德国。1616岁时，他岁时，他曾试图去瑞士上大学，尽管他在数学和物理方面取得了优异的曾试图去瑞士上大学，尽管他在数学和物理方面取得了优异的成绩，但由于入
7、学考试的综合部分分数较低，他未能如愿。经成绩，但由于入学考试的综合部分分数较低，他未能如愿。经过又一年的学习，他通过了考试，过又一年的学习，他通过了考试，18961896年进入大学，并于年进入大学，并于19001900年毕业。年毕业。This gentle genius was born in Germany on 14 March 1879.When he was 16,he tried to enter university in Switzerland,but failed due to his low scores in the general part of the entrance
8、 exam,despite obtaining exceptional scores in maths and physics.After studying for another year,he managed to pass the exam,entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1900.1.句与句的连接词有After，while,That same year,following this,after,in 19222.out of a strong passion 处于强烈的求知欲3.earn a doctorate in phys
9、ics 获得物理学博士学位4.quit his job 辞职5.be awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics.被授予1921年诺贝尔物理奖After two years of looking for work as a teacher,Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office.While working there,out of a strong passion for knowledge,he continued to study,earning a doctorate in
10、physics in 1905.That same year,which was later recorded as a miracle year in science,he published four extraordinary physics papers.Following this,he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton.After four years,he was able to quit his job at the patent office and enter resea
11、rch full-time at a university.In 1922,he was awarded the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect.在找了两年的教师工作后，爱因斯坦在瑞士专利局找到了一份职员的工作。在此工作期间，出于强烈的求知欲，他继续学习，并于1905年获得了物理学博士学位。同年，他发表了四篇杰出的物理学论文，这一年后来被誉为科学史上的奇迹之年。此后，他逐渐以新艾萨克牛顿闻名于世。四年后，他辞去了专利局的工作，进入一所大学做全职研究。1922年，他因对光电效
12、应的解释而被授予1921年诺贝尔物理学奖。After two years of looking for work as a teacher,Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office.While working there,out of a strong passion for knowledge,he continued to study,earning a doctorate in physics in 1905.That same year,which was later recorded as a miracle
13、year in science,he published four extraordinary physics papers.Following this,he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton.After four years,he was able to quit his job at the patent office and enter research full-time at a university.In 1922,he was awarded the 1921 Nobel P
14、rize for Physics for his explanation of the photoelectric effect.爱因斯坦在线 1.这一段句与句之间的衔接技巧有：定语从句；第二个定语从句表达原因；as a consequence 表达结果；两个表达时间先后的介词after和folloing e to power(开始)掌权；上台3.take up 开始从事，开始干（工作）4.make great achievements 取得巨大成就Circumstances changed in 1933,when Hitler came to power in Germany.Einste
15、in,who was Jewish,found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.As a consequence,he had to flee Germany.After spending time in Europe,he finally took up a position as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton,USA.Following that,he continued to make great achievements in
16、physics and mathematics.爱因斯坦在线 1933年，当希特勒在德国掌权时，情况发生了变化。爱因斯坦是犹太人，他发现学术机构的大门对他关闭了。因此，他不得不逃离德国。在欧洲待了一段时间后，他终于在美国普林斯顿高等研究院担任研究员一职。此后，他继续在物理和数学方面取得了巨大成就。Circumstances changed in 1933,when Hitler came to power in Germany.Einstein,who was Jewish,found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.As a
17、consequence,he had to flee Germany.After spending time in Europe,he finally took up a position as a researcher at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton,USA.Following that,he continued to make great achievements in physics and mathematics.爱因斯坦在线To the public,he was seen as a slightly odd-look
18、ing but kind and funny man.He had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.Although he was a genius,he sometimes forgot things,like his friends birthdays.But despite his peculiarities,he was loved by his friends and neighbour
19、s.There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework.In fact,Einstein often encountered people on the street who would stop him and ask him to help explain things.After many such occasions,he finally started saying,“Pardon me!Sorry!Al
20、ways I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!”1.本段的主题句就是首句,三个关键词：odd-looking,kind,funny2.a thick moustache 胡须浓密3.on end 直立着，竖立着；连续地4.receive an electric shock 遭受电击5.encounter:偶然遇到；意外地遇见；与-邂逅爱因斯坦在线 在公众看来，他看似有点古怪，但很善良又有趣。他胡须浓密，有时白发挺立，就好像刚遭了电击。虽然他是个天才，但他有时会忘记一些事情，比如他朋友的生日。尽管他性格古怪，但他深受朋友和邻居的喜爱。甚至还有一个关于他如何帮
21、助一个小女孩的故事：这个女孩敲了他的门，请求他帮她做家庭作业。事实上，爱因斯坦经常在街上遇到一些人，他们会拦住他，请他帮忙解释一些事情。经过多次这样的场合后，他终于开始说：“对不起！对不起！我总是被误认为是爱因斯坦教授！”To the public,he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man.He had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electr
22、ic shock.Although he was a genius,he sometimes forgot things,like his friends birthdays.But despite his peculiarities,he was loved by his friends and neighbours.There is even a story about how he helped a little girl who knocked on his door and asked for help with her homework.In fact,Einstein often
23、 encountered people on the street who would stop him and ask him to help explain things.After many such occasions,he finally started saying,“Pardon me!Sorry!Always I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!”爱因斯坦在线1.It was reported that 2.pass away 去世3.mourn:（for sb or sth）to feel and show sadness because
24、 sb has died;to feel sad because sth no longer exists or is no longer the same.(因失去-而）哀悼，忧伤 On 18 April 1955,it was reported that Einstein had passed away,and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.爱因斯坦在线1955年4月18日，有报道说爱因斯坦去世了，全世界都为一位杰出科学家的逝世而哀悼。On 18 April 1955,it was repor
25、ted that Einstein had passed away,and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.爱因斯坦在线Y O U R E N G L I S H T I T L E描写爱因斯坦的形容词有哪些？总的评价：the greatest scientist,a brilliant scientist描写性格：smart，courageous,kind figure，gentle genius,kind and funny man,外貌：slightly odd-looking,a thick
26、 moustache,long white hair,取得的成绩：make numerous contributions,the most well-known,the famous formula,obtaining exceptional scores,published four extraordinary physics papers,make great achievements第二章如何写人物介绍An introduction to someone you admireAn introduction to someone you admire 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字:概
27、、貌、育、平、评概、貌、育、平、评 1.概指概况:age,family background,identity 2.貌指外貌:appearance,character,hobby 3.育指教育:education background 4.平指生平:big events,achievements&influence(in time order)5.评指评价:evaluationAn introduction to someone you admireAn introduction to someone you admire体裁体裁记叙文记叙文内容内容人的出生、家庭背景、教育、人的出生、家庭背景
28、、教育、生平经历、成就和评价生平经历、成就和评价时态时态一般现在时、一般过去时一般现在时、一般过去时人称人称第三人称第三人称An introduction to someone you admirefamily background&identity 通过概述性的语言来介绍人物出生的时间、地点和家庭背景，常用同位语、分词结构或定语从句 Albert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics,is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived.
