1、虚拟语气虚拟语气在写作中的运用在写作中的运用如何让作文有亮点？比喻比喻 A is to B what C is to D.Like the sunshine,kindness can help those in trouble.Kindness is like the lighthouse,which can direct the way for those who are in dim situation.排比排比If I could go back to the past and do the above mentioned things,the last thing my grandpa
2、 remembered would not be the indifference and the back of his beloved grandson.If I could travel back through time,the last memory between him and me would not be his closed eyes and the dead look of half-unconscious suffering.Then now,I would not have to live with this unbearable regret and pain fo
3、r the rest of my life.If only I could!倒装倒装 Simple as the story is,Here goes the saying that _.Only when _ can we _.Only in this way can we _.Only by doing can we_.Only after doing sth can we _.On the west of the school lies a pond,where many fish are swimming.Under no circumstance should we _.类似的用法：
4、类似的用法：Never/By no means/on no account/in no way/at no time should I.Hardly/scarcely had I got into the room when it began to rain.(no sooner.than)Had it not been for her sticking to being on time,she wouldnt have earned herself a well-paid job and more importantly built up an image of reliability an
5、d integrity.倒装倒装/虚拟虚拟 Should I be given the opportunities to travel to the past,I would like to go back to Qing Dynasty of early 20th century when China was in a disaster.Were I back in the late Qing Dynasty,I would make every endeavor to rescue China from the foreign invaders and prevent it from be
6、ing bullied without resistance.亮点写作的注意事项亮点写作的注意事项 1.过多的亮点，显得堆砌过多的亮点，显得堆砌 对策：亮点分布，尽量首句对策：亮点分布，尽量首句 2.亮点单一，例如全段排比或比喻亮点单一，例如全段排比或比喻 对策：最好总对策：最好总排比排比-总的结构。照顾段总的结构。照顾段落的完整性。落的完整性。3.华而不实，不重视内容，徒有框架没有内华而不实，不重视内容，徒有框架没有内容容 对策：先想内容，再想修辞手法对策：先想内容，再想修辞手法 4.过多注重运用亮点，没有注意谋篇，顾过多注重运用亮点，没有注意谋篇，顾此失彼此失彼 对策：谋好篇，定好每点行数
7、，才能下笔对策：谋好篇，定好每点行数，才能下笔虚拟语气在写作中的运用虚拟语气在写作中的运用 What emotion can be expressed by using the subjunctive mood?“If I _(not quarrel)with Tom and gone into the forest,I _(not be)trapped in the awful place now!”Jane was filled with regret and anxiety and gradually fell asleep with tears in her eyes.-2016.10
8、浙江高考续写：夫妻吵架 森林迷路We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.I was almost on the edge of break down.How I wished I _(not follow)the rabbit into the forest!/If only I _(not follow)the rabbit into the forest!-2018.6浙江续写：骑马遇白兔If it had not been for Dorothy,I would not have brains.I owed(欠)all m
9、y luck to her.-The Wizard of OZ 绿野仙踪“If you had been more careful,Poppy would not have been lost!”I couldnt contain my anger and shouted at Dad.-The Lost DogHe suggested that I _(work)out on a regular basis.It is high time that we _(live)a low-carbon life and contributed to environmental protection.
10、Practice A letter of gratitude 如果没有你的指导，我不可能取得这么大的进步。Without your guidance,I couldnt have made such great progress.如果没有你的热情和友好，我在英国的那段时间不可能那么愉快。Without your kindness and hospitality,I couldnt have enjoyed my stay in England.如果不是你们良好的服务和优美的环境，我们的旅行不会这么愉快。But for your good service and pleasant environ
11、ment,we couldnt have enjoyed our trip.如果没有你及时的鼓励和帮助，我不可能被重点大学录取。Without your timely encouragement and assistance,I couldnt have been admitted to the key university.A letter of apology 我多么希望我没有跟你吵架啊！How I wish I hadnt quarreled with you!我宁愿我没有对你说那些伤人的话。I would rather I hadnt sad such hurtful words to
12、 you.我多希望去参加你的生日聚会，但是我得为明天的考试做准备。I wish I could attend your birthday party,but I have to make preparations for the exam tomorrow.A letter of complaint 要不是在那么餐馆吃了变质的食物，我现在不可能躺在医院里。If I hadnt eaten the bad food in your restaurant,I couldnt be in hospital now.要不是你们服务质量太差，我们的度假本会很舒服的。But for your poor service,our holiday could have been enjoyable.A letter of advice 如果我是你的话，我就会听老师的话。If I were you,I would follow what the teacher says.作为你的朋友，我建议你把均衡的膳食和定期锻炼结合起来，以保持健康。As your friend,I suggest that you combine balanced diets and regular workout to stay fit.
