1、Unit 4 Dont eat in class. the floating bottle(漂流瓶漂流瓶) This letter talks about_. rules Dear there, Nice to meet you. I am Amy from the US. There are many rules in my life. Some of them are good. Every morning, I must get up at six oclock and make my bed before breakfast. Then, at school, I have more
2、rules. I must arrive on time for class and I must listen to the teachers carefully in class. All these tules are okay because they are good for me. But there are some rules I dont like. I am really tired at school. But after school, I cant relax either. I cant talk with friends in Wechat or watch TV
3、 because I must finish my homework before 10 oclock. I know rules are important. But I feel I dont have much time to have fun. What about you? Do you have many rules? Amy Things she has to/ must do Things she cant do _ arrive on time for class listen to the teachers carefully _ _ _ _ _ _ _ get up at
4、 6 oclock. make her bed. finish her homework before10. relax after school. talk with friends in wechat . _ at school at home watch TV. I have to clean my room. I cant go to bed late. I must arrive on time. I cant eat in class. at school at home Lets brainstorm(头脑风暴头脑风暴) 漂流瓶征文活动开始啦漂流瓶征文活动开始啦! 你是否看到你是
5、否看到Amy的漂流瓶产生了共鸣？的漂流瓶产生了共鸣？ 你的生活中是否也有许多规矩呢？你的生活中是否也有许多规矩呢？ 那么你来试着给那么你来试着给Amy写一封回信，也谈一谈你生写一封回信，也谈一谈你生 活中的许多规矩吧活中的许多规矩吧! 如果你的回信得分高，有机会获得大奖哦！如果你的回信得分高，有机会获得大奖哦！ 锦囊锦囊 No.1 锦囊锦囊 No.2 锦囊锦囊 No.3 锦囊锦囊 No.4 这里有四个参赛锦囊，或许能帮助你的写作拿高分哦！这里有四个参赛锦囊，或许能帮助你的写作拿高分哦！ 请任意挑选一个锦囊，只要完成相应的任务，就能获得请任意挑选一个锦囊，只要完成相应的任务，就能获得 锦囊啦！锦
6、囊啦！ Try to use correct grammar. ( 要使用正确的语法哦要使用正确的语法哦） 锦囊锦囊NO.1 “I have to on time for class and I must listen to the teachers carefully in class. All these rules is okay.” arrive/be on time are Lets find out mistakes! (大家来找茬！大家来找茬！) Amys letter is written in the order of _ (Amy的信是以什么逻辑顺序来写的？的信是以什么逻辑
7、顺序来写的？) time 锦囊锦囊NO.2 “Every morning, I must get up at six oclock and make my bed before breakfast. Then, at school, I have more rules. I have to arrive on time for class and I must listen to the teachers carefully in class After school, I cant relax either” Try to write in logical order. (文章要有一定逻辑顺
8、序哦文章要有一定逻辑顺序哦） Try to use proper linking words. (记得使用恰当的连接词哦记得使用恰当的连接词哦) 锦囊锦囊NO.3 “I cant talk with my friends in Wechat after school. I cant watch TV after school. I must do my homework after school.” or because or because “I cant talk with friends in Wechat _watch TV_I must do my homework after sc
9、hool.” dont like important , tired, dont like tired Try to add your own opinions. (最好在文章中加入你自己的看法哦最好在文章中加入你自己的看法哦) 锦囊锦囊 NO.4 “But there are some rules I _. I am really _ at school. But after school, I cant relax either! I know rules are_. But I feel I dont have much time to have fun” important Dear
10、XXX， There are many rules in my life too. _ _ _ _ _ XXX Try to add your own opinions. (最好在文章中加入你自己的看法哦最好在文章中加入你自己的看法哦) Try to use proper linking words. (记得使用恰当的连接词哦记得使用恰当的连接词哦) Try to write in logical order. (文章要有一定逻辑顺序哦文章要有一定逻辑顺序哦） Try to use correct grammar. ( 要用正确的语法哦要用正确的语法哦） logical order (逻辑结构逻辑结构) correct grammar(语法语法) proper linking words(连接词连接词) personal opinions(观点观点) best( ) not bad( ) bad ( ) 等级评定等级评定：A: ( 10) B: ( 6) C: ( 6) Lets share and assess (批改批改)
