1、 外研版七年级下外研版七年级下写作素养提升练写作素养提升练Module 10A holiday journey 外研版七年级下外研版七年级下本模块的话题是假期旅行，谈论旅行经历的时候可按照时间顺序来写，比如从旅行时间、地点开始写起，再写旅行的具体经历，最后再描述自己旅行后的感受，行文可以是总分总的结构。素材典藏素材典藏world-famous,wonderful,excited,relax,till,during.单 词：素材典藏素材典藏on holiday,get to,first of all,enjoy ourselves,on the first day,stay for,have a
2、 good time,learn about.短 语：素材典藏素材典藏1.I went to.with my parents during the holiday.2.I arrived by plane last year.3.We stayed there for five days.4.On the third day,we went to.5.I learned much there and enjoyed myself.句 型：经典例题经典例题假如你是李军，是某中学初一的一名学生。你和父母在暑假期间去了伦敦旅行。请根据下列提示，给你的笔友吉姆写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的旅行经历和感受。
3、邮件格式已给出。经典例题经典例题要点：1.乘飞机抵达，在伦敦停留5 天；2.行程：（1）第一天参观了大英博物馆；（2）第二天乘船在泰晤士河旅行；（3）第三天去了“伦敦眼”，饱览伦敦风光；（4）最后两天拜访父母的朋友。3.个人感受。经典例题经典例题要求：1.词数不少于70（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。经典例题经典例题From:Li Jun Sent:SundayTo:Jim Subject:My holiday in London_Love,Li Jun经典例题经典例题1.体裁：体裁：记叙文2.人称人称：第一人称3.时态时态：一般过去时【审题指导
4、审题指导】经典例题经典例题【思路构建思路构建】假期假期旅行旅行时间、地点I went to London during the summer holiday.事件和经历On the first day,we visited.On the second day,we took a boat tour.On the third day,we went to.表达感想London is a beautiful city with a long history.经典例题经典例题From:Li Jun Sent:SundayTo:Jim Subject:My holiday in LondonHi,Ji
5、m!I went to London with my parents during the summer holiday.We stayed there for five days.After we arrived in London by plane,we began our tour of the city.On the first day,we visited the British Museum with lots of world-famous works of art.On the second day,we took a【范文赏析范文赏析】经典例题经典例题boat tour on
6、 the River Thames.It was so wonderful!On the third day,we went to the London Eye and did some sightseeing.During the last two days,we visited my parents friends in the town.We felt excited and enjoyed ourselves very much.London is a beautiful city with a long history.Love,Li Jun经典例题经典例题点评：本文是写邮件告诉笔友
7、自己的旅行经历和感受。人称为第一人称，主时态为一般过去时，最后一句运用了一般现在时。夹叙夹议让文章生动饱满。介绍活动时按照时间的顺序，具有条理性。句中多处运用到with 结构表伴状态，语言结构显得紧凑且内容丰富。写作实践写作实践假如你叫张明，你的美国笔友Rick 通过电子邮件询问你的北京之旅。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封不少于60 词的邮件。要点：1.对收到电子邮件表示感谢;2.告诉他你的北京之旅很愉快以及你所游览的一些名胜古迹;3.邀请Rick 明年暑假来北京玩。写作实践写作实践_Dear Rick，How are you getting on?Thank you for your e
8、mail.I had a wonderful time in Beijing last week.First of all,I went to the Palace Museum.I saw many old things and visited the emperors home.Then,I climbed the Great Wall and I thought the people in the old days were quite wise.I learned much there and enjoyed myself.I hope youll come写作实践写作实践_to visit Beijing next summer holiday.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Zhang Ming
