1、 Review Further development of the text Writing Device Rhetorical Technique Writing-styleSubtitle Topic SentenceNarrativeMore than I realized.Dad has helped me keep my balance.You set the pace,I will try to adjust to you.Global Understanding How a crippled father helped his son _ through his act out
2、 of a _.good heartkeep balance Blank FillingMain Idea of the TextHe went to work sick,despite nasty weather.tolerantParas.8-11If he ever noticed or was bothered,he never let on.“You set the pace.I will try to adjust to you”.Content UnderstandingManhattanBrooklynStaten Is.QueensBronxentranceentrances
3、ubwaystreetBrooklynManhattanOffice BuildingHe never talked about himself as an object of pity,nor did he show any envy of the more fortunate or able.He tried to participate in many activities in some way.tolerantstrong-mindedself-respectingParas.8-11Content UnderstandingBrooklynDodgersDances and par
4、tieskeep a local baseball team going as a managerKnowledgeable baseball fanHe tried to participate in many activities in some way.tolerantstrong-mindedself-respectingoptimisticParas.8-11Content Understandingtolerantstrong-mindedself-respectingoptimisticParas.8-11 Explicit Clue(fathers good heart)Con
5、tent Understandinggrowing up,embarrassed,severely crippled,very short;hard to coordinate stepsembarrassedI am amazed at how much courage it must have taken for a grown man to subject himself to such shame and stress.I am sorry I never told him how sorry I was,how unworthy I was,how I regretted it.Pa
6、ras.12-13Paras.12-13Now that I am older,I believe that is a proper standard by which to judge peopleunderstandParas.12-13Paras.12-13 Implicit Clue(sons attitude change)embarrassedunderstandtolerantstrong-mindedself-respectingoptimisticParas.12-13Paras.12-13Development Development CluesCluesamazeunde
7、rstandsorry Writing Technique(Narration interspersed with comment)narrationnarrationnarrationnarrationcommentcommentcommentRepetition“You set the pace,I will try to adjust to you.”The son help his father keep balance during their walks.(para.2)The father had helped the son keep his balance in life.(
8、para.12)Pun(Para 2)(Para 13)Father-Son Son-Father I think of him when I complain about trifles,when I am envious of anothers good fortune,when I dont have a“good heart”.(Para.12)ParallelismIf he did,I am sorry I never told him how sorry I was,how unworthy I was,how I regretted it.(Para.12)Repetition
9、 PunHow a crippled father helped his son _ through his act out of a _.good heartkeep balanceMain Idea of the TextRole-playA boy and his treeRole-play树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不待树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不待!孔子集语孔子集语 The tree wants to still,The tree wants to still,but the wind against its will.but the wind against its will.A child wants to give,A child wants to give,yet the parents no longer receive!yet the parents no longer receive!
