1、Writing Task 1Table Pre-Writing 1.审题：审题：研究对象研究对象 数据类型数据类型(数字数字/百分比百分比)时间时间 地点地点Pre-Writing 1.审题：审题：The table below gives figures for student applications and acceptances for UK university courses in the fields of tourism,transport and travel.Pre-writing 2.分析表格图中的文字信息分析表格图中的文字信息横向横向 (时间、性别、休闲活动种类、交通方
2、式时间、性别、休闲活动种类、交通方式.)纵向（时间、国家、城市、家用电器的种类纵向（时间、国家、城市、家用电器的种类.）（注意：注意：最后一行和最后一列；标题下方的单位）Pre-writing 3.从左至右或从上往下比较数据，从左至右或从上往下比较数据，找出区别、变化或趋势找出区别、变化或趋势 4.选取反映分类特征的典型数据选取反映分类特征的典型数据 （总数，极值，突变值）Student statistics for university courses in tourism,transport and travel,2000-2002Applications Acceptance yearm
3、enwomen menwomen%of total20003,40090055015015.5%20013,20080060020020%20022,75075058017021.4%Pre-writing 5.明确写作顺序（主体段）明确写作顺序（主体段）Compare data show changes over times Paraphrase the rubric The table concerns university courses 1 in the field of/related to tourism,transport and travel in the UK.It show
4、s 2 decreases/changes/increases in the 3 numbers/proportion/percentage of 4 applicants/male and female students applying for and being accepted on such courses 5 between/from 2000 and 2002.Structure Paragraph 1:Introduce information Paragraph 2:Describe figures and trends related to applications Par
5、agraph 3:Describe figures and trends related to acceptance Paragraph 4:Overview:summarize information Overview Sentences using a linking word offer a comparison or contrast no data summarize the main trends or the most important featureOverview Sentences a.总体来说，西部和北部的城市温度波动比东部和南部的城市要大。b.总体来说，西部和北部的城
6、市温度起伏最大。Overview Sentences a:In general,the West and North cities have much higher fluctuations in temperature than East and South cities.b:Overall,the largest fluctuation in average temperatures across seasons is indicated in the West city and the North City.Practice:The table below gives informati
7、on about the use of different modes of transport in Shanghai in 1996,and one possible projection(high motorisation scenario)for their use in 2020.Percentage of passenger kilometres by different modes of transport in ShanghaiMode of Transport19962020(projection)walking7%3%bicycle27%3%scooter12%7%bus3
8、9%22%train-13%car15%52%Train of thought P1:Paraphrase the rubric P2:Describe the data in 1996(排序从大到小)P3:Describe the data in 2020(趋势变化)P4:a summary Sample:The table predicts changes in the types of transport used in Shanghai between 1996 and 2020.Sample:The figures show that in 1996 the most popular
9、 form of transport was public bus,accounting for 39%of passenger kilometers.This was followed by bicycles with 27%whereas cars and scooters were used less,representing only 15%and 12%of passenger travel respectively,predictably,walking made up the smallest percentages.Sample:It is expected that in 2
10、020 the use of cars will increase dramatically and account for over half of all distance travelled(52%).In addition,trains will probably account for 13%of passenger kilometers,while the use of all other means of transport will decrease.Bus journeys,for example,will only represent 22%of distances tra
11、velled,while bicycle trips will drop to as little as 3%,similar to the figure for walking.Sample:Overall,the table predicts a massive increase in the use of cars by 2020,at the expense of other forms of transport.Table(over 20 figures)nThe table below shows motor vehicle offences in England and Wale
12、s between 1994 and 2004.1 12 23 34 46 65 5Introduction(P1)nThe table presents an overall view of various motor vehicle offences in England and Wales from 1994 to 2004.第一大值(P2)nIn 1994,licence,insurance and record keeping offences were the most common type of offences and rose to 957 thousand in 2004
13、,after a ten-year period of fluctuations.第二大值(P2)nSpeed limit offences initially ranked second in 1994 but became the main type of offences by 2004,recording a ten-year high at 2,076 thousand,more than three times the figure ten years earlier.第三大值(P2)nNeglect of traffic signs and directions came thi
14、rd,averaging at around 250 thousand per year.第四大值(P2)nDangerous,careless or drunken driving was the fourth main type of offences,dropping in much of the period 1994 to 2004 but finally hitting an all-time high at 231 thousand.最小值(P3)nAnother two types of offences,accident offences and unauthorised t
15、aking(or theft)of motor vehicle,were the least common,also declining gradually.Conclusion(P4)nTo summarise,speed limit offences and licence offences were two main types of motor vehicle offences in England and Wales during the period 1994 to 2004 and speed limit offences deserved particular attention because it surged exponentially.
