1、执教教师-XXX【学习目标】学习建议信的写法，掌握建议信的常用短语和句型，正确撰写建议信。【学习重点】掌握建议信的常用短语和句型。【学习难点】组织恰当的语言，正确撰写建议信。建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给
2、予忠告。提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述文体概述【学习内容】假如你收到一封叫假如你收到一封叫 Flower Flower 的网友写来的一封信，她的网友写来的一封信，她向你询问如何交友，请给她回一封信，并提出建议。向你询问如何交友，请给她回一封信，并提出建议。提示：提示：1.1.交朋友首先要对别人友善；交朋友首先要对别人友善；2.2.要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别人胜过自己；人胜过自己；3.3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量；与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量；4.4.不要相信危急时刻背弃
3、朋友的人，因为不要相信危急时刻背弃朋友的人，因为“患难患难见真情见真情”。要求：要求：1.1.词数：词数：100100左右；左右；2.2.表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；3.3.针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。一、美文欣赏一、美文欣赏 Im glad to receive your e-mail.You ask me something about how to make friends.Everyone needs friends,so how to make friends is very important.I would like to
4、put forward the following suggestions.First of all,you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.Secondly,if I were you,I would look after others more than myself.In my opinion,it will be better to make the stranger feel easy.If you have different opinions,you can discuss wi
5、th others.I dont think it necessary to quarrel with them.Finally,dont trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble,because a friend in need is a friend indeed.I trust you will take good consideration of my suggestion.I hope everything goes on well with you,and youll make a lot of good fr
6、iends.Yours truly,SimonDear Flower,1.给某人提建议给某人提建议 _ 2.如下如下 _ 3.在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4.利用利用 _ 5.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb.for advicegive sb.some advice(on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of 二、常用语块二、常用语块6.制订计划制订计划 _7.认为认为有用有用 _8.参加参加 _9.听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10.把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take sth.into
7、account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice11.得到改善得到改善 _12.有所好转有所好转 _13.依我看来依我看来 _14.我已收到你的来信，得知你我已收到你的来信，得知你 _15.我建议我建议 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were yo
8、u,I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you1.你就你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。性的建议。2.我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。将会很有帮助的。1.You have asked me fo
9、r my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2.I feel that it would be beneficial if三、常用句式三、常用句式3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到如能看到我会非常开心的。我会非常开心的。3.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5.I would be more than happy
10、 to see4.I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.Dear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions.To begin
11、 with,youd better_ Besides,If I were you,I would _ Moreover,I would like to suggest that _ I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good work.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 四、写作模板四、写作
12、模板Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.Here are few suggestions.First,this is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspap
13、er and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.asking on a it newspapers 五、习作修改五、习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)Beside,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier.You can also make more Chinese friends.He will tell you a
14、 lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaBesides easily They and 1.ask asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。主动关系。2.to onadvice后常搭配介词后常搭配介词on。3.在在few前加前加a根据句意，此处为提一些建议，根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用表示肯定意义，用a few。4.this it考查句型考查句型it is
15、+adj.+to do sth.意意为为“做做是是的的”。5.newspaper newspapers因为因为newspaper为可数名词，而且与前后的为可数名词，而且与前后的books,magazines属于并列关系，故用复数形式。属于并列关系，故用复数形式。6.Beside Besides此处表示补充说明关系此处表示补充说明关系“此外此外/而且而且”，beside意为意为“在在旁边旁边”。7.easier easily修饰谓语动词用副词形式。修饰谓语动词用副词形式。8.He They根据前一句话中的根据前一句话中的more Chinese friends可知用可知用They。9.or an
16、d此处两个动作为此处两个动作为“顺承顺承”关系，关系，而非而非“选择选择”关系。关系。10.去掉去掉next time前的前的the相对于现在的相对于现在的“下下一一”，next前不用前不用the。假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点写一封建议信，要点如下：如下：1.鼓励鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远。坚定求学
17、信念，志存高远。2.就就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。六、实战演练六、实战演练Dear Jenny,I am so glad to have a talk with you.I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before.People often miss their parents t
18、he first time they leave home.Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment.I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.Try to make friends on your school campus,and share ideas with your
19、classmates who are physically closest to you now.Maybe you will still miss your parents,but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life.Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school.You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
