1、English writing 五级写作目标：五级写作目标：能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件能简单描述人物或事件能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明 7-97-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标年级分别完成三、四、五级目标中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档（第一档（17-20分）分）写出全部内容要点，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚层次清楚
2、，语言流畅语言流畅，有句式变化有句式变化，有复有复杂结构杂结构第二档（第二档（13-16分）分）基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有少量语法错误。基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有少量语法错误。第三档（第三档（9-12分）分）写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。第四档（第四档（5-8分）分）写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。第五档（第五档（0-4分）分）言不达意，不知所云。言不达意，不知所云。注意：注意：0分作文：分作文：1.空白卷空白卷 2.原本
3、照抄试卷上的阅读文本。原本照抄试卷上的阅读文本。3.全中文全中文 4.全拼音全拼音 5.无一个单词与规定内容有关。无一个单词与规定内容有关。以下情况不给满分作文：以下情况不给满分作文：书写差，字迹不工整。书写差，字迹不工整。有标点符号和大小写错误的有标点符号和大小写错误的 文中只要有一处及以上语言错误。文中只要有一处及以上语言错误。文中出现自己的姓名和学校名。文中出现自己的姓名和学校名。1.超出字数过多的（原则上不超出超出字数过多的（原则上不超出30词）词）Dear Dr.Know，I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell
4、 you some problems we meet in English study.First，some of us arent interested in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid
5、to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats moreWhats more,there are so many new words we havent,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant un
6、derstand the main idea,Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alonelet alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and se
7、ntences.sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Pleasegive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Please give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Please write soon.write soon.Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）（正
8、文）（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】审体裁审体裁 （记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文（记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文）审题型审题型 (文字提示类、图画提示类、图表提示类和文字提示类、图画提示类、图表提示类和开放作文等）开放作文等）审主题审主题（抓要点，紧扣主题，心中有数，不任意发（抓要点，紧扣主题，心中有数，不任意发挥）挥）审人
9、称审人称（第一人称，第二人称，三人称）第一人称，第二人称，三人称）审时态审时态（特定的文章有特定的时态（特定的文章有特定的时态；根据内容斟；根据内容斟酌每个句子的时态）酌每个句子的时态）（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次
10、调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。要点一定要齐全，切勿漏掉。列（list）（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT
11、执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下根据以下关键词及图表关键词及图表用用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】A lot of people travel.Some people stay at hom
12、e.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】加（加（add）加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁简洁，吸吸引评卷教师的注意。引评卷教师的注意。（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(
13、50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.a nice head(the beginning)a nice
14、 tail(the ending)a nice body加:（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】连连(connect)恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰清晰，各个部分衔接自然，连贯，流畅衔接自然，连贯，流畅。（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is
15、 our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（
16、新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】美（改）美（改）修改修改文中的小错误（人称、时态、文中的小错误（人称、时态、单复数、单词拼写、标点、大小写单复数、单词拼写、标点、大小写等等）。选等等）。选好好词造句，词造句，修改修改文章。文章。注意注意书写的规范书写的规范，语言的，语言的精确性精确性。在在有把握的情况下有把握的情况下展示自己的语言展示自己的语言功底，美化文章，赢得读者的共鸣。功底，美化文章，赢得读者的共鸣。（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推
17、荐】How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax
18、well work well.连连(connect)美美(beautify)（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】（新）中考英语书面表达指导教学教学PPT-(50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then so
19、me people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)According to it,most people choose to travel to ge
20、t away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.Peoplewho relax well work well.美美
21、(beautify)And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.Proverb（谚语）（谚语）/saying锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our
22、 studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a
23、good way to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying o
24、ver spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Which is better?A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im loo
25、king forward to your help.Which is better?他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesti
26、ng.B I find it really fun to learn English.A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after
27、 all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since th
28、en,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short _ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running an
29、d hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last方法四方法四:妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can us
30、e recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美提示策略：提示策略：熟悉句型特
31、点（如五种简单句的基本结构，疑问句，感叹句等）熟悉句型特点（如五种简单句的基本结构，疑问句，感叹句等）背诵范文背诵范文 有的放矢勤训练有的放矢勤训练 仔细审题切莫偏仔细审题切莫偏Look at the small paper！To Be a Greener Person As we know,the environment is getting worse and worse and it is our duty to take action to protect our environment.We should save water,electricity and paper.When w
32、e brush our teeth,wed better turn off the tap.When we leave the room,we should shut off the electricity.We should also use both sides of the paper.We can take a cloth bag when we go shopping.Dont buy unnecessary things in the supermarket.Its good for our health to walk or ride to school instead of t
33、aking cars.Dont throw rubbish everywhere.Lets act now and make our world more and more beautiful.To Be a Greener Person As we know,the environment is getting worse and worse and it is our duty to take action to protect our environment.We should save water,electricity and paper.When we brush our teet
34、h,wed better turn off the tap.When we leave the room,we should shut off the electricity.We should also use both sides of the paper.We can take a cloth bag when we go shopping.Dont buy unnecessary things in the supermarket.Its good for our health to walk or ride to school instead of taking cars.Dont
35、throw rubbish everywhere.Lets act now and make our world more and more beautiful.Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.Now Im as busy as a bee.Theres a lot of homewor
36、k and exams.The only feeling I have is:The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging!Theres an old saying:He who fails to plan plans to fail.I dont want to fail,so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it,I will change my attitude to
37、wards maths and physics which I am poor at now.Ill spend the rest time efficiently.As theres no elevator to success,Ill try my best to do everything step by step!I believe that I can do it!Its your turn!（请分析以下的文章请分析以下的文章）写作的写作的“五项基本原则五项基本原则”一、一、长短句原则长短句原则 As a creature,I eat;as a man,I read.Although
38、 one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind,they are in a way quite similar.二、二、主题句原则主题句原则 To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect
39、to answer all the questions correctly.三、三、一二三原则一二三原则 1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）the first,the second,the third,the last4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally6）to start with,next,in addition,finally7
40、）first and foremost,besides,last but not least8）most important of all,moreover,finally 9）on the one hand,on the other hand10）for one thing,for another thing四、四、短语优先原则短语优先原则 I cannot bear/stand it.I cannot put up with it.I want it.I am looking forward to it.五、多变句式原则五、多变句式原则 I enjoy music and he is fo
41、nd of playing guitar.Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.hen,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this reason,so that This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.The man whom you met yest
42、erday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,coal,natural gas,
43、solar heat,the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.THANK YOU!一、一、介绍人和事件介绍人和事件 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）
