1、 Im Kitty.Im Kitty.Hello,everyone!Hello,everyone!Nice to meet you!Nice to meet you!Where is Kitty?Where is Kitty?_the boxin_the boxon_the boxnext to_the boxabove_the bedunderWhats in the bedroom?There is.Whats+介词短语介词短语?There is/are.My BedroomMy Bedroom要求：要求：仔细观察图片，以仔细观察图片，以“My BedroomMy Bedroom”为题目写
2、为题目写一篇短文，用一篇短文，用 There be There be 句型描述图片中的物品，句型描述图片中的物品，至少写出至少写出5 5句话。句话。My Bedroom Showing TimeShowing Time My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed in This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in th
3、e bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the bedroom.There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom ver
4、y much.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed in This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the bedroom.There is a chair ne
5、xt to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed in There is a bed in t
6、he bedroom.There is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.bedroom.There is a chair next to the There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There table.There is a TV on the table.There are t
7、wo pictures above the TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:语言啰嗦语言啰嗦There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and
8、 a table in the bedroom.There There is is a chair next to the table.a chair next to the table.There isThere is a TV a TV on the table.on the table.There areThere are two pictures two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.Your idea:句式单一句式单一My Bedro
9、om This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is is a chair next to the table.a chair next to the table.There isThere is a TV a TV on the table.on the table.There areThere are two pictures two pic
10、tures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV
11、is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There are two pictures on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.Your idea:Whats next to the table?There is a chair.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a This
12、is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.sofa and a table in the bedroom.WhatWhats s next to the table?There is a chair.There next to the table?There is a chair.There is a TV on the table.There are two is a TV on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my pictures
13、above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Your idea:1.We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)BeginningBodyEndingThe structure of a good passage(好文章的结构好文章的结构)My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom
14、.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.the bedroom.WhatWhats next to the table?s next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its s on the table.Can you see the pictures?on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes
15、,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.the bedroom.WhatWhats next to the table?s next to
16、the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its s on the table.Can you see the pictures?on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:Beginning Body Ending
17、BeginningBodyEnding 总领全文总领全文引出话题引出话题分层描述分层描述诠释主题诠释主题总结全文总结全文深化主题深化主题What function does each part have?(文章各段的作用）文章各段的作用）2.We can write a better beginning.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)1.We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.My Bedroom This is my bedroo
18、m.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence 主题句法主题句法Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom Do you
19、want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question 提问式提问式Two common kinds of beginning1、Topic Sentence 主题句法主题句法3.We can write a better ending.How can we make the passage better and better?(我们如何能使文章更好我们如何能使文章更好?)1.We can divide(分成分成)the passage into
20、 three parts.2.We can write a better beginning.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence-总结主题
21、总结主题Two common kinds of ending2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom .Do you like my bedroom?Can you introduce yours to me?Two common kinds of endingTwo common kinds of ending 1、Topic Sentence-总结主题总结主题2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!Ther
22、e is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Do you like my bedroom?Can you introduce yours to me?My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is This is my bedroom.There is a bed in t
23、he bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a table in the bedroom.also a table in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the table.There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on the table.There is a TV on the table.There ar
24、e two pictures above There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV
25、?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Do you like my bedroom?Can you introduce yours to me?Which is better?Why?Whats your idea about the best passage?Have a discussion in groups of four(四人一小组进行讨论）四人一小组进行讨论）The standards of the best passage 1.Correct Expression 语言准确语言准确
26、2.Right Mind Logic 逻辑合理逻辑合理3.Smooth Flow 条理清晰条理清晰4.Diverse Sentence Patterns 句式多样句式多样5.Complete Structure 结构完整结构完整 Youre greatYoure great！CHANTGood better bestNever let it restTill good is betterAnd better is bestHomework要求：要求：1 1、仔细观察图片，以、仔细观察图片，以“My BedroomMy Bedroom”为题目，为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。逻辑、结构完整的短文。2 2、字数不得少于、字数不得少于5050词。词。Ms.ZhaosQQ:2503610354
