1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关写作练兵写作练兵分析河北近分析河北近10年中考的书面表达可知,针对年中考的书面表达可知,针对“英语学习英语学习”这一话题,主要考查了这一话题,主要考查了3次,且角度多样:次,且角度多样:2016年从年从“英语不好是因为不说英语英语不好是因为不说英语”还是还是“不说不说英语是因为英语不好英语是因为英语不好”来探讨如何学习英语;来探讨如何学习英语;2012年就年就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问这一问题谈谈自己的看法;题谈谈自己的看法;2010年谈谈年谈谈“英语课上我们应英语课上我们应该怎么做该怎么做”。分析
2、全国近年真题可知,全国关于这个。分析全国近年真题可知,全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有:介绍英语学习情况,反映英话题相关的命题角度有:介绍英语学习情况,反映英语学习中存在的一些问题,介绍英语学习方法及学习语学习中存在的一些问题,介绍英语学习方法及学习英语的益处等。英语的益处等。命题探索人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“英语学习英语学习”这个话题这个话题的单元有:的单元有:教材链接Tip 1:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态Tip 2:审要点:审要点Tip 3:审角度:审角度(从读者的角度,要让读者印象深从读者的角度,要让读者印象深刻,内容要详略刻,内容要详略 得当,积
3、极正向得当,积极正向)(2016河北)河北)关于关于“说英语说英语”问题问题,李华和,李华和他的英语老师他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读。请你仔细阅读下图下图中的对话内容,中的对话内容,从中从中选择一个角色选择一个角色,按照所给要求写一篇短文。,按照所给要求写一篇短文。审主题:说英审主题:说英语语审文体:议审文体:议论文论文人称:第一人称或第人称:第一人称或第二人称二人称要求:要求:(1)用用“Li Hua”或或“Miss Wang”补全短文补全短文首句;首句;(2)写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由;写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由;(3)短文中不得出现真实的人
4、名、校名和短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;地名;(4)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出,不计入开头已给出,不计入总词数总词数)参考词汇:参考词汇:shy;make a mistake;believe in I am【句子升格范例句子升格范例】1.I like Monday because I have PE.and history.They are my favorite subjects.七七(上上)Unit 9 P502.Its too hard to understand spoken English.九九(全全)Unit 1 P2介绍学习介绍学习情况情况3.I was a
5、fraid to ask questions because of my poor pronunciation.九九(全全)Unit 1 P34.This year,with Mr.Trents help,my English level has been improving and I hope to get good grades at the end of the year.九九(全全)Unit 14 P108【句子升格句子升格】1.I like English.I think it is useful and interesting.(用用because升格升格)_2.Math is
6、too difficult for me.I cannot learn it well.(用用too.to.升格升格)I like English because I think it is useful and interesting.Math is too difficult for me to learn it well.3.I made much progress in English learning.My best friend helped me a lot.(用用with the help of升格升格)_ _ I made much progress in English l
7、earning with the help of my best friend/With the help of my best friend,I made much progress in English learning.【好句范例好句范例】1.The more you speak,the better your oral English will be.2.I discovered that listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.九九(全全)Unit 1 P3介绍学习介绍学习方法方法3.
8、I also realized I could get the meaning by listening to the conversations in English movies.九九(全全)Unit 1 P34.You can become better by reading something you enjoy every day.九九(全全)Unit 1 P21.你练习得越多,你就会犯越少的错误。你练习得越多,你就会犯越少的错误。_2.我发现看英文电影是提高我英语的好方法。我发现看英文电影是提高我英语的好方法。The more practice you do,the fewer m
9、istakes you will make.I discovered that watching English movies is a good way to improve my English.【句子仿写句子仿写】3.我可以通过听英文歌曲来提升我的听力技能。我可以通过听英文歌曲来提升我的听力技能。_4.通过课前自学和课堂上坚持记笔记会使你的学通过课前自学和课堂上坚持记笔记会使你的学业更好。业更好。_ _ I could improve my listening skills by listening to English songs.Your study can become bette
10、r by learning by yourself before new class and keeping taking notes in class.I am Miss Wang.Your English is poor because you dont speak English.English,like any other language,is a tool of communication.The more you speak it,the better your English will become.So you should try to speak it as much a
11、s possible every day.And dont be shy or afraid of making a mistake.Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you.The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up!Always remember:Practice makes perfect!(针对(针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文)的优秀范文)I am Li Hua.I dont speak English be
12、cause my English is poor.I find it hard to speak English.I am so shy that I am always afraid of making a mistake.I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class.Im afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English.To tell the truth,I dont believe in myself.The less I spe
13、ak it,the worse my English becomes.When my English improves,I will enjoy speaking it.(2020原创原创)英语课上,同学们就英语课上,同学们就“Good learning habits”展开讨论,假如你是李华,请你展开讨论,假如你是李华,请你根据所给提示和要求,写一篇短文,介绍你良根据所给提示和要求,写一篇短文,介绍你良好的学习习惯。好的学习习惯。提示:提示:(1)What good learning habits do you have?(2)What do you get from your learnin
14、g habits?要求:要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出,不计入开头已给出,不计入总词数总词数)写作练兵写作练兵 As middle school students,its very important to develop our good learning habits._写作练兵写作练兵 Id like to share my learning habits with you.First,I get ready
15、 for new lessons before class every day.Second,I always listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class.Third,I always finish my homework on time after class.At the same time,I like to do more reading every day.I always ask my classmates and teachers for help when I have problems.And its ve
16、ry useful to make study plans._写作练兵Because of these good learning habits,I often get good grades and make progress.If you want to improve your grades,please try to develop your good learning habits.1.善良、淳朴、真诚。三婶买了老宅并把钥匙交给了我们,体现了她的善良;三婶一直保存着自己老宅家的钥匙,写出了她的淳朴。三婶对母亲一直真诚相待,体现了她的真诚。2文章详细描写了林海音对台湾本土作家钟理和的着
17、意栽培和慷慨相助,不仅能够表现传主的精神品质,而且有力证明了传主是台湾文学的一道阳光。3文章中引用了传主自己的一些语言,为作者的观点和看法提供有力的论据,增强了说服力,具有画龙点睛之效,能够升华主题,增强作品语言感染力。4抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽象”,是与“具体”相对而言,抽象的也就是概括的。所谓“阐发”就是化抽象、概括为具体。阐发常见的有两种形式:一是举出实例,一是分析因果。5含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含蓄,一是作者为了表达的需要或某种目的,故意不直接表达想表达的内容,而把它隐含在字里行间;一是运用了象征、双关等修辞格,采用婉曲的手法来表达自己的思想、观点、看法。对此类材料,不仅要理
18、解它字面的含意,而且要深入挖掘其所隐含的信息,即能用简洁明白的语言解说材料深层的内涵。6.对于那些认为现实走在小说家想象力前面的作家而言,困难在于如何把握生活的复杂结构和本质内容。7.对艺术家而言,日新月异的变革时代,既意味着巨大挑战,也能激发创作热情,促使他们投身沸腾的生活。8.博物馆是一个城市的历史见证。在博物馆里,处处是珍品,步步是文化,那些流逝着历史智慧的文物,让人惊叹不已。9.家风是一个家族代代沿袭能够体现家族成员精神风貌、道德品质、审美格调的家族文化。美好家风的形成是漫长的,不可能一气呵成。10.劳动可以促进学生形成基本的生活生产劳动技能、初步的职业意识、创新创业意识和动手实践的能力。劳动技育婴在增长青少年的知识见识上下功夫,引导青少年在做中学,学中做,在社会劳动实践中增长见识,丰富学识、求真理、悟道理,明事理