1、【 精品教育资源文库 】 Unit 2 Healthy eating 短文改错中的 “ 不一致 ” 错误纠错技巧 方法指导 在短文改错中 ,“ 不一致 ” 的错误主要包括以下几种 : 1)主谓不一致 :采用 “ 双盯策略 ”, 盯着主语看谓语 ,盯着谓语看主语 ,然后根据语境决定修改主语还是谓语。 2)时态不一致 :根据上下文或时间状语确定时态的选择。 3)语态不一致 :根据谓语动词的特点和前后句式的使用特点确定语态的选择。 4)名词的单复数不一致 :根据上下文和名词本身的特点确定名词的单复数形式。 5)代词指代不一致 :根据上下文或主语的特点确定代词的使用 。 6)搭配不一致 :根据固定搭
2、配或并列结构等确定。 典例引领 (2016 四川 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除 :把多余的词用斜线 (划掉。 修改 :在错的词下画一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意 :1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ; 2.只允许修改 10 处 ,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。 It is Mothers D ay today. Though its a western festival
3、, its popular in China now. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers i
4、n her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Da y!” Mom was grateful and moving. 【 精品教育资源文库 】 方法运用 答案 It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China
5、 now. Mom has a full-time job, she has to do most of the . She is a great mother. Both Dad I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting
6、 room and I cooked inthe kitchen. The dishes /what I cooked were Moms . At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and . 解析 考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系 ,并非因果关系 ,故用 but。句意 :妈妈有一份全职工作 ,但是她还得承担大部分家务活儿。 考查名词。 housework 家务 ,为不可数名词。 考查并列连词。 both.and.为固定搭配 ,意为 “? 和 ? 都 ?” 。 考查动词时态。根据上下文以及 in t
7、he morning 可知本句是在叙述过去的事情 ,故用一般过去时。 考查固定搭配。句意 :爸爸打扫完房子 ,然后就去购物了。 go shopping 去购物。 考查物主代词。根据句中的 he 可知此处为 his。 考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房 ,故在 kitchen 前加定冠词 the。 考查定语从句。先行词为 the dishes,且定语从句中 cooked 后缺少宾语 ,故用关系代词 that/which 引导定语从句 ,因其在从句中作宾语 ,故也可以省略关系代词。 考查名词。 favorite 最喜欢的事物。 考查形容词。此处作表语 ,主语为 Mom,故用 moved(感动的 )。 moving 感人的 ;动人的。-温馨提示： - 本文档仅为 【 全套资料之一 】 ，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！ 【 精品教育资源文库 】 请点此到 下载本文全套资料
