1、中考英语写作指导If you want to be a great writer like her,you must do a thing first.English 根据学校安排明天你们要去大光明影院看电影，请你以班长的身份，根据下面的提示，把电影院的规定讲给班里的同学们.并做适当发挥。字数要求：80-100词。首句已给出，不计入总词数。提示：1.不准吸烟 2.关闭手机 3.不准大声喧哗 4.禁止携带食物 5.不乱扔垃圾Hello,everyone,Well go to DaGuangming Cinema to see a movie tomorrow.Id like to tell yo
2、u the rules of the cinema._ Thank you for listening.Hello,everyoneHello,everyone,Well go to Well go to DaguangmingDaguangming Cinema to see a movie Cinema to see a movie tomorrow.Idtomorrow.Id like to tell you the rules of the cinema.like to tell you the rules of the cinema.One,I will tell you:“Dont
3、 smoke.”And should One,I will tell you:“Dont smoke.”And should turn off the phone.Two,you cant speak loudly in the turn off the phone.Two,you cant speak loudly in the cinema.Three,you cant take any foods to the cinema and cinema.Three,you cant take any foods to the cinema and not throw the rubbish e
4、verywhere.you should get to there not throw the rubbish everywhere.you should get to there on time.I think you can do all the thing.Have a good time!on time.I think you can do all the thing.Have a good time!Thank you for listening.Thank you for listening.What do you think of this composition?Then wh
5、at should we do Then what should we do if we want to write a if we want to write a beautiful composition?beautiful composition?1.simple sentences1.simple sentencesbad pointsbad points2.many mistakes2.many mistakes3.dull3.dull4.4.ChinglishChinglish中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)第五档（第五档（13-1513
6、-15分）分）能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。清楚。第四档（第四档（10-1210-12分）分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点；语言有少量错误；星闻基本连贯，能写明全部或大部分内容要点；语言有少量错误；星闻基本连贯，表达基本清楚。表达基本清楚。第三档（第三档（7-97-9分）分）能写明大部分内容要点；语言有较多错误；尚能达意。能写明大部分内容要点；语言有较多错误；尚能达意。中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共
7、26张PPT)These These six steps six steps may help to make your may help to make your composition composition betterbetter!审抓扩连改抄(previewpreview)(focusfocus)(expandexpand)(linklink)(reviserevise)(transcribetranscribe)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)体裁体裁时态时态人称人称断句断句动词动词短语语块短语语块句式结构句式结构原句美化原句美化造句造句
8、并列并列顺序顺序观点观点因果因果思 维 导 图(mind mind mapmap)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文，把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。（2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱；他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。（3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但。参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。J
9、ims parents work very hard and his family has become Jims parents work very hard and his family has become very rich._very rich._中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)体裁_ 时态_ 人称_StageStage 1 1:审中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)1.“他（Jim Jim）的父母都有钱）的父母都有钱”2.“他们给他很多零花钱。给他很多零花钱。”3.“他（JimJim）理解父母的不容
10、易理解父母的不容易”4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱他不多花钱，想办法省钱。”5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书喜欢阅读，在网上买书”6.“他有时去图书馆借书有时去图书馆借书”7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学别人买饮料他却带水上学”8.“他从不花钱买零食从不花钱买零食”9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我我.”断句StageStage 2 2.1:.1:抓中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)时态时态动词StageStage 2 2.2:.2:抓中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)零花钱零花钱pocket
11、moneypocket money从从-借借borrowfromborrowfrom语块StageStage 2 2.3:.3:抓_更喜欢做某事更喜欢做某事_preferprefer to doto do中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)句子结构StageStage 2 2.4:.4:抓It is to do It is to do sthsth.中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Make up the needed sentences Make up the needed sentences StageSta
12、ge 3 3:扩1.他认为水是最便宜的也是最好的饮品。2.他是一个好学生也是一个好儿子。中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,bothand,as well as,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,although,however,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,on the o
13、ne handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释:for example,such as,8.表示顺序表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论表示结论:altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in generalStageStage 4 4:连中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导
14、课件(共26张PPT)StageStage 5 and 65 and 6:查改和誊抄1全全：信息点全2简简：句子简洁明了4准准：词汇、语法、句型结构、时态、标点5畅畅：句子连贯、前后逻辑性强6精精：首或尾处需开门见山、画龙点睛。中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)practisingCooperate with your group members to finish a perfect composition according to the six steps.中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)范文 Jims
15、 parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.His parents always give him lots of pockets.However,Jim tries to save money in many ways instead of wasting it.He thinks its not easy for his parents to make money.Jim likes reading.He often buys books on the Internet because they are cheap
16、er.Sometimes he borrows books from the library.At school,many students like to buy drinks,but Jim likes to drink the water that is brought from home instead.He thinks water is the cheapest but best drink.In addition,he never spends his money on snacks.Some students think Jim is strange,but I think h
17、e is a good student as well as a good son.中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。（1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。（2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又饿。（3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。（4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。（5）你很感动 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（
18、3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。On a cold morning,while I was范文On a cold morning,while I was buying breakfast,I saw a girl in front of me buying some bread and milk.When the girl was about to leave,she found there was a poor beggar under a tree.He looked so cold and hungry that the girl wanted to help him.So the
19、girl went close to the beggar and offered her food to him.The beggar thanked her happily and the girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.At that moment,I was moved.I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.We should learn from her and help the people in need.Homework:1.Remember the mind map.2.Finish the composition and correct it with a red pen.Thank you!
