1、 要求说明字数续写内容为150词左右材料350词以内要求1.原文提供10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写内容应使用5处以上这些词语。2.两段，每段的开头语已经给出体裁记叙文故事类逻辑性较强实际练习 One day，my brother and I were alone in our apartmentThe reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everythingI was doing my homework while my younger broth
2、er was watching televisionSuddenly，the doorbell rangDingDong!DingDong!My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the doorWe both thought that our parents had come homeAs a result，he unlocked the door and opened it Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat a
3、nd black rubber bootsHe looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them Without any thinking，my brother said，NoHe asked if we would like to buy some comic books，which he was sellingI quickly ex
4、plained to him that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parentspermissionHowever，it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house Then I realized something terrible would happenAs I was about to close the door，he forced his way into our ho
5、useHe took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brothers hands with some rope which he took out from his pocketI tied up his hands but I tied in a special way so my brother could untie himself as we often didThe man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen Soon he went upstairs t
6、o search the bedroom for something valuableI managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his handsHe then untied meI rushed to the telephone to call the police，but the line was dead注意：1 1所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150150左右；左右；2 2应使用应使用5 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写部分分为
7、两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语语Paragraph 1Paragraph 1：The doors were all locked from the outside and whats worse，I did not have the keys Paragraph 2Paragraph 2：Just at the same time our parents came back home 【分析】文是读写任务型写作，在总结材料提供的信息的基础上完成写作，写作时注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用
8、5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 时态用一般现在时人称用第一和第三人称解题方法点拨（1）品读原文，确定文章线索 每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜（结尾）”。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求 一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到“心中有数”。解题方法点拨（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路 根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读课文，抓住
9、文章的思路结合首段的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句 在确定了思路和内容后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文章中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句子与句子之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。解题方法点拨（5）关键用词，标出续写部分中使用到原材料中标有下划线的关键词语这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。范文：The doors were all locked from the outside and whats wors
10、e，I did not have the keysBut luckily，the man forgot to lock the kitchen windowBoth my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help（高分句型一）The police arrived at our house as soon as quicklyAnd as a result，the man was c
11、aught Just at the same time our parents came back homeThe police asked my family to go to the police stationIt was at there the police told us that the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they have been trying to catch him for a long time（高分句型二）The police praised my brother an
12、d me for our braveryAfter we went back home，I told my parents the whole story about the robberyThey were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door to strangersI learned a lesson on safety and responsibility（154 words）解析：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟在父
13、母不在家的情况下经历一次入室抢劫以及他们如何成功逃脱且报警的故事。高分句型一：Both my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help.译文：我和弟弟都从窗户逃出来，跑到附近的警察局，向他们求助。分析：使用了where引导的定语从句。高分句型二：It was at there the police told us that the man was a wanted robber p
14、retending to sell comic books and they have been trying to catch him for a long time.译文：就是在那里，警察告诉我们那个人是个通缉犯，假装卖漫画书，他们已经抓他很长时间了。分析：使用了that引导的宾语从句以及强调句。重点词汇：whats worse（更糟糕的是）；forget to do（忘记做某事）；arrive at（到达）；as a result（结果）；at the same time（同时）；police station（警察局）；pretend to（假装做某事）高分句型：1Both my bro
15、ther and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help managed to do设法做成某事，ran和asked是并列成分，在句中并列作谓语 2They were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door to strangers stop sb from doing是一个固定短语，阻止某人干某事
