1、高考英语书面表达指导高考英语书面表达指导 短话长说短话长说2022-11-611 General structure1 General structure3 Advanced 3 Advanced expressionsexpressionsVarious structuresVarious structuresGraceful wordsGraceful words2 Linking words2 Linking wordsElements of a passageTopic sentenceTopic sentence Supporting Supporting sentencessent
2、ences Concluding sentence Concluding sentence2022-11-62一、文章总体模板一、文章总体模板1.1.文章开头的总体交待文章开头的总体交待 起起 （引出主题）引出主题）A.Recently,we had a discussion about A.Recently,we had a discussion about B.we carried out a survey of B.we carried out a survey of C.When it comes to the topic whether C.When it comes to the
3、topic whether 2.2.呈现不同观点的句式呈现不同观点的句式 转承转承 （陈述观点）（陈述观点）A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that However,others However,others hold a completely opposite opinion.hold a completely opposite opinion.B.Some people firmly believe that.Others argue that B.So
4、me people firmly believe that.Others argue that 呈现论据时常用的连接词呈现论据时常用的连接词inthefirstplace,_(原因一).Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_(原因二).Soitgoeswithoutsaying that_(观点一).Some people holdtheideathat_(观点二).Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_(原因一).Ontheotherhand,_(原因二).Therefore,there isno doubt that_(观点二).3.3.结
5、尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语 结结 （总结观点）总结观点）As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,2022-11-63方法一方法一 :使用多种句子结构使用多种句子结构1 If she is compared with other teachers,we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(状语)Compar
6、ed with other teachers,she pays more Compared with other teachers,she pays more attention to his way of teaching.attention to his way of teaching.2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak.(连词+分词)Unless invited ,you should keep silent at the meeting.Unless invited ,you s
7、hould keep silent at the meeting.3He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒装/强调)Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessNot until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessIt was not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness.It was not until he re
8、turned home that he realized his foolishness.二、高分作文技巧二、高分作文技巧2022-11-644 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study.(only倒装).5 How should we protect eyesight?It still remains a question among us.(主语从句)6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(cant too much)
9、Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.We cant emphasize the importance of prot
10、ecting our eyesight too We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.much.2022-11-65方法二方法二:善用高级词汇善用高级词汇Which is better?Which is better?1 1 周末我们会有很多作业要做周末我们会有很多作业要做.A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot
11、of homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.2 2 在我所有的老师里在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很毛老师给我留下了很深的印象深的印象.A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr.Moore.A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr.Moore.B Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore gave me the deepest B Of all my teachers,Mr.Mo
12、ore gave me the deepest impression.impression.2022-11-663 3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。感到精疲力尽。A.His wife came back home after the advanced training A.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very tired.class,feeling very tired.B.His wife came back home after the
13、advanced training B.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very exhausted.class,feeling very exhausted.4.4.他没听我课上讲的东西。他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the cl
14、ass.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.2022-11-67 2022-11-68 When it comes to the issue of,the majority of people When it comes to the issue of,the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that However,attitudes seem to get accustomed to the idea that However,attitudes toward
15、svary from person to person.towardsvary from person to person.some people firmly believe that,there are some factors some people firmly believe that,there are some factorscontributing to this attitude as follows,in the first place,contributing to this attitude as follows,in the first place,in the se
16、cond place,.On top of that,in the second place,.On top of that,As a matter of fact,it is not often the case.Others have As a matter of fact,it is not often the case.Others have a preference of,there are several remarkable reasons.a preference of,there are several remarkable reasons.For one thing,for
17、 anotherFor one thing,for another On my part,.On my part,.1.1.利用模板利用模板2022-11-692 2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明方法方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容容例一：这样更方便照顾父母。例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。原因原因 as they are getting older and older.as they are getting older and older.Owing to/because例二
18、：因广告过多，例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点影片放映晚点。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。后果后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsT
19、here were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film,2022-11-6102 2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明方法方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容容条件条件 目的目的 例三：安全出口（例三：安全出口（exitexit）标志不明，）标志不明，存在安全隐患存在安全隐患(potential hazard(potential hazard）。）。拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。In case of danger,it i
20、s difficult for the audience to escape.In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查 We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式 In order to learn about how our high school students communicate
21、 with each other during the holiday,we did a survey with the help of my classmates.we did a survey with the help of my classmates.The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard.2022-11-6112 2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明方法方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容容(1)(1)表达不同原因的概括语表达不同原因的概括语Ther
22、e are several reasons for this.There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe reason foris thatThe reason why is thatThe reason why is that(2)(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：表示无需说明的事实的概括语：It goes without saying thatIt goes without saying thatIts ne
