1、基础写作技巧指导基础写作技巧指导Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists,what subjects(主题）主题）will you introduce?locationpopulationareahistoryculturelivingconditionseducationeconomya placePossible subjects：1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（Location）be located inbe situated inlie in坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部stands at the foot of/o
2、n the top of 常用词语常用词语 1.1.日本在中国的东方。日本在中国的东方。2.2.这房子朝南。这房子朝南。3.3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。新教学坐落在学校的中央。翻译翻译Japan is/lies to the east of China.The house faces(to)the south.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.4.4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。的国家之一。China,located/lying in the east of Asia
3、,is one of largest countries in the world.2.介绍人口（介绍人口（Population）:has a population of,（a city）with a population of北京是中国的首都，是一个有北京是中国的首都，是一个有12001200多万人多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,the capital of China,is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers an area ofsq
4、uare kilometers（a city）with an area ofsquare kilometers城镇城镇 面积面积 100100多平方公里多平方公里Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers4.介绍历史（介绍历史（History）:has a long history(of years)with a long history(of years)历史悠久历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。It is a modern city with a long history.5.介绍交通
5、（介绍交通（Transportation）take a bus,a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到坐汽车、火车、飞机到交通便利交通便利has convenient transportation（a city）with convenient transportation both on land and water经济迅速发展经济迅速发展economy has been developing rapidly多次进入全国经济十强城市多次进入全国经济十强城市has been listed among the top ten
6、strongest cities in economy several times6、介绍经济（、介绍经济（economy）7.7.名胜古迹名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹：有很多名胜古迹：places of interest/historical spots承德是全国承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。个风景名胜之一。Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spot
7、s in China.一些其它表达方式：一些其它表达方式：发生了很大变化发生了很大变化great changes have taken place特色鲜明的地方文化特色鲜明的地方文化distinct local culture海岸线总长海岸线总长公里公里Its coastline has a total length of kilometers.基础写作-情景说明西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。人口人口约约10万万面积面积约约126平方公里平方公里
8、地理概括地理概括 坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校教育状况教育状况解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；上学；生活状况生活状况 人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等舞、参加体育活动等写作要求：写作要求：1.1.短文标题自拟短文标题自拟2 2必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；容；3 3将个句子组织成连贯的短文将个
9、句子组织成连贯的短文title if necessary(标题）标题）tense and voice（时态和语态）（时态和语态）person（人称）（人称）style（文章题材）（文章题材）the important points（要点要全）（要点要全）1.How to analyze the directions(审题审题)?Great Changes in Xishan Town一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时第三人称第三人称应用文应用文List the important points out:解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化
10、。西山镇的人口约西山镇的人口约1010万；万；Since liberation great changes have taken place in peoples lifeXishan town has a population of aboutThe population of Xishan town is about 100,000.面积约面积约126126平方公里平方公里 It covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers.The size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粤北一座山脚下，
11、面临一条大河坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河 Xishan town is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river.Xishan town is located/stands at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校 Many factories,shops,hospit
12、als and schools have been built/set up.解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有现在有1010所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等加体育活动等Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy
13、 families.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文 1.Xishan town is a small town,_ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big ri
14、ver.whichLets try!2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town,_ an area of about 126 square kilometers,has a population of.Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000.andcoveringwith a population of多种表达法灵活表达多种表达法灵活
15、表达3.Before liberation,people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great changes have taken place_ many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built.butand now4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can
16、go to school.5.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.butLets share!One possible version:1.Xishan town is a small town,which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.It has a population of about 100,000 and cove
17、rs an area of about 126 square kilometers.Before liberation,people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built.The school education has also improved,for example,before liberation there was only one sc
18、hool for children from wealthy families,but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica,is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica,is covered with cold thick ice
19、 and deep snow all year round.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the)year round,the coldest continent in the world,*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips 夏天几乎不下雨，夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来但一下起来就很大。就很大。It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.2.运用非谓语动词和运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港毗邻香港My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Province of China.but whenever it does,neighboring Hong Kong,使用状语从句优化句子表达使用状语从句优化句子表达
