1、原创-Writing-(低年级写作)-公开课一等奖课件 Im Kitty.Im Kitty.Hello,everyone!Hello,everyone!Nice to meet you!Nice to meet you!Where is Kitty?Where is Kitty?_the boxin_the boxon_the boxnext to_the boxaboveabove the boxon the boxover the box_the bedunderWhats in the bedroom?There is.Whats+介词短语介词短语?There is/are.My Bed
2、roomWhatsin the bedroom？next to the table？on the table？above the TV？under the bed？My BedroomWhatsin the bedroom？next to the table？on the table？above the TV？under the bed？There is a There is a There is a There areThere is a My Bedroom According to the picture,write a passage with the title of“My Bedr
3、oom”use the drills“There be.”write five sentences at least.My Bedroom 仔细仔细观察图片，以观察图片，以“My Bedroom”My Bedroom”为为题目写一篇短文题目写一篇短文要求要求:用用 There be There be 句型句型 至少至少写出写出5 5句话。句话。According to the picture,write a passage with the title of“My Bedroom”use the drills“There be.”write five sentences at least.My
4、 Bedroom Showing TimeShowing Time My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed in This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the
5、bedroom.There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed in This is my bedroom.Th
6、ere is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the bedroom.There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the
7、table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed in There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom
8、.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.bedroom.There is a chair next to the There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my b
9、edroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:语言啰嗦语言啰嗦There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is is a chair next to the table.a chair
10、next to the table.There isThere is a TV a TV on the table.on the table.There areThere are two pictures two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.Your idea:句式单一句式单一My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa
11、 and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is is a chair next to the table.a chair next to the table.There isThere is a TV a TV on the table.on the table.There areThere are two pictures two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom ver
12、y much.much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is a chair next to the table.is a chair next to the table.There There is a TV on the table.There are is a TV on the tab
13、le.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:Whatsnext to the table?There is a chair.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.sofa and a tab
14、le in the bedroom.WhatWhats s next to the table?There is a chair.There next to the table?There is a chair.There is a TV on the table.There are two is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:1.We can
15、 divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)BeginningBodyEndingThe structure of a good passage(好文章的结构好文章的结构)My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in There is a bed,a sofa and a table in th
16、e bedroom.the bedroom.WhatWhats next to the table?s next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its s on the table.Can you see the pictures?on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.
17、I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.the bedroom.WhatWhats next to the table?s next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV
18、?Its s on the table.Can you see the pictures?on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:Beginning Body Ending BeginningBodyEnding 总领全文总领全文引出话题引出话题分层描述分层描述诠释主题诠释主题总结全文总结全文深化主题深化主题What func
19、tion does each part have?(文章各段的作用）文章各段的作用）2.We can write a better beginning.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)1.We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?Th
20、ere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence 主题句法主题句法Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!Two common kinds of
21、beginning2、Ask a question 提问式提问式Two common kinds of beginning1、Topic Sentence 主题句法主题句法3.We can write a better ending.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)1.We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.2.We can write a better beginning.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.
22、There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence-总结主题总结主题Three common kinds of ending2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom .Do you li
23、ke my bedroom?Can you introduce yours to me?Three common kinds of ending3、Exclamatory Sentence 感叹式感叹式 My Bedroom .(1)What a nice bedroom I have!I like it very much.(2)How nice my bedroom is!I really like it.Three common kinds of endingThree common kinds of ending 1、Topic Sentence-总结主题总结主题2、Ask a que
24、stion 提问式提问式3、Exclamatory Sentence 感叹式感叹式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.How nice
25、my bedroom is!I really like it.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to
26、 the table.There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with
27、me!There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.How nice my bedroom is!I really like it.Which is better?Why?Whats your idea about the best passage?Have a discussion in gro
28、ups of four(四人一小组进行讨论）四人一小组进行讨论）The standards of the best passage 1.Correct Expression 语言准确语言准确2.Right Mind Logic 逻辑合理逻辑合理3.Smooth Flow 条理清晰条理清晰4.Diverse Sentence Patterns 句式多样句式多样5.Complete Structure 结构完整结构完整 Youre greatYoure great！Homework 回家后，仔细观察自回家后，仔细观察自己的卧室，以己的卧室，以“My My BedroomBedroom”为题目，写出为题目，写出一一篇短文篇短文。要求：要求：1 1、意思连贯、符合逻辑、意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整结构完整2 2、字数不得少于、字数不得少于5050词。词。Ms.ZhaosQQ:2503610354