23、edless to say thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say,Needless to say,Its obvious thatIts obvious that2022-11-6123.3.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a As the saying goes,“All work and no play
24、 makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.3.3.添加谚语添加谚语2022-11-613加谚语加谚语(Proverb)(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should focus As the saying goes,“
25、No pains,no gains.”We should focus our mind on our studies.our mind on our studies.怎么添加谚语？怎么添加谚语？方法方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2022-11-614常用谚语常用谚语(Proverb)(Proverb)Strike the iron while it is hot.Strike the iron while it is hot.趁热打铁。趁热打铁。Think twice before you do.Think twice befo
26、re you do.三思而后行。三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。Do as the Romans do.Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。入乡随俗。Do it now.Do it now.机不可失，时不再来。机不可失，时不再来。Failure is t
27、he mother of success.Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。It is no use crying over spilt milk.It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。覆水难收。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。All roads lead to Rome.All roads lead to Rome.条条
28、大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。2022-11-615青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the We teenagers should do what w
29、e can to protect the environment and save the earth.environment and save the earth.For example,we can use For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water
30、and energy.products,plant more trees and save water and energy.4.4.举例说明举例说明2022-11-616人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as such as flood,hurricanes,droughts or other disasters.f
31、lood,hurricanes,droughts or other disasters.2022-11-617珍惜每一滴水珍惜每一滴水Therefore,we should no longer be indifferent about this.To Therefore,we should no longer be indifferent about this.To protect our valuable water resources,we should call on people protect our valuable water resources,we should call o
32、n people to cherish every drop of water.Otherwise,maybe the last drops to cherish every drop of water.Otherwise,maybe the last drops of water will be our tears.of water will be our tears.As middle school students,we also have a part to play.Do As middle school students,we also have a part to play.Do
33、 remember:we are not saving water,we are saving our own life.remember:we are not saving water,we are saving our own life.With everyone doing his bit,we can make a difference.With everyone doing his bit,we can make a difference.5.5.结尾提出倡议或号召结尾提出倡议或号召2022-11-618As students,we should start from ourselv
34、es.Here Id As students,we should start from ourselves.Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment.With everyone doing his bit,we can change the environment.With everyone doing his bit,we can change the pr
35、esent situation.present situation.参加俱乐部或活动参加俱乐部或活动Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!Dont wait.Join us now!Dont wait.Join us now!Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!Start
36、 to join us now!保护环境保护环境2022-11-619“短话长说短话长说”方法：方法：1.利用模板利用模板 2.2.附加成分作解释说明附加成分作解释说明 3.3.加谚语加谚语(Proverb(Proverb)4.4.举例说明举例说明 5.5.结尾提出倡议或号召结尾提出倡议或号召 2022-11-620写作任务写作任务 现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章 参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1.字数150左右 2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,the phenomen
37、on of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因原因1.缺少运动缺少运动2.饮食结构不合理饮食结构不合理建议1.多参加体育锻炼2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品3.2022-11-621 要点分析要点分析如何起、转、承、结如何起、转、承、结On my part,On my part,1.1.利用模板利用模板When it comes to theWhen it comes to the phenomenon of teen phenomenon of teen obesityobesity,our parents are in
38、great concern.Why Why are so many kids getting are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?fatter and fatter?Some are,others areSome are,others are2022-11-622Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and because students have so much homework to do,they are getting less exercise than before.1.1.缺
39、少运动缺少运动 Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdened with so much homework,2022-11-623Because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweig
40、ht.2.2.饮食结构不合理饮食结构不合理 2022-11-624In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.建议1.多参加体育锻炼 2022-11-625As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such
41、as fruits and vegetables,and less fast food and junk food.2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品2022-11-626Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance our exercise and studies.3.制定合理的计划，时间表2022-11-627合成文章合成文章 Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents Recently
42、,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.concerned.Why are teens getting fatter and fatterWhy are teens getting fatter and fatter?In my opinion,In my opinion,there are two remarkable reasons for this problem.there are two remarkable reasons for this problem.Firstly,Firstly
43、,because of the popularity of TV and computers,and because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdeded with so much homework to do.students are burdeded with so much homework to do.They are getting less They are getting less exercise than before.Secondly,exercise than before.Seco
44、ndly,because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily sna
45、cks,which might make the kids overweight.snacks,which might make the kids overweight.For another,For another,On the other hand,On the other hand,arousedarousedFor one thing,For one thing,On the one hand,On the one hand,2022-11-628 In order to lose weight and stay healthy In order to lose weight and
46、stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.As the saying goes,“An As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”apple a da
47、y keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet They should also eat a more balanced diet such such as fruits,vegetablesas fruits,vegetables,less fast food and junk food.,less fast food and junk food.Last but not leastLast but not least,they should make,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.2022-11-629Thanks for you listeningThanks for you listening Bye-bye!Bye-bye!2022-11-630
