1、Reading for WritingUnit 2 Traveling Aroundthe Shaanxi History Museum For foreign visitors,which city in China may attract them most?Beijing,Tianjin,Shanghai,Xian.Xian is always a popular destination for tourist.What attractions does Xian have?The ancient architecturethe Terracotta Army Richard has f
2、ound a brochure about Terracotta Army.sizehistoryfeature特点length of time and laborbe discovered More than .Each statue has ,leading researchers to believe that each one is .More than worked for nearly to build this tomb.Some farmers discovered the tomb when they were .by accidentIf you were Richard,
3、What amazes you most in the brochure?sizehistoryfeaturebe discovered by accidentlenght of time and laborI am amazed by.Its unbelievable.amazes me most.Read the travel plan quickly and connect the main idea main purpose for the trip other plans for the trip transport final thoughtsPara.1Para.2Para.3P
4、ara.4What details does each para.talk about?wherewhen why how who What Why greetingthought&close Underline the words and phrases that show Richards feeling towards the trip.Use them when writing about future plans!sentence patterns 假定你是李华，元旦你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。内容包含以下内容：目的地中国第二大岛-海南岛时
5、间1月1日-1月3日活动岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营感想增长知识，拓宽视野 1）审题：确定写作体裁）审题：确定写作体裁和题和题 体裁体裁:应用文应用文-告知信告知信 主题：给主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。2）确定时态和人称）确定时态和人称 时态：一般将来时时态：一般将来时 一般现在时一般现在时 人称：第一人称、第二人称人称：第一人称、第二人称3）明确写作要点）明确写作要点 对对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈的来信做出评价和反馈 具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）旅游的心得体会旅
6、游的心得体会4）布局）布局 第一段：问候写信目的；第一段：问候写信目的；第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划(时间，交通工具，活动）；时间，交通工具，活动）；第三段：体会第三段：体会+期待回复期待回复It is an amazing sight and I cant wait to go.its amazing that.海南的美景让人惊艳，我迫不及待要去了。I am amazed by.Especially amazing is.I am amazed by the beautiful sights in hainan,and I cant wait to g
7、o.Especially amazing are the beautiful sights in Hainan,and I cant wait to go.It is amazing that Hainan has beautiful sights,and I cant wait to go.What amazes me most is that.is almost unbelievable.I cant believe it!Its hard to believeIts an unbelievable story.令人难以置信的是沙滩的沙子是金色的。The golden sand is al
8、most unbelievable.Its hard to believe the sand in Yuliao is golden.清澈的海水让人难以置信。The clear seawater is almost unbelievable.are looking forward to.I am dying to goI have been longing for.我一直非常渴望在海南。Im looking forward to exploring Hainan.I am dying to swim in Hainan.I have been longing for watching the
9、sunset in Hainan.It is my dream destination.Ive always wanted to visit.How exciting it is to.more similar expressions?海南是我的梦想目的地。Hainan is my dream destination.我一直想在Hainan露营(go camping)。Ive always wanted to go camping in Hainan.在海南吃海鲜太让人兴奋了。How exciting it is to enjoy seafood in Hainan.1.我们打算在新年前一天坐
10、飞机离开，在那里呆三天（1月1日-1月3日）2.除了在岛上远足，我们还计划参加其他的活动，包括海上冲浪，岛上宿营。3.在我看来，旅行不但增长知识还拓宽视野。We are flying there,leaving the day before the New Year holiday begins and will spend three days there,from Jan.1st to Jan.3rd.Other than hiking on the island,we are also planning to take many other activities like surfing
11、 in the water,spending the nights in the tents.From my point of view,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.Dear Richard,Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you something about my travel plans for the coming holidays.W
12、ith the New Year coming,my parents and I are planning to travel to Hainan Island to enjoy its beautiful scenery.We are flying there,leaving the day before the New Year holiday begins and will spend three days there,from Jan.1st to Jan.3rd.I have heard that its scenery is so amazing that we choose to
13、 travel to Hainan Island.Other than hiking on the island,we are also planning to take many other activities like surfing in the water,spending the nights in the tents.I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.In my opinion,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.Look fo
14、rward to your early reply.Sincerely Yours,LiHualIs there a clear purpose for the trip?lDoes each paragraph have a clear main idea?lDo you use present continuous tense for future plans?lDo you use commas,stops,and question marks correctly?lAre all the words spelt correctly?lAre all the proper nouns c
15、apitalized?After finishing your draft,assess your work according to the checklist:Revise your draft according to your partners comments.Dear Richard,My time in England is going wonderfully!My new school is amazing,and all the teachers and classmates are so friendly.Over the Christmas holiday,my pare
16、nts and I am going up to London to see the Tower of London.We are curious about how such a pretty castle could once be used as a prison.I also heard its where the marvelous Crown Jewels are located.Itll be a rare chance to take a closer look at them.Were also planning to visit the Big Ben,Westminste
17、r Abbey and of course were going to ride on the London Eye.Well also spend half a day seeing the treasures in the British Museum.We plan on taking a train up,which should only take an hour and a half.Since we are staying with an English family in London,they will come to pick us up at the train stat
18、ion.Well,I guess thats about it for now.Ill buy you a souvenir from the Tower shop.Talk later.Yours,Xiao LiWrite a travel plan on Yuliao to your friend.ParagraphMain idea1greeting+main purpose(when,where,who,why)2 plans+transport(what,why,how)3thoughts+close Dont forget to use words and phrases like amazing/unbelievable/longing for.to express feelingsbe doing.
