1、Continuation writing Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldnt help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for so
2、mething to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave.The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on
3、me,”she replied.“Thats nothing.Ill treat you today,”said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.“What is it?”asked the man kindly.“Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny.“Even a strange
4、r on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”Hearing the words,the seller smiled,“Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mo
5、ther who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered Mothers familiar face and weathered hands.“Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger m
6、ade me feel grateful,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair calle
7、d her mind back._Task:a continuation(续写)of the story what happened _in_ the story what happened _ the storyParagraph 1Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._afterStep 1 ReadingTask 1 Read for information content contentwhowho whenwhe
8、n wherwhere e whatwhat whywhyJennymothersellerthat afternoonthe house,in the streetran out of the househad a quarrel with her motherTask 2 Read for plot ParaEvent (动词动词)Jennys Feeling(形容形容)Para1Para2-9The seller _Jenny _,and Jenny _ the seller a lot.The seller _ her how many times her mother _ for h
9、er and if she _ her mother.Para10-11She _ there,_Mothers familiar face and weathered hands.Realizing her mistakes,she _ to go home to _ her mother.Jenny _ her mother,_home and a few hours later,felt a little _.quarreled withlefthungrybrought a bowl of noodlesthankedaskedcooked thankedsatremenberingm
10、ade up her mindmake an apology toangry,weep sadtouchedthankful/gratefulmercilesscomplainmisunderstandingregretful,ashamed,guiltyreading-continuationRead for plot Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.quarrel,ran out oftreat Jenny noodlesdecided to apologizeashamed,regretfulangry,sa
11、dthankful,touchedParagraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.beginningrising developmentClimaxEndingStep 2 WritingParagraph 1 Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Infer the contenttwo given beginningsTips两段首句定一框,二框二首
12、正能量两段首句定一框,二框二首正能量Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Task 3 Outline possible plot(para.1)Reasonable动作,心理,情感,环境动作,心理,情感,环境/情景情景1)_,she found her mother was not in.2)_,she wondered,_3)Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind._4)_,she failed to control her tears.Paragra
13、ph 1:Nearing the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.When she pushed the door open and entered the house,she found her mother was not in.Tired and sad,she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?”she wondered.“Was she still angry with me?”Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.Sh
14、e remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her,she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks.Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Task 3 Outline possible
15、 plot(para.2)Reasonable动作,心理动作,心理/对话,情感,环境对话,情感,环境 Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you,”she said,tired and relieved.Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“M
16、um,Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.”She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently.With a bright light streaming through the window,flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling,they hugged toge
17、ther and too thrilled to say anything.Song of the Parting SonFrom the threads a mothers hands weaves,A gown for parting son is made.Sewn stitch by stitch before he leaves,For fear his return be delayed.Such kindness as young grass receives,From the warm sun cant be repaid.慈母手中线,游子身上衣。临行密密缝,意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。Step 3:Enjoy a famous Chinese poem Heaven and earth are generous,parents are generous.-天地宽大,父母恩大 Thank you for your listening!