29、郎平，一名职业排球运动员和教练，被誉为排球的传奇人物，深受中外球迷的喜爱。被誉为“万婴之母”，林巧稚为中国妇女儿童的健康做出了巨大贡献。郎平，一名职业排球运动员和教练，被誉为排球的传奇人物，深受中外球迷的喜爱。Lang Ping,a professional volleyball player and coach,is considered as the legend of volleyball,loved by fans both at home and abroad.被誉为“万婴之母”，林巧稚为中国妇女儿童的健康做出了巨大贡献。Lin Qiaozhi,who was honored as
30、the mother of ten thousand babies,made a huge contribution to the health of women and children in China.An introduction to someone you admireappearance 描写外貌:巧用with短语。他是一个 有着酷酷的外表、安静害羞的人。He is a quiet and shy man with a cool appearance.我的语文老师长着两只大眼睛,留着长发 My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady,with lo
31、ng hair and big eyes.常用表达1He/She was born in/on and was brought up by 2He/She showed his/her talent for 3When he/she was years old,he/she became interested in 4At the age of，he/she went to all by himself/herself.5After graduation,he/she decided to 6He/She devoted all his/her life to 7He/She is regar
32、ded/considered as 8As a great ,he/she will be remembered by us forever.写作模板 _，who was born in _,was one of the greatest _._ talent for _ showed at a early age.He learned _.By the time he was _,the young _ had become a well-known _.The following year _ moved to _,where he spent the rest of his life,_
33、 as a _._,who has been called _,_ about _ or so throughout his life.As a great _,he will be remembered by people forever.精品展示你校英文报新开设的Popular Musician栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克肖邦(Fryderyk Franciszek Chopin)的短文。生卒年份18101849生平简介16岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁公开演出，20岁已是颇有名气的作曲家；221岁移居巴黎，以作曲和教学为生成就及评价 一生创作
34、了约二百部作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”注意注意：1 1词数词数8080左右；左右；2 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_审题谋篇第一步明确要求该写作属于介绍人物类写作，故要用第_人称来写；文章的主题内容是写音乐家肖邦的生平经历、取得的伟大成就以及人们的评价。时态以 _为主。三过去式第二步确定段落本篇短文可以从以下几个方面入手：Para.1总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)；Para.2介绍肖邦的主要经历；Para.3总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。第三步核心词汇1_音乐天赋2_举办音乐会3_成为著名的作曲家4_谋生5_永远被人们记住talent fo
35、r musicgive public concertsbecome a wellknown composerearn a livingbe remembered by people forever第四步句式升级1弗里德里克肖邦出生于1810年，是有史以来最伟大的作曲家之一。(一般表达)Fryderyk Franciszek Chopin was born in 1810 and he was one of the greatest composers of all time.(高级表达)Fryderyk Franciszek Chopin,_ 1810,was one of the great
36、est composers of all time.who was born in2到20岁时，这位年轻的音乐家已经成为著名的作曲家。(一般表达)When he was 20,the young musician had become a well-known composer.(高级表达)_ he was 20,the young musician had become a well-known composer.By the time3第二年，肖邦移居巴黎，在那里他度过了他的余生，以作曲和教学为生。(一般表达)The following year Chopin moved to Paris
37、 and there he spent the rest of his life.He earned a living as a composer and teacher.(高级表达)The following year Chopin moved to Paris,_ he spent the rest of his life,_ a living as a composer and teacher.whereearning第五步连句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。_参考范文：The Great ComposerChopin Fryder
38、yk Franciszek Chopin,who was born in 1810,was one of the greatest composers of all time.Chopins talent for music showed at an early age.He learned music at six,composed music at seven,and even gave public concerts at eight.By the time he was 20,the young musician had become a well-known composer.The
39、 following year Chopin moved to Paris,where he spent the rest of his life,earning a living as a composer and teacher.Chopin,who has been called“the poet of the piano”,composed about 200 pieces of music or so throughout his life.As a great composer,he will be remembered by people forever.Life was like a box of chocolates,you never know what youre go to get.Thank You
