1、2021新高考英语二轮复习写作限时训练两套写作限时训练五写作限时训练五第一节第一节 短文改错短文改错 Last Saturday our class went to hiking in the countryside.We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am.In the way,we were singing and laughing happily when a girl suddenly fell into the deep hole.She felt so frightening and even burst into tear
2、s.met On a frightened One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got out.Fortunately,she didnt suffer seriously injuries,but it seemed that her ankle was slightly twisted.We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital.It is an experience that well ever forget,though we didnt enjoy ourse
3、lves very much that day.never send serious herclassmates 本文记叙了我们班去远足时救助一位掉本文记叙了我们班去远足时救助一位掉进洞里的女同学的经历。进洞里的女同学的经历。1.把把went后的后的to去掉去掉 因因go hiking为习惯用法，为习惯用法，意为意为“去远足去远足”，故把，故把to去掉。去掉。2.meet met 由时间状语由时间状语Last Saturday可知可知要用一般过去时，故把要用一般过去时，故把meet改为改为met。3.In On 表示表示“在路上在路上”应用应用on the way，故把故把In改为改为On。4
4、.the a 泛指泛指“一个一个”深坑。深坑。5.frightening frightened 表示人表示人“感到害怕感到害怕的的”应用应用frightened。6.classmate classmates 因因One of后接名词的后接名词的复数形式，故把复数形式，故把classmate改为改为classmates。7.在在got与与out之间加之间加her 由语境可知，我们最终由语境可知，我们最终把把“她她”救了出来。救了出来。8.seriously serious 修饰名词应用形容词，故修饰名词应用形容词，故把把seriously改为改为serious。9.sending send 因因
5、manage to do sth为固定搭为固定搭配，意为配，意为“设法做某事设法做某事”，故把，故把sending改为改为send。10.ever never 句意：这是一次我们永远不会句意：这是一次我们永远不会忘记的经历。表示忘记的经历。表示“决不，永不决不，永不”用用never。ever表示表示“曾经；从来曾经；从来”，明显与句意不符。，明显与句意不符。第二节第二节 书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华，你班外教假定你是李华，你班外教Ms King任教期满即任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：言致谢，并赠送
6、纪念品。内容包括：1.表达感激；表达感激；2.礼物寓意；礼物寓意；3.美好祝愿。美好祝愿。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi,everybody.Thank you very much!Hi,everybody.On this special occasion,I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms King for her excellent work.Thanks to Ms Kings
7、generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts,weve become more interested in English.Ms King,heres a pen container,a souvenir that weve specially prepared for you.Hopefully youll like it.What makes this pen container special is that weve all signed on it,making it a good reminder of the ha
8、ppy time we spent together.Now,Id also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy!Thank you very much!写作限时训练六写作限时训练六第一节第一节 短文改错短文改错 One Monday afternoon,we were playing basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over.On seeing that,all my classmate rushed
9、 to me.Under the help of several other students,Li Xiang,one of my best friends,put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately.headed WithclassmateswhenIt turned out that my right ankle got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital.He did not leave until the ambulance was arrived.The following d
10、ay,he came see me.To my greatly relief,he brought textbooks with him and helped him with my lessons.It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.devotedmegreattoand/so 本文主要讲作者在打篮球时不小心摔倒受伤，本文主要讲作者在打篮球时不小心摔倒受伤，好朋友李翔将作者送去医院并帮他补课。好朋友李翔将作者送去医院并帮他补课。1.while when 因因be doing sth when是固定是固定句型，意为句型，
11、意为“正在做某事，这时突然正在做某事，这时突然”。2.classmate classmates 由前面的由前面的all可知要用可知要用名词的复数形式。名词的复数形式。3.Under With 因因with the help of为固定搭配，为固定搭配，意为意为“在在的帮助下的帮助下”。4.head headed 全文用的是一般过去时，此处全文用的是一般过去时，此处也应用一般过去时。也应用一般过去时。5.but and/so 因前后分句是并列或因果关系，因前后分句是并列或因果关系，故把故把but改为改为and或或so。6.去掉去掉arrived前的前的was 因因ambulance与与arriv
12、ed是主动关系。是主动关系。7.在在came后加后加to 因因come to do sth表示表示“来做来做某事某事”。8.greatly great 修饰名词修饰名词relief应用形容词。应用形容词。9.helped后的后的him me 由语境可知，此处表由语境可知，此处表示李翔帮示李翔帮“我我”补课。补课。10.devoting devoted 修饰名词修饰名词friend用用devoted,表示表示“忠诚的；忠实的忠诚的；忠实的”。第二节第二节 书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter正在你们正在你们学校开展为期两周的交流活动。请你给他写封邮学校
13、开展为期两周的交流活动。请你给他写封邮件，邀请他一起去郊游，欣赏中国美丽乡村。内件，邀请他一起去郊游，欣赏中国美丽乡村。内容包括：容包括：1.时间和地点；时间和地点；2.特色乡村文化体验特色乡村文化体验(如赏美景、看演出、品如赏美景、看演出、品美食等美食等)。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：参考词汇：suburb郊区郊区Dear Peter,Yours,Li HuaDear Peter,Our class is going to have an outing in the suburbs next Frid
14、ay.Im writing to invite you to join us.Our destination is Guangming Village,which is 5 miles away from our school.It is a place where we can have a variety of country experiences,such as enjoying the beautiful scenery,watching the performances and tasting delicious food.I am sure that we will have a good time there and it is sure to give you an unforgettable memory.We will gather at 8:00 am at our school gate next Friday.If you want to go with us,please be sure to arrive on time.Yours,Li Hua
