1、Jane Gooddall and Lin Qiaozi are great women,because they devoted themselves _ our society.There are also many unsung great people.They _ _(usual)do good things yet dont expect to receive praise for _ (they)actions.Unsung great people are everywhere,for example,teachers.We can call them lovely peopl
2、e.tousuallytheirWritingWriting-to to introduceintroduce a a placeplaceMy HometownMy Hometown4141人人20-2220-22分分1111人人2323分分黄雅丽、劳晓嘉、陈黄雅丽、劳晓嘉、陈宁、薛媛媛、宁婷宁、薛媛媛、宁婷 2424分分16073636人人20-2220-22分分刘旭利、叶惠丹、苏刘旭利、叶惠丹、苏燕兰、卢嫒琼燕兰、卢嫒琼2323分分张文婷、陈楚楚、张文婷、陈楚楚、2424分分1608 Share Enjoy Learn the best,and to be the best you ca
3、n be.学最好的别人做最好的自己学最好的别人做最好的自己 。A good composition should include:1.clean sheet(卷面整洁卷面整洁);good handwriting;3 or 4 plete content(内容完整内容完整);some good patterns and sentences instead of just simple ones.3.emotion 感情感情(“sothat”;“with”结构结构;同位语；倒同位语；倒装句装句;复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾从从)Whos the most lovely
4、and our favorite teacher in our class?Show our love and respect to our favourite teacher,Mr Li!favouritefavouriterespectable respectable 可敬的可敬的 某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征征文文“我最喜欢、最敬重的老师我最喜欢、最敬重的老师”。Writing How to describe a person?What aspects（方面）（方面）should be included?Discussion(2mins)What aspec
5、ts（方面）（方面）should be included?人物介绍人物介绍:1.概况概况:character(性格）性格）,evaluation评价评价主题段主题段-开头段开头段2.拓展段拓展段-中间段中间段3.总结段总结段-结尾段结尾段middle-ageda friendly facesincere,teaching methods:friendly,humourous,helpful;Appearance:interesting,Age:teaching career:20 years;a model teacherQualities:over livelysome other aspe
6、cts(方面方面)Useful Expressions P16:Age Born in 1996,he is now a twenty-year-old student,studying in a university.He is a middle-aged man.Useful Expressions P16:AppearanceShe is a lovely girl,with a round face,big eyes,white teeth He is a good-looking man,with a thick moustache（胡子）（胡子）.he is a friendly
7、person,with two big eyes.Useful Expressions P16:Some big events in ones lifeHe devoted his lifetime to He received a prize inUseful Expressions P16:Evaluation He is awarded as(被评为)He is one of the most important/outstanding persons 某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征文某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征文“我最喜欢、最敬重的老师我最喜欢、最敬重的老师”。内容要求内容要求 1.
8、1.对该老师的简单介绍；对该老师的简单介绍；2.2.喜欢该老师的理由；喜欢该老师的理由；3.3.从该人物身上得到的启示。从该人物身上得到的启示。内容要求：内容要求：征文应包含以上内容，可适征文应包含以上内容，可适当拓展；词数当拓展；词数100-120100-120(evaluation评价评价)(15 mins)middle-ageda friendly facefriendly,sincere,humourous,helpful;Teaching career:over20 years;a model teacherteaching methods:interesting,livelysom
9、e other aspects(方面方面)Enjoy Learn the best,and to be the best you can be.学最好的别人做学最好的别人做最好的自己最好的自己 。A good composition should include:1.clean sheet(卷面整洁卷面整洁);good handwriting;3 or 4 plete content(内容完整内容完整);some good patterns and sentences instead of just simple ones.3.emotion 感情感情(“sothat”;“with”结构结构;
10、同位语；倒同位语；倒装句装句;复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾从从)Sample Enjoy Learn the best,and to be the best you can be.学最好的别人做最好的自己学最好的别人做最好的自己 。Mr Li,my favourite teacher,is a middle-aged man with a friendly face.One of the most important reason why I like him is that he is very sincere and friendly.When he talks
