1、书面表达谋篇布局学法指导Learning Goals 学习目标1.明确书面表达写作要求。2.学会正确审题。3.学会在书面表达中谋篇布局明确明确书面表达要求书面表达要求 新新课标课标五级语言技能对学生写的能力做了以下要求:1.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改:3.能使用常见的连接词表达文章的顺序和逻辑关系:4.能简单描述人物或事件;5.能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明；审题布局生成秘诀一 审题（examine the topic）审人称、审时态、审要点2019年广东中考作文年广东中考作文 假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学
2、校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的学校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。内容包括:1.推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。2.介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排(包括活动的时间。地点和内容)。参考活动参考活动:欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera)，体验功夫(kung fu)，参加广东历史讲座等。人称人称时态时态要点要点I we you 一般现在一般将来两种广东美食两项活动安排（时间，地点，内容）2017年广东省中考作文年广东省中考作文 常言道良言一句三冬暖,恶语伤人六月寒。假设你是李雷，你将要参加学校举办
3、的英语演讲比赛，主题是语言的力量，请你写一篇英文演讲稿，内容包括：你的一次受老师或同学言语激励的经历（事情的经过以及对你的影响）；呼吁同学们要注意自身言语对他人的影响。人称人称时态时态要点要点I,my teacher/classmate一般过去一般现在1.受老师或同学言语激励经过、影响2.呼吁 Good evening,everyone.I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students Union.I am very pleased to welcome you to the party.I hope youll enjoy your stay here!introdu
4、ce two kinds of food第二段：推荐食物 introduce two activities第三段：介绍活动安排1.按点分段 内容包括：1.推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。2.介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)。秘诀二 布局Questions About WritingHow to introduce the food?How to introduce the activities?How to introduce the food?1.How to introduce the food?1.头脑风暴，写出和广东传统食物相关的词。traditional f
5、ood Names of the foodQualities of the food2.根据词汇，梳理信息。Ways to make the foodshrimp dumplingbeef ballsfish ballschicken feetfried goose,delicious,fresh,natural,be made by hand,be made from/of.2.连词成句秘诀二 布局shrimp dumplingbeef ballsfish ballschicken feetfried goose,delicious,fresh,natural,be made by hand
6、,be made from/of.2.连词成句Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famous traditional food in Guangdong.They are both made by hand and taste delicious.3.有“始”有“终”Ending sentenceOpening sentenceMain sentences连词成句：主语+谓语+其他（一般现在时）Opening sentenceI hope you will like them.Youll never forget the food.Ending sentenc
7、eWeve prepared some traditional food for you.Let me introduce some traditional food for you.请结合内容主题请结合内容主题连线连线导出句和结尾句导出句和结尾句3.有“始”有“终”Ending sentenceOpening sentenceMain sentencesEnding sentenceI hope youll like them.Opening sentenceLet me introduce some traditional food for you./Weve prepared some
8、traditional food for you.Weve prepared some traditional food for you.Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famous traditional food in Guangdong.They are both made by hand and taste delicious.I hope youll like them.introduce two kinds of food第二段：推荐食物小贴士：归纳部分导出句和结束句 结束句：结束句：I hope that.Im sure thatWhat /H
9、ow 感叹句！I think 导出观点及想法：导出观点及想法：In my opinion,I think thatI find it+adj.to do.As we know,导出不同观点：导出不同观点：Every coin has two sides.However,I dont think.I dont agree that.导出经历或导出经历或故事：故事：Once,Long time ago,When I was a little child,Last week.导出建议：导出建议：Let me tell you some advice.Here is some advice for y
10、ou.Id like to share my advice with you.Questions About WritingHow to introduce the food?How to introduce the activities?activitiesWhenWhereWhat to do 1.按点分段秘诀二 布局2.连词成句3.有“始”有“终”4.?Activity 1 Cantonese operaWhen_ Where_What to do _the first dayin City Hallenjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera连词成句：主语+谓
11、语+地点状语+时间状语（一般将来时）You will enjoy the beautiful art in City Hall on the first day.Activity 2 Kung fuWhen_ Where_What to do _the second dayin the gymlearn Chinese kung fu from a master连词成句：主语+谓语+地点状语+时间状语（一般将来时）You will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day.2.连词成句Activity 3
12、a history lectureWhen_ Where_What to do _the third dayin Zhongshan UniversityListen to a history lecture 连词成句：主语+谓语+地点状语+时间状语（一般将来时）On the third day,a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture.You will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese oper
13、a in City Hall on the first day.You will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day.On the third day,a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture.Ending sentenceOpening sentenceMain sentencesEnding sentenceIm sure y
14、oull have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong.Opening sentenceAs for the plan of the activities,/Here we plan some activities for you.3.有“始”有“终”introduce two activities第三段：介绍活动安排 Here we plan some activities for you.You will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the firs
15、t day.You will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day.On the third day,a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture.Im sure youll have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong.1.按点分段秘诀二 布局2.连词成句3.有“始”有
16、“终”4.?4.骨肉相连-连接词 Here we plan some activities for you._,you will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the first day._,you will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second day._,on the third day,a history lecture will be held in Zhongshan University for you so that you
17、 can learn more about the culture.Im sure youll have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong.FirstSecondAt last表顺序 first,second,then,next,finally firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally on the one hand,on the other hand for one thing,for another thing表转折 but,however,though 表列举 for example,such a
18、s表递进 whats more,besides,not only.but also表因果 so,therefore,as a result.thanks to表观点 in my opinion,as far as|know表总结 in a word,in short,in conclusion常见的连接词：常见的连接词：练一练：练一练：We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it._,we should stay calm before bullying behavior happens.We
19、 should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others.Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies._,we will learn how to have a selfprotection because our personal safety is the most important._,we should be peaceful with others at all times and cant have any violent beh
20、avior._,obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.FirstlySecondlyFinallyFor example秘诀三 生成 Good evening,everyone.I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students Union.I am very pleased to welcome you to the party.Weve prepared some traditional food for you.Shrimp dumpling and beef ball are famo
21、us traditional food in Guangdong.They are both made by hand and taste delicious.I hope youll like them.Here we plan some activities for you.First,you will enjoy the beautiful Cantonese opera in City Hall on the first day.Second,you will learn Chinese kung fu from a master in the gym on the second da
22、y.At last,on the third day,a history lecture will hold in Zhongshan University for you so that you can learn more about the culture.Im sure youll have a better understanding of the culture in Guangdong.I hope youll enjoy your stay here!introduce two kinds of foodintroduce two activities查要点，查语言(拼写，时态，语句逻辑)will be heldSummary秘诀一 审题1.审人称 2.审时态 3.审要点秘诀二 布局1.按点分段2.连词成句3.有“始”有“终”4.骨肉相连秘诀三 生成查要点，查语言(拼写，时态，语句逻辑)为文段添加导出句和结尾句在句子之间添加连接词Homework1.使用本节课所学方法写作。（以2018年广东中考作文为例）2.与同学们分享写作心得。
