1、今天我们针对书面表达进行专项训练。书面表达就是要求同学们针对题目的要求用英语写作文，我们在日常作文中主要出现的错误有：1.句子结构错误。eg.1，I very like sports.I like sports very much.我很喜欢运动。2，He is want to be a doctor.He wants to be a doctor.他想要成为一名医生。2.动词时态、语态使用不当。eg.1，I go to the hospital last Sunday.I went to the hospital last Sunday.2，I chose to give a speech a
2、t the sports meeting.I was chosen to give a speech at the sports meeting.3.词汇运用错误。名词、动词、形容词、副词/连词等，也包含短语、不定式使用不当。eg.1 work hard is very important.Working hard is very important.2，His parents had to work very hardly when they were young.His parents had to work very hard when they were young.Discuss:小
3、组讨论一下，平时自己在作文过程中常出现的错误。怎样减少出错呢？首先让我们看一下常用的句子结构。句子成分可分为主语,谓语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语。但我们常用的简单句的结构有：1,主语+谓语(不及物动词)eg,He often swims in a river.2,主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语 eg,People enjoy music.3,主语+系动词+表语 eg,You are lovely.I feel glad.4,主+谓+间宾(指人)+直宾（指物）/(双宾语结构)V+Sb.+Sth.(=V+sth.+to sb.)或(=V+sth.for sb.)eg：give sb.sth.=
4、give sth.to sb.,buy sb.sth.=buy sth.for sb.,He gives me a pen.=He gives a pen to me.Mother buys her a nice skirt.=Mother buys a nice skirt for her.5,主+谓+宾+宾补(V+sb to do sth,/V+sb do sth,V+sb doing,V+sb+adj)Eg：My mother asks me to do my homework.妈妈叫我做作业She saw him stand there.I heard you speaking to
5、Tony.The teacher kept him happy.I find it interesting to learn English.6.there be+主语（人、物）+地点+时间 Eg：There is some water on the table now.所以我们下笔时要分清句中的主语、谓语、宾语、状语、表语等，注意他们的位置。接下来让我们讨论一下怎样减少动词时态或语态错误。我们看看下面这篇书面表达：现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。80100字提示词：无论哪里wherever
6、,网上购物Internet shopping,另外Besides 劣势disadvantage,流行popular我们这样思考：1.方便的convenient,可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。任何时候at any time 2.有很多的商品货物 goods信息information,可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜cheap。任何事物都有两方面“Every coin has two sides.”3.买货容易退货退还give back困难 difficult,实物material object和图片有差距be different from,4还有whats more,网络支付不安全Its no
7、t safe to pay through the Internet.下面我们根据刚才所学习内容，以网购的利与弊为题看一篇英语作文：范文：Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world.Its a new way of shopping.It has lots of advantages.The most important is convenient.You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day.It is
8、often easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shops.Besides,its cheaper.But“Every coin has two sides.”So is Internet shopping.You cant see the material objects or check their quality(质量）.Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods.So when we get t
9、he goods and dont like them,they sometimes are not easy to give back.Whats more,Its not safe to pay through the Internet.总结关键字：化零为整当堂训练当堂训练10我们就以下面这个题目为例，大家热热身：关于“网络交友”人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇80100字关于学生网上交友的英语短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。我们可以这样构思：赞成的理由;反对的理由;你的看法。我们可以分解成以下句子我们可以分解成以下句子：1，现在许多学生喜欢网上聊天。Chat
10、onlineNow lots of students like chatting online.2，他们认为聊天可以自由地freely表达自己的思想和意见。express ones feeling and opinionThey think chatting can freely express their feelings and opinions.3、网上聊天能交到许多的朋友。They can make many friends(by chatting)online.1广交朋友 2 可自由表达思想 3有利于外语学习 1浪费时间2影响学习 3可能上当受骗 4、网上聊天也能帮助我们学习英语。h
11、elp us with English Chatting online can also help us with English.5、然而，其他人认为网上聊天浪费时间。be a waste of time However,others think chatting online is a waste of time.6、聊天对学习有害。Be bad for Chatting is bad for study.7、网上交友容易上当受骗。be tricked=get cheated，When we make friends online,we may easily get cheated.8、我
12、认为我们应该在学习上花费更多的时间。spend on study I think we should spend more time on study.9、我们要学习放在其他事情的前面。Place/put before We should put study before other things.10、至于友谊，我们应该与同班同学交友。As for friendship,we should make friends with our classmates 让我们组成一篇作文：让我们组成一篇作文：Now lots of students like chatting online.They th
13、ink chatting can freely express their feelings and opinions and make many friends online.Chatting on line can also help us with English.However,others think chatting online is a waste of time.Chatting is bad for study.When we make friends online,we may easily get cheated.I think we should spend more
14、 time on study.We should put study before other things.As for friendship,we should make friends with our classmates.以“life in the future”为题，写一篇作文。提示：1.未来的生活会怎么样呢？我有一些想法。2.在未来，人们将会穿一种新型的衣服。这种衣服很轻并且冬暖夏凉（warm in winter and cool in summer）。3.将不会再有学校。每个人都将在家学习，我们可以通过网络和电话与老师交谈。将没有作业可做。4.我们将会有一种新的房子。在房子里，将会有许多机器人，他们也将会做许多繁重的工作。人们将会有长假期并且只做一些简单的工作5.这些是我的观点，你呢？
