1、basketball football run skate swim basketball football run skate swim Enjoy Writing Enjoy Writing Enjoy Writing Correct your passages in pairs, please! Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He likes practising football. He likes basketball best. He often runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt lik
2、e swimming. This is Tonys sports life. Enjoy Writing 语言准确语言准确 Choose the best title, please! A. Tonys School Life B. Tonys Favourite Sports C. Tonys Sports Life Enjoy Writing Tonys Sports Life title Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He likes practising football. He likes basketball best. He o
3、ften runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt like swimming. This is Tonys sports life. Enjoy Writing main idea Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He likes practising football. He likes basketball best. He often runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt like swimming. This is Tony
4、s sports life. Enjoy Writing 结构不合理结构不合理 Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. Tony likes practising football. He likes basketball best. He often runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt like swimming. This is Tonys sports life. Enjoy Writing 3-5 paragraphs 条条 理理 清清 晰晰 语言准确语言准确 结构合
5、理结构合理 围绕中心围绕中心 a good passage Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. Tony likes practising football. He likes basketball best. He often runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt like swimming. This is Tonys sports life. Tonys Sports Life Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He l
6、ikes practising football. He likes basketball best. He often runs and skates on weekends. He doesnt like swimming. This is Tonys sports life. Enjoy Writing 内容不够充实内容不够充实 Why does Tony like practising football? Enjoy Writing Maybe he wants to be taller and stronger. He wants to keep fit. Lets think ab
7、out the reasons. Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. Tony likes practising football. He wants to join the school football team next term. He likes basketball best. Yao Ming is his hero. He often runs and skates on weekends. Running and skating make him stronger and taller. He
8、doesnt like swimming. Its too hard for him. This is Tonys sports life. 内容充实内容充实 a better passage Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. Tony likes practising football. He wants to join the school football team next term. He likes basketball best. Yao Ming is his hero. He often ru
9、ns and skates on weekends. Running and skating make him stronger and taller. He doesnt like swimming. Its too hard for him. This is Tonys sports life. Because Because Because Because Enjoy Writing Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. Tony likes practising football because he wa
10、nts to join the school football team next term. He likes basketball best because Yao Ming is his hero. He often runs and skates on weekends. Because running and skating make him stronger and taller. He doesnt like swimming because its too hard for him. This is Tonys sports life. 句式单一句式单一 Enjoy Writi
11、ng because because Because because conjunction words because so He thinks that and also too Enjoy Writing but conjunction words because Tony likes practising football because he wants to join the school football team next term. so Tony wants to join the school football team next term so he likes pra
12、ctising football. Enjoy Writing conjunction words because He likes basketball best because Yao Ming is his hero. so Yao Ming is his hero so he likes basketball best. conjunction words and He often runs and skates on weekends . also He often runs. He also skates on weekends . Enjoy Writing He often r
13、uns. Also, he skates on weekends. He often runs. He skates on weekends, too. too Enjoy Writing He often runs. He skates on weekends, too. Because running and skating make him stronger and taller. He thinks that Enjoy Writing He often runs. He skates, too. He thinks that running and skating make him
14、stronger and taller. Enjoy Writing He doesnt like swimming because its too hard for him. but But he doesnt like swimming because its too hard for him. Enjoy Writing Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He likes practising football because he wants to join the school football te
15、am next term. Yao Ming is his hero, so he likes basketball best . He often runs. Also, he skates on weekends. He thinks that running and skating make him stronger and taller. But He doesnt like swimming because its too hard for him. This is Tonys sports life. likes likes likes like 词汇单一词汇单一 Enjoy Wr
16、iting like love have fun enjoy Enjoy Writing He loves practising football. like He likes practising football. love enjoy have fun He loves practising football. He enjoys practising football. He has fun practising football. Enjoy Writing Tonys Sports Life Tony is my good friend. He likes sports. He l
17、ikes practising football because he wants to join the school football team next term. Yao Ming is his hero, so he loves basketball best . He often runs. Also, he has fun skating on weekends. He thinks running and skating make him stronger and taller. But He doesnt enjoy swimming because its too hard for him. This is Tonys sports life. Tonys sports life 词汇丰富词汇丰富 the best passage Enjoy Writing Create your own passage
