1、Writing:The secret of high-mark composition失分原因：失分原因：v1.语言语言表达有错误，不地道表达有错误，不地道。v2.要点要点有所遗漏。有所遗漏。v3.词汇量小，句子单一词汇量小，句子单一。v4.句子衔接不自然。句子衔接不自然。v5.离题句太多。离题句太多。v6.书写差书写差。1.1.要点齐全要点齐全2.2.较多的语法结构和较多的语法结构和高级高级词汇词汇3.3.语言地道，准确语言地道，准确 4.4.全文结构紧凑清析全文结构紧凑清析5.5.书写美观书写美观 a good composition 影响给分的因素之一：影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文
2、的卷面 漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点Which composition feels more attractive,why?影响给分的因素之二：影响给分的因素之二：语言语言 A.词汇词汇的选择灵活新颖，高级的选择灵活新颖，高级.B.句型句型结构运用灵活多变结构运用灵活多变.人靠衣装，文靠词装人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇层面词汇层面vAdj.聪明的、脑筋好的聪明的、脑筋好的vclevervsmartvwisevbrightvintelligent短语层面短语层面v电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。v1.Computers are very important in our l
3、ife.v2.Computers play a very important role in our puters are of great importance in our life.v越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。v越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。水平。句型层面句型层面v他昨天下午来的。v1.He came here yesterday afternoon.v2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.v3.Not until yesterday aftern
4、oon did he come here.v4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.Rewrite the sentences 1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He studies hard.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Arriving at the school,
5、they felt the happy atmosphere.Given another chance,I will succeed.To improve his English,he studies hard.尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式一一就受到欢迎就受到欢迎v1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。v2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。v3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。v4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。v5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基
6、本条件。v6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。2022年11月2022-11-72022-11-72022-11-711/7/2022v7、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。2022-11-72022-11-7November 7,2022v8、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-7As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcome
7、d.On arriving at the airport,Lien Chan and his wifeLien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/the moment they arrived at the airport.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 影响给分的因素之三：
8、影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好正确而巧妙地使用好连接词连接词使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least and;too;as well as;along with;together withfor example;for instance;like;such as;as to but;however;while;though;on the contrarybecause;since;thanks to;as a result/consequen
9、ce(of);thus;therefore in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusionwhats more;besides;to make matters worse;whats worse;worse still;furthermore3.Sentences（同位语，倒（同位语，倒装，强调，非谓语，定语从装，强调，非谓语，定语从句，感叹句等多样化的句型句，感叹句等多样化的句型与句子结构）与句子结构）Five steps for writing(写作五步骤）1.Cross-question(审题审题)Main idea Style tense Pers
10、on2.Seize the major points/key words/phrases，figure out the outline(提纲提纲)5.Error correcting(拼写，名词单复数，时态，拼写，名词单复数，时态，主谓一致，句子结构主谓一致，句子结构)4.Ensure the fluency Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbs(添加添加过渡，确保连贯）过渡，确保连贯）passage例文例文假设你是宏力学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给
11、她写一封信。英语演讲比赛 英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2：005：00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右。Step 1 审题审题假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。v写信v我是李华。v比赛，评委v一般现在，将来 1.Cross-question(审题审题)Main idea Style tense PersonStep 2 Key points2.Seize th
12、e major points/key words/phrases，figure out the outline(提纲提纲)英语演讲比赛 英语演讲比赛主题主题：人与自然人与自然 时间：6月月15日下午日下午2：005：00 地点：501教室教室 参赛选手：参赛选手：10名学生名学生 联系人：李华联系人：李华（电话电话44876655）欢迎大家光临假设你是宏力学校学生会主席学生会主席李华。你校将举办举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。1,chairman of Students Union 2
13、,hold,take place3,speech contest4,close,nearby,not too far5,judge,to decide who the winner will be1,the topic;the subject;the theme;the main idea2,Man and Nature;Human,Human beings,Mankind;Nature,the World;Environment3,in Room 501 at 2:00-5:00 on the afternoon of June 15;from 2:00pm to 5:00pm on Jun
14、e 154,10 students;take part in,deliver/give their speeches5,call me,contact me,phone meStep 3:sentences3.Sentences（同位语，倒（同位语，倒装，强调，非谓语，定语从装，强调，非谓语，定语从句，感叹句等多样化的句型句，感叹句等多样化的句型与句子结构）与句子结构）1,I am Li Hua,Chairman of Students Union of Henan Hongli School,which is close to your university.2,Our school wil
15、l hold an English speech contest in order to improve the students oral English.3,The topic is Man and Nature.4,I am writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest.5,It is in Room 501 in our school at 2:00-5:00 in the afternoon of June 15 that the English speech contest will take p
16、lace.6,Ten students will deliver their speeches.7,Please call me if you have any questions.8 My number is 44876655.Step 4:passage4.Ensure the fluency(添加过渡，添加过渡，确保连贯）确保连贯）Dear Ms.Smith,I am Li Hua,Chairman of Students Union of Henan HongliSchool,which is close to your university.Recently our school w
17、ill hold an English speech contest in order to improve the students oral English and I am writing to invite you to be a judge at the English speech contest.It is in Room 501 in our school at 2:00-5:00 in the afternoon of June 15 that the English speech contest will take place.Then ten students will
18、deliver their speeches on the given topic“Man and Nature”.We will appreciate it if you will accept our invitation at your convenience.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Yours,Li HuaStep 5:correctionvSpellingvNouns pluralvTense vAgreementvStructurevOthers5.Error correcting(拼写，名词单复数，时态，拼写，名词单复数，时态，主谓一致，句子结构主谓一致，句子结构)1.1.要点齐全要点齐全2.2.较多的语法结构和较多的语法结构和高级高级词汇词汇3.3.语言地道，准确语言地道，准确4.4.全文结构紧凑清析全文结构紧凑清析5.5.书写美观书写美观 a good composition 背诵短文背诵短文日积月累日积月累