11、 to others,he always has a smile on his face.He has taught maths for more than twenty years,during which he has been awarded the title of a model teacher for many times.I believe Mr Li is a natural teacher because he has a lot of good methods on teaching.So lively,interesting,and funny are his lesso
12、ns that we never feel bored.巧用巧用“with”结构、同位语结构，使结构、同位语结构，使文章简洁、通顺文章简洁、通顺倒装句倒装句非限制性定从非限制性定从 用复合句、倒装句，润色文章，使用复合句、倒装句，润色文章，使文章充满活力文章充满活力To improve our grades,he usually gives us some advice about how to learn maths well.When we ask him questions,he must spare no effort to make us understand,patiently a
13、nd carefully.Whats more,hes always ready to help every student with their study and life.Im lucky enough to have such a good teacher present to my life.Mr Li has a great influence on me and Im thankful for what he has done for us very much.巧用过渡词，增强语义连贯性巧用过渡词，增强语义连贯性:表并列：表并列：表转折：表转折：表因果：表因果：表递进：表递进：a
14、nd,or,either.or.,not only.but alsobut,yet,howevertherefore,so,as a result,because besides,whats more,in addition Lucky enough,thankful 表达了对表达了对Mr.Li 的爱慕、敬仰之情的爱慕、敬仰之情(Emotion)Mr Li,my favourite teacher,is a middle-aged man with a friendly face.One of the most important reason why I like him is that h
15、e is very sincere and friendly.When he talks to others,he always has a smile on his face.He has taught maths for more than twenty years,during which he has been awarded the title of a model teacher for many times.I believe Mr Li is a natural teacher because he has a lot of good methods on teaching.S
16、o lively,interesting,and funny are his lessons that we never feel bored.倒装句倒装句非限制性定从非限制性定从 To improve our grades,he usually gives us some advice about how to learn maths well.When we ask him questions,he must spare no effort to make us understand,patiently and carefully.Whats more,hes always ready t
17、o help every student with their study and life.Im lucky enough to have such a good teacher present to my life.Mr Li has a great influence on me and Im thankful for what he has done for us very much.Summary（Tips）To write a good passage,weshould use some good patterns and sentences instead of simple o
18、ne,such as Appositive（同位（同位语）语）,Noun Clause(名从名从)and Attributive Clause(定从定从).Learn the best,and to be the best you can be.学最好的别人做最好的自学最好的别人做最好的自己己 。Good at accumulation.Store a large number of good expressions in English and you can express your ideas freely.善于积累，让头脑支撑善于积累，让头脑支撑起自己的思想起自己的思想 Group w
19、ork:Group work:Rewrite the passage(4 students in a group.Discuss and rewrite the passage according to what we have learnt just now.)Group work:Rewrite the passage(Four students in a group.Discuss and rewrite the passage according to what we have learnt just now.)1.美育包括美术教育和审美教育,文化是美育的底色和灵魂,不能忽视文化精神的
20、培养。2.欣赏中国绘画,应该了解其中计白当黑、浓淡生趣、意境天成等艺术手法和精神追求。3.美育在中国近代历史上是一个很重要的概念,一直承载了爱国救亡、除弊振新的重任。4.当下美育应重传统轻西方,融汇西方与民族、古典与现代的文化,形成好的审美教育体系。5.要推动人工智能规模化应用,就必须推动人工智能与各行业融合创新,在制造、农业、物流、金融等重点行业和领域开展人工智能应用。6.美国各执行机构每年与白宫主管预算科技政策办公室沟通,说明优先推动人工智能发展情况,按时列明计划,可期获得该项目预算优先权。7用金银珠玉来装点堂皇的宫殿庙宇，这种行为使得大量珍贵的人力物力降低为符号的陪衬，只能揭示意义的贫瘠和精神的无力。8让日常的景色转换成大师的杰作，使普通的词语凝结成千古不朽的诗句，这些审美和艺术创造，体现着人的精神世界的富足。9“富”的美应该是一种由内而外的富贵气，它是一种自然流露的美，它得自个人长期的、自觉的涵养，也得自社会的普遍氛围，与金钱没有必然关系。
