1、 Whats today? Whats the weather like today? Monday May 14th，2017 Sunny A diary a. 人称： 1、格式： b. 时态： c. 写作顺序： 星期+日期（左上角）、天气（右上角）； 题目可写可不写（如写，在第一行正中间） 2、特点： 过去时态 事情发生的先后顺序 第一人称 Lets discuss. the Old Peoples Home took the bus to 书面表达: 请根据以下信息，写一篇日记。 arrived there were happy did a lot of things for them
2、cleaned the houses did some washing sang and danced for them played games together made and ate dumplings said goodbye to them Look at the pictures and retell the stories. We did a lot of things for them. We took a bus to the Old Peoples Home. We arrived there. The old people were very happy. We did
3、 a lot of things for them. We cleaned the house. We did some washing. We sang and danced for them. We played games together. We made and ate dumplings together. We said goodbye to them. 言之有物，切中题意言之有物，切中题意 语言准确多样，运用得体语言准确多样，运用得体 early in the morning、 forty minutes later 、when 、 first、 the whole morni
4、ng 、 then 、after that、finally 、 at 6:00； Early in the morning, we took a bus to the Old Peoples Home. Forty minutes later , we arrived there. The old people were very happy when they saw us. We did a lot of things for them. First, we cleaned the houses and did some washing. It took us the whole morn
5、ing. Then, we sang and danced for them. After that, we played games together. Finally, We made and ate dumplings together. At 6:30, We said goodbye to them. We took a bus to the Old Peoples Home. We arrived there. The old people were very happy. We did a lot of things for them. We cleaned the houses
6、. We did some washing. We sang and danced for them. We played games together. We made and ate dumplings together. We said goodbye to them. 英语文章结构英语文章结构 （三段式）（三段式） 开头小结开头小结(点明主题点明主题) 具体细节描写具体细节描写 结尾小结结尾小结(升华主题升华主题) 逻辑清楚，体现整体性逻辑清楚，体现整体性 It was a fine day today. My classmates and I decided to the Old P
7、eoples Home. Although we were tired，we all felt happy. We think it is a wonderful experience for us. And we will never forget today. Early in the morning, we took a bus there. Forty minutes later , we arrived there. The old people were very happy when they saw us. We did a lot of things for them. Fi
8、rst, we cleaned the houses and did some washing. It took us the whole morning to do these. Then, we sang and danced for them. After that, we played games together. Finally, We made and ate dumplings together. At 6:30, We said goodbye to them. Monday May 14th，2017 Sunny A visit to the Old Peoples Hom
9、e It was a fine day today. My classmates and I decided to the Old Peoples Home. Early in the morning, we took a bus there. Forty minutes later , we arrived there. The old people were very happy when they saw us. We did a lot of things for them. First, we cleaned the houses and did some washing. It t
10、ook us the whole morning to do these. Then, we sang and danced for them. After that, we played games together. Finally, We made and ate dumplings together. At 6:30, We said goodbye to them. Although we were tired，we all felt happy. We think it is a wonderful experience for us. And we will never forget today. How to write a diary? 格式 特点 行文 正确使用动词的过去式 1、复习日记体格式及写作要求。 2、仿写一篇日记。